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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy

From ANON - MrsComer on March 02, 2010
MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!! I can NOT wait for the next chapter!! You would think that with all that has been going on in my life I wouldn't want more drama and angst, but this story has actually made me a lot calmer and happier! I just love how you made it all work. I hope Ginny and Harry and Severus all work it out but I also don't want Harry to give up the baby..but from the first chapter (or the prologue I think?) I'm guessing he keeps it...anywhoo, I know I can't decide what happens, but i know you all said you wanted reviews. Sorry I didn't review before but I actually ended up reading all this today, and Swore I would review when I got to the end. I would LOVE to be on your update list for any and all of your stories as I now believe you are geniuses! lol. Anywhoo, thank you for you time listening to my ramblings, and thank you for something to take up my time haha.
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From ANON - Eskimo on February 28, 2010
You guys are gods(or goddesses). I stumbled onto this story about an hour ago, and I now bow to your superior writing skills. This is quite possibly the best written fan fiction I've read, and certainly the best that I've read in a very long time. I can't wait to read the rest of this (and I think I heard mention of a sequel) but I was feeling guilty about not reviewing, hence this review. Anyways, just wanted to express my thanks for your story, I shall now hurry back to it ^^.
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From ANON - nekoyoka on February 25, 2010
OK, I just read the entire of this story in 3 days. My eyes are still red and raw from crying over the chapters surrounding Severus' death. But I still may have to find one of you and hold you hostage until the other agrees to start the next chapter. I can't begin to guess which sentence gives you so much trouble, but I appreciate all the trouble y'all(yes, I'm southern) do through to write this story. I would ask to be put on the mailing list, but I get so much junk mail that it's difficult enough to sort through, so I will be waiting tirelessly for the next chapter.

-nekoyoka
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From ANON - Morgana on February 25, 2010
Love the story. One of the few I've found were Ginny is true to her character from the early books, not a damsel in distress who steps to the side for Harry's every whim. I'm truly enjoying the way you two play with the characters and their personalities. I just finished the seventy nine chapters in about four days and can't wait for more. Hope RL treats you kind and i will be watching for updates.
Happy Writing,
Morgana
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From ANON - Yashida on February 24, 2010
Sorry, I thought the e-mail address I typed in the 'Email column' would actually show.

Could you please add me to the 'new-chapter' alert, or whatever it's called, so I would get a notification when the next chapter is up? My address is hiromilong@gmail.com

I'd so hate to miss out on it.

Thank you!

~Yashida
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From ANON - Yashida on February 24, 2010
Sorry, I thought the e-mail address I typed in the 'Email column' would actually show.

Could you please add me to the 'new-chapter' alert, or whatever it's called, so I would get a notification when the next chapter is up?

I'd so hate to miss out on it.

Thank you!

~Yashida

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From ANON - Yashida on February 24, 2010
Wonderful story!

I absolutely love it!

And I'm so curious as to how things between Harry and Ginny will be resolved! After all, the prologue did said 'Harry's three children' and I don't think it very plausible for Harry to end up with an as of yet still unknown lover that has not been part of the family he had with Severus and Ginny in your story. So, I'm looking forward to read how you'll continue the plot!
Perhaps Ginny will realise that people are honestly capable of loving more than one person at a time and also realise that since the amount of love a person can feel is in no way limited this means Harry doesn't love one of them any less than the other?
Oh, so curious!

But I will (try and) wait patiently for another chapter to be posted.

In any case, thanks for writing this marvellous story in the first place. It is always a joy to find a well-written, thoroughly-plotted-out story to read and yours definitely fits this description!

Please keep writing!

~Yashida
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From traeumend on February 23, 2010
Okay, in the last 48 hours I've read your story from beginning to the last updated chapter. I haven't left a review until now, so I thought I'll give it a try now. Firstly, I really love how you let the story evolve slowly. I would get into detail but I think you know your plot better than I. Still it is really a change, normally, Harry and Severus would have sprung into the bed, once Severus was recovered from Narginis bite, which is kind of nice but shallow.

