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Reviews for Yuleride

By : Ms_Figg
  • From chickaboo on December 23, 2007
    Gasp! I so knew that was going to happen as soon as she started getting all that "home" stuff. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From SilkySweetSatin on December 22, 2007
    ut's great Ilove the way you makeher face everything and realize that she wasn't meant for a live like that I can't wait to read more. Luv Sin!
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 22, 2007
    PS: I've been studying this Snape quite a bit at:

    http://www.half-bloodprince.org/snape_charsheet.php

    So I have a kind of template for him rather than writing him strictly from imagination.
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 22, 2007
    Lucy: You know, I've always rather thought that Snape was the way JKR saw him as opposed to Harry. Normally I take the view you do of him, there is something attractive. I used to date a guy named Edwing, and he had been burned in the face when he was a child and occasionally it would bubble up here and there. Everyone always said he was ugly, but I never saw it. He had intense eyes, and lord knows what else. heh heh. I could've been blinded by lust though. lol. Actually, I became used to the way he looked. We were friends for a couple of years before we became more. There is always something attractive about someone if you look deep enough. But I am taking the darker route this time, making his looks as well as his actions an issue and trying to discover is it actually a real issue. In other words, having fun. Most readers seem to still like him, which I think is wonderful. Canon Snapes need love too. ***
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  • From on December 22, 2007
    Can I just say one thing about canon Snape? It never seems to be mentioned, but I think it's really significant when imagining his appearance.
    Certainly he is unattractive, but I doubt he is really (ignore for a moment that he is not real) as ugly as he is made out in the books, and I'll tell you why.
    The books are from Harry's POV (I know it's not first person, but it's still seen, with a couple of exceptions, through his thoughts and eyes), and Harry HATES Snape. Of course he's going to be described in the worst possible way. I think that it's safe to assume that if the story is NOT seen in a third person limited Harry POV, that Snape could be described much more favorably (though still, perhaps, not exactly attractive), and still be in-cannon. He may have some rather nice features, but why would Harry notice those? Hermione might, and certainly Snape might (I say this because your stories, Ms. Figg, are almost always third person omniscient and rather impartial at that). So why not take advantage of this possibility, I say!
    At any rate, it's perfectly fine to imagine Harry as totally fair when it comes to appearance and therefore write Snape exactly as he is described in the books. After all, I've said it before: I love me a canon Snape. I just felt like pointing this out.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on December 21, 2007
    Oh my you are a wonder.

    I'm enjoying the read.

    Bless!
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  • From ANON - mizie on December 21, 2007
    BLOODY HELL BUT THIS IS GREAT!!! MORE PLEASE! WHY AM I WRITING IN CAPS? OH YEA, I GUESS I'M YELLING!! Happy Christmas and get well!
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  • From KarenLioncourt on December 21, 2007
    This was indeed very entertaining. Keep it up!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 21, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Go Go Go on December 21, 2007
    Oh, when will this girl get going? She doesn't even have to worry about the relationship yet! She should be able to tell, with brains like hers, that Ron isn't working. Dump him, go on an adventure, and let whatever happens happen with Severus. I'm eager to read more, and the way she's digging in her heels is making me perpetually frustrated. Perhaps if I glare impatiently long enough, I can impart some of my impulsivity on her through sheer force of will.

    Move you
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  • From drlincu on December 21, 2007
    I love this story. Please make this a long one. I know this is alot of nerve coming from someone who can only read delicious stories like this, but could you make this at least 100 chapters. I can tell this is going to be excellent!
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  • From Tenar10r on December 21, 2007
    Still good! (( hope you feel better soon))
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 21, 2007
    Great chapter! :D Hope you feel better soon.
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  • From MrsDeLay on December 20, 2007
    Once again MsFigg you have succeeded in getting me hooked. I have yet to read a story you have written that I didnt enjoy to the fullest. Please keep up the good work and I cant wait to see how Ron's going to react to whats going on here.

    Happy Holidays!!
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