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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From tambrathegreat on August 13, 2008
    Chapter 22:

    Has Harry been taking lessons from stone-age men on marriage? Really, getting married right out of school and not wanting her to work? What was he thinking? I'm with Snape on this one. Better clear out of the room before she explodes/kills Harry.

    Chapter 23:

    Harry, Harry, Harry. Shakes head mournfully. You are SO wrong about this.

    Chapter 24:

    Go Severus! Someone needed to tell Harry what a pig he was being. I loved the line: "...the great Harry Potter's brat factory." That made me laugh.

    Chapter 25:

    I like how you're slowly increasing Harry's dependance on Severus. His thoughts on not having Severus with him at the Quidditch match were really well written. I am glad you didn't let Harry dig in his heels too long on the whole work issue. He was being riddiculous, though I do understand that he wants a family desperately. He never had one before, and he sees Ginny as a way to get one.
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  • From ANON - Just me on August 12, 2008
    What a great story! Have been reading some real trash lately and this was like a warm sommer wind, just what I needed. The story feels real and you kept me up to 3 am in the morning, forgetting that I have to get up at 4.30 for work, to read it all. Every time that Severus and Harry is alone I keep waiting for Ginny to show up and for it all to come crashing down. *heart pounding* (Sry about any spell-mistakes, I'm swedish really) Many hugs and good luck with this amazing story. Plz update soon! /Just me
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  • From ANON - Dani on August 12, 2008
    Awe... Sweet even though its just mostly a sex scene! I loved it! You made his first seemingly very enjoyable! Keep up the excellent work!
    ~dani
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  • From PantherRain on August 12, 2008
    Omg, I got so wrapped up in what's going on I'd forgotten the rest of the story that happened before and I just went back and read the prologue and where it all starts is obviously in the future because it mentions Albus and all three of the children which means that he stays with Ginny and so of course she couldn't die and now I'm just dying to see how they all work things out!

    Oh yes, and thank you sweet ones for our wonderful boys finally going all the way!
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on August 11, 2008
    That was so good! ...Now I feel terrible for enjoying the adultry!!!
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 11, 2008
    that was so hot wow wow wow wow finally great job guys
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 11, 2008
    will they ever get what they want and what happens when they do? poor ginny wouldn't it be perfect if they could all just share
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 11, 2008
    amazing story i wonder what lucius has up his sleeve
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  • From ANON - Rylan on August 11, 2008
    Yes, ma'ams, very much worth the wait! Please, Angst, please please please with warm chocolate on top, please do not relegate future sex scenes to off-stage - that would be cruel and unusual punishment, above and beyond the heaps of angst which we accept as devoted fans.

    See, Angst, see the crazy fan giving a nice review? Here it is: oh . . . ahhh . . . uh-huh . . . uhmmmm . . . oh, my . . . *sigh*

    Ta!
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  • From Jan on August 11, 2008
    HOT! Very yummy chapter!!!

    Please update chapter 53 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From ANON - Dragonfly7 on August 11, 2008
    Roughly 40 angst-filled chapters to admit they like each other - check
    Another 10 spent on pins and needles before they have great sex - check
    And I'm still wondering how Ginny is going to react to all of this.
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  • From dirtydarella on August 11, 2008
    -Chapter 49 and 50-

    Oh, why must the world be so cruel to keep Harry and Severus appart?!
    XD

    Fantastic chapters, I'm really interested in what's going to happen now in their relationship. And what's to become of Ginny.

    I love the way you guys pant the inner turmoil of both Harry and Severus, it has really developed their characters well. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dani on August 11, 2008
    Awe... I am so completely into your story! I have no idea how you are going to get rid of Ginny or however you're going to work out getting Harry and Severus together exclusivly... I'm so glad you're writing the story and not me! I would be SO confused! I have absolutely fallen in love with this story and I look forward to the next chapter more than I would like to admit to! Please update again soon! I can't wait!
    ~dani
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 10, 2008
    wow!!!
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 10, 2008
    my sis-in-law sent this to me and even though i am more into harry/draco this is really good sorry i havent written anything before now but i couldn't stop reading long enough great job so far guys
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