Well, I'll try to give feedback in order to the storyline but I'll most certainly fail. Nonetheless here it comes.
I adored it when Harry manipulated Hermione into leaving Spinner's End. *grin*
I really liked it, when Snape told Harry what a idiot he was being, when he forbid Ginny to work.
I love your Ginny. You gave her a character and defined her in a way that made her extremely likeable. Moreover, I liked her interaction with Severus and how they talked. I found it sad that you didn't have a scene just between Ginny and Severus while Harry and Severus were already lovers. As concerning Severus' and Harry's affair I found Severus appeared a little cold in regard to Harry's cheating on Ginny with him.

Nonetheless, I even found your H/G not only tolerable but bordering on good, which in my case is saying something as I normally abhor that paring. In your story, I could really understand Harry's conflict, because it was so clear that he loved both Ginny and Severus. I felt my moral was challenged, because Harry and Ginny are married. Normally, I root for Ginny to finally be gone, but in this case I was torn, because both should be allowed to have Harry.
What I find sad is that there is so little interaction between Harry and James or Harry, James and Severus. James always seems to be just with Ginny.*pout*

I think I fell in love with the story when you made that great connection between the prologue
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From ANON - tropicalilith on February 20, 2010
Ok, I have read the whole story in just a couple of days and now... now I'm crying like a baby, you both really are the Queen of Angst! :-)
I really liked what you did with the cannon, hundred times better than DH epilogue, that always made me angry because of the unfairness with Severus. I'm not asking questions about the final chapters because I like to be surprised. Great job! hugs from the tropical Panama.
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From dragonfly8605 on February 20, 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to hate you so much. Your story has kept me away from my own and my heart is pounding. This story is so amazing. I just absolutely love all your twists and turns. I 'm just not sure I know that words that can truly do justice to just how awesome and amazing this story is. So I'm going to shut post my review and get back to my own business before I sound even more like a dumbass. ooh and I agree SEVERUS MUST NEVER BE ON THE BOTTOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - foryou4life on February 18, 2010
I had to chuckle, I was listening to the soundtrack for Cabaret and it started playing Two Ladies at the same time I started reading chapter 61 where Harry dreamt that he had told Ginny everything. I thought it was oddly ironic :-p. I love this story so far. Keep up the great work :-) if you'd add me to the update list I'd love it.
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From Morrigayne on February 18, 2010
I think you wrote Ginny brilliant, straight from the beginning of the story..and i love the story because of the twists. i thought to give the story a try this morning and now..well...

The only thing on the story which gives me the pain are the last few chapters. Was it not worse enough that Rowling killed Snape?

Oh the good ones die too early *sniffles*
And i was sooo happy you brought him back...and that in such a clever way...and now *wails*

I wanted to give you some chocolates, but now i need it all for myself to cheer me up again
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From fancypantsdylan on February 18, 2010
OMG, poor Harry, poor Ginny and poor Severus, this must be so heart breaking especially for him, because he can't defend himself properly from a portrait and Ginny, she's so hurt and confused and Harry, I know it was wrong but you can't help who you love, he just had the unfortunate bad luck to love two people, people in some ones complete opposites and in others so very much a like, perhaps that's why, I don't know. I just hope that somehow they find a way back to each other (Ginny and Harry) cause although I'm definitely not a fan of this couple, the way you've written Ginny I actually like her (hold your tongue Sarah :D ).

Absolutely fabulous chapter and I have no idea what line you two were fighting over, because for me, the chapter was perfect.
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From ANON - suzuki1969 on February 17, 2010
My choice is:
"How important she was to him, now and always. She was his rock, in ways Severus hadn't been, and he didn't think he could face life without her."
I think that the main way Harry ever thought of Severus, always, was exactly as the rock that would hold him no matter what.
I'm still sad about Severus' death... I don't know if I'll ever forgive you... :)
Nice work though, the thought of SS trying to touch Harry and being stopped by the "portrait barrier" broke my heart.

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From tambrathegreat on February 17, 2010
Wow, that review at the top of the page is a good example of things NOT to say to an author, not matter how miffed you are at their plot. Also, you have to love a bad reviewer (AKA flamer) that is too chicken shit to leave a review that is signed. Alexia, if you didn't like the story, you should have just moved on. There is no need for you to try to discourage writers who obviously have talent. Please, go read some mindless PWP that has no plot and leave the real reading to us adults.

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