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By : SickPuppy

From cravedom on November 01, 2008
Harry aniversary!!!!!

Holly crap I just had one of those weirds moments. I finished the chapter and was going to review (really I was) when I noticed there was a new chaper. How cool is that!

Any how I did not read the latest chapter because this chapter filled me with concern for Draco. I should probably be more concerned for Harry, Ginny and Sev but the situation seemed so unfair. Lucius just made Draco an accomplice to lord knows what and by doing so, placed Draco in a situation were he will have to possibly betray his father in order to save his own family. That started this chain reaction of dramatic thoughts in my head that almost made me call my sons to make sure they were being good. I know Draco's relationship with Lucius is not the best but they are still father and son and it is going to be hard to deal with.

Also I wonder what Draco's relationship is with Severus in this story. I know Lucius hates Severus but how does Draco feels about him?

Oh! On the previous chapter when Ginny is thinking about Harrys and Severus fatherly relationship I felt ashamed of cheering the guys on. This Ginny is too nice! And sweet and understanding... Are we wrong? I mean, Harry/Severus seems right but this girl has not done anything bad. Has she? Does she have a dark, dirty secret? Hmmm maybe she is a serial killer, there is not telling what she does on those trips...
Anyhow I'm going to read the next one.
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From tambrathegreat on November 01, 2008
Lovely scene between Harry and Severus. The reader can feel the deep affection each of the men has for the other. It is quite nice.

Lucius' plan seems to be going along swimmingly. I hope he doesn't succeed, what ever it is. It just doesn't seem fair that he wants retribution on Harry for actions his son took because of Lucius' affiliation an loyalty. Severus, well, he did betray the Dark Lord, as well he should. Though if anyone were to understand the need to be on the winning side, I think Lucius would. That alone would ameliorate some of Severus' culpability in Lucius' mind.

Great job as usual. Happy All Hallow's Day, and have a safe trip, Q.
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From tambrathegreat on November 01, 2008
Wow, what a Hallowe'en gift. Not, one, but two chapters. Lucius is a little crazed in this story. Poor guy doesn't really understand the meaning of reform, does he?

I do feel for both Draco and Narcissa. Lucius did drag them down with him. I hope things can get better for them. The little bit about Lucius rearranging the bottles to suit his view of the world was quite good. I think Draco's interpretation of actions is dead on. Thanks for the great chapter.

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From SuzieGeorge on November 01, 2008
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!! ^_^ #gets out party hat and cake#

Y'know, I kinda thought it was traditional to receive presents on your anniversary, not give them... Ah well, not that I'm complaining, since it means TWO whole chapters to read in one night! #beams#

I loved the interaction between Lucius and Draco - the (very) thinly veiled hostility and Draco charging him triple! #giggle# So Slytherin, ya gotta love it. And all those tantalising little hints as to Lucius' dastardly plot, designed to drive us batty trying to work out what y'all have planned... well since I'm already batty it's not really working but I like it nonetheless!

And the smut... #sighs happily# God it was so beautiful. The sign of a good story is when you become so immersed in the plot that you can practically feel what the characters feel, and you've definitely got that here. The desperation, the love, the need... It's painfully emotional and I for one adore it. And finding out that Lucius is adding Lucius-polyjuice to said dastardly plot mentioned above is just another wicked hint that's going to have me on the edge of my seat, holding my breath as I wait to find out just *what* he's got planned for our favourite couple. Hmm, maybe I should stop with the holding my breath thing, wouldn't wanna pass out and miss the next update! #grins#
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From SuzieGeorge on October 30, 2008
Well don't I feel properly chastened. OK, OK, so now that I've been beaten over the head... I mean informed of your desire for reviews ^_^ I shall make sure that I leave one after every chapter. I'm sure everyone else will too, after that scolding!

I loved the Sev-the-Christmas-Fairy bit - it bought to the fore a highly amusing mental picture.

I do rather think that your user name might be wrong... I'm thinking more along the lines of Goddesses of Angst rather than Queens! Srsly, it's heartbreaking reading what's going through Severus' mind, and knowing that it's only set to get worse, what with the inevitable fireworks when Ginny finds out and whatever devious nastiness that Lucius is plotting (dastardly wicked man that he is... #grin#) - I love each and every chapter and can't wait for the next update.

On another note, I do hope that your proper telling-off worked and that you get the reviews that you want and deserve, considering all your hard work!
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From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2008
great story!!! :)
more? pwetty pwease...:P
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From SamHill on October 29, 2008
Weeeee!! Another chapter has been posted!!

I was so excited to see this. And on such a day as this one, too. It's foggy and gloomy (no snow, though, 'cause I live along the California coastline) and not much is happening at work. How wonderful to find another chapter has been added to my favorite Snarry saga.

That said... Jeez, Ginny, could you stab the blade in just a little more. I mean, can't you just... I don't know, guess and be happy. Do you have to make me worry about your friggin' heart when it breaks upon realizing just what is going on between the men?!? And even if you are angry when you find out, can't you just... I dunno, accept it? I mean, Harry went from being unloved by his crappy relatives to having (well, first Ron and Hermione, but that's different) both you and Snape loving him. Please - oh please - tell me that you won't blame either one for that!

Harry - Seriously, dude, just effing tell her already, because this is only going to get worse. And Lucius is up to some bad shit. Do it while you still have the chance and the choice remains yours!! They said this was epilogue compliant... Okay, they didn't actually say that which means if you don't rectify this situation you might not get a brother and sister!!

Sev - You don't mind if I call you that, right? Look, if things don't work out for you and Harry, I'm just a phone call away ;)

Seriously, Q and A, you guys are awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I admit a bit of anxiety over what is to come, but I trust you both... to a certain extent. Please don't make cry!!

~FaeryQueen
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From ANON - Black Nightshade7 on October 29, 2008
Sorry, I didn't review earlier. I found your story about a week ago and I really love it. I really hope there will be a happy end for them. Because the situation right now seems to be a bit depressing for Severus. But it is really quite difficult to decide what to do....
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Best wishes:-)
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From ANON - magic on October 29, 2008
The comment about the father figure is too funny! Harry is so not considering Severus as a father figure.
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From ANON - Domino on October 29, 2008
I'm enjoying the story but the spaces are driving me insane. I think it's a long chapter and it's really just the spaces. Also it's kind of moving a little slow but maybe you guys have something planned. Keep up the good work.
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From Darkless on October 29, 2008
Awww, fluff-filled holiday feelings, secretly hiding uncertain angst and longing. Ain't holidays grand? Very waffy. :)
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From Jan on October 28, 2008
Oooooh, if only Ginny knew that it's not like a father figure that Harry looks upon Severus, but that of a lover... what would she say then if she knew??? I can't wait for that moment T_T

Please update chapter 65 soon ^_^

Jan

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From opy3332 on October 28, 2008
Sorry...I am one of those people that only reviews every couple chapters (usually cause I forget) I am reading, and I am loving it. Keep up the good work. The tension is building so well and you are doing such a great job. I know the proverbial shit is going to hit the fan and I cannot wait even as I am dreading it. Can't wait to read more
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From ANON - Amiyom on October 28, 2008
I love this story-- I'm wondering when the next twist will be!
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From ANON - catnona on October 28, 2008
Weee....this story gets better and better, I've been following it closely and eagerly await the next chapter. It is very well written, and your plots have kept me interested thus far, keep up the good work
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