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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From PantherRain on August 10, 2008
    I might be a little sadistic... but I can't wait to see what Lucius has in store for them. Hopefully it'll push them to figure things out between the three of them.
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  • From ANON - miss poodle on August 10, 2008
    Oh, I just love this story! please update very soon!
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  • From ANON - MissGirl on August 10, 2008
    So many sexy chapters! I can't wait to see what Lucius has in store for them. And it's only a matter of time before Harry breaks or Ginny figures it out.
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  • From Leentjef on August 10, 2008
    wow very very good
    i was a little behind with reading but these new chapters are awsome
    keep up the graet work and postsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    Chapter 20:

    Ah, randy young men. Harry really must have studied the manuals to make Ginny happy on this visit.

    I'm glad to see Ginny will have a good relationship with SEverus. I loved the "pied au terre." Anytime you use a French phrase to describe something sexual, its just amusing. YOu think, oh those French people... Good job on the chapter.

    Chapter 21:

    I like how you have Severus' blame shifting from Harry to Shackelbolt. It shows just how far they've come in their relationship, that Harry is not the brunt of Severus' anger.

    Good job on the Weasley interaction. I like that Severus thinks he might be able to trust her, and that Ginny thinks she might call him Severus some day. The bit at the end where Severus rubbed smut off Harry's cheek was very sweet, and says more about how he feels than he will ever acknowledge.


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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    Chapter 17:

    Okay, so Harry was insensitive, but Severus really needs to understand that the boy is grasping for anyone to hang onto that knew his parents. All of the Marauders are dead, and Snape is the only person who remembered his mother. Poor kid. I do feel for him in this situation. That part where Harry confessed his need made me cry. Jerks.

    Chapter 18:

    What the heck? No Ginny bashing, but you can pick on poor Lucius. No, that was a good chapter. I liked the tension you created from the moment Harry noticed something amiss to the end.

    Chapter 19:

    Severus' thoughts were a reasonable assumption, but he should have asked before jumping. That is what has characterized their relationship from the beginning. Both of them have made assumptions about the other. I like how you handled that bit of dialogue.

    Good observation on what Harry was to Severus.

    I like how you mirrored their thoughts about each other.

    And then the detente ends. Grimmauld place was one of the worst choices to make, but really the only place that might be safe. I liked the little hidden smile at the end.

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  • From ANON - MissGirl on August 09, 2008
    So happy!!! I had this wonderful story bookmarked at chapter 26 and I just realized you are now at chapter 50!! Wow, thanks for all the updates. I can't believe Sev is still living with them though I understand he wants to be close to Harry. But isn't he just torturing himself?
    I can't believe Harry wanted to polyjuice some whore into his mom, just for Sev. I mean, it's his mother.
    But anyway, on to the story. Got a couple more chapters to read. This story is going into my favorites.
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  • From ANON - Lili A. on August 09, 2008
    Another amazing group of chapters! The level of angst and confliction of feelings within each chapter is an odd balance of frustration and satisfaction and still is nowhere near gratuitous. Every chapter just builds more and more suspense and I just can't help thinking that Harry will tell Ginny each time. Will he eventually come clean about his indiscretions?

    Lili
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 09, 2008
    Chapter 15:

    Okay this is the third time I've tried to review this chapter. Stoopid computer and its stoopid problems. I liked the chapter and how Harry and Severus' relationship is slowly changing.

    Chapter 16:

    I loved how touched Severus was by the gifts.

    The proposal and sex scene was wonderful. Thank you for not making Harry a sex god on the first go.

    That he asked Severus for advice was hilarious. Severua tells him to get a "Book of Advice" how Victorian is that? I'm glad he finally unbent and gave him some advice. The father comment was nice. I don't know how that will work into your later plot. I'll have to see, but it does lend a complexity to their relationship that wasn't there before.

    Chapter 16:

    Kingsley gave Harry some good advice about not going off like a hothead. He's done that too much in the past. I'm sorry to see that Kingsley had to cover for Harry's mouth. He was right to dress him down. It was also nice to see Harry realize that what Kingsley said mirrored what Snape told him for years.


    Good for Harry too. He should pull Severus up by the short-hairs for wanting to give up on himself.


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  • From ANON - catnona on August 09, 2008
    I have really enjoyed reading this story so far, the drama and suspense has kept me waiting for the next chapter, keep them coming. The character development has been done really well, and the tension is written well too.
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  • From ANON - Haru on August 09, 2008
    Hello!
    What a great story! Usually I hate cheating and betray, but your story is so different (in this aspect), it got my attention for sure.
    Will Ginny discover their love? Maybe she already know (women always know) and doesn
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on August 08, 2008
    You love to torment us so...I still think their asses.
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  • From Jan on August 08, 2008
    Wow, that was a close one! Poor Harry, a conflicting heart could be a very painful thing to experience.

    Please update chapter 52 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Dragonfly7 on August 08, 2008
    I keep wondering how they are going to tell Ginny, too. Though I have to wonder if she's smarter than they think. What does she go to Hermione to talk about?
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  • From ANON - Dani on August 08, 2008
    Awe... I SOOOO love this story!!!! I was kind of unhappy after that one chapter that everyone though Ginny had died and then you brought her BACK! Anyway, I still love it so its ok! I am fondly looking forward to the next update! Is there anyway you could contact me when that happens? Let me know please!
    ~dani
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