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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From dirtydarella on August 06, 2008
    - Chapter 45 and 46 -

    Yay, the long awaited smut! Hmm....
    Well, they certainly seemed to enjoy it, didn't they? :D

    Now that they've given into some of that built up carnal desires, maybe they'll start working on their emotional ones. *crosses fingers*

    Excellent as always!
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  • From SuzieGeorge on August 06, 2008
    SMMMMMMUUUUUUTTTT! Woot woot! ^_^ Wow, had *loads* of chapters to catch up on and DAMN were they good! Kudos for sheer volume and speed too, was amazed at how much there was to read in such a short amount of time. Love t he angst from poor Harry, and tho I love Snarry, gotta feel a teensy bit sorry for Ginny... Just a tiny bit tho! #Shivers# Not sure if I'm looking forward to seeing what Lucius is planning for the boys or not, though I've no doubt that it will be as brilliant as the rest of the story so far!
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  • From PantherRain on August 06, 2008
    Finally! *grin* I love you, you know that, right? I actually read this at school (bad me) and wished I coulda logged to review.

    And I just realized... I didn't clear the cache... oops.
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  • From Jan on August 05, 2008
    Yummy!

    Please update chapter 48 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on August 05, 2008
    Great chapter! the Infidelity won't last forever right?
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  • From isisfiredancer on August 05, 2008
    gack goldfish!
    only sev would say that at such a time!
    Just had a monster reading session.... I LOVE IT!!
    I have been on the edge of my seat for so long! You almost give me what I want and then you take it all away!
    Loving the warm fuzzies at the min and yet I sense a very large helping of angst, torment, pain and anger just over the horizon...
    Poor guys they're in for one rough ride.... or maybe not if preparation goes to plan...
    *rofl* ahahahaha
    Please keep it up! *hugs you both and hands over cookies*
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  • From Lionessmon on August 05, 2008
    Hey
    I just came across this fic and I am writing to say that you guys are doing a fantastic job. Well Done to the both of you. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter soon. ^_^
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  • From 4872luk on August 05, 2008
    'Special delivery for Mr Potter, sign here please.'
    'Oooooooh, I wonder what it is.' Opens package. 'Box 1 of 50. One case of angst and a box of turmoil. Pain and heartache to follow. Oh goody!'

    Poor Harry. We love confused Harry. He is so adorable when he gets all guilty. Shame on him though, thinking of Sev whilst sleeping and ... with Ginny. Tut, tut, tut and him with a baby and everything!

    Sev is definately showing his Slytherin side. Sneaky, devious and two faced. Harry on the other hand is being very Gryfindor and finding it a bit tricky to reconcile all that is going on in his life.

    Your writing style makes Harry very believable and really takes the reader on a rollercoaster of emotions. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and the next installment of anguish and torment. Don't be too hard on him though, he needs a little bit of sunshine every now and again. Perhaps the gorgeous Lucius riding to the rescue...? Ok, thought not but it was worth a try!
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  • From 4872luk on August 05, 2008
    Ooooh, the plot thickens! I am very disappointed that the investigation has been stalled but given your nom de plume I really shouldn't be surprised! We all know who would be likely to get at the minister for magic... Well I think I do but if all my hopes come true then it will actually be a red herring and really Lucius is involved in a completely different plot that doesn't involve Harry at all. I know, I know, I'm deluding myself but I can't help it! I don't mind Lucius been devious and sneaky and distinctly Slytherin but I do much prefer it when he is on Harry's side.

    I froze in guilty horror when Harry and Sev were spotted.This is SO not good news for them. There is a truck load of angst being shipped as we speak. Next chapter here I come.
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  • From 4872luk on August 05, 2008
    Ooooh the frustration! I think you two are secret teases (well not so secret any more!) Harry and Sev were just getting to the good bit and Wham!, well not wham at all really. The lack of wham was very much noted. Anywayz, other than my frustrated voyerism, fab chapter!

    Just one tiny little question: do you have to may Lucius evil? I love Lucius and am an ardent Harry/Luc fan. Could you not please make him have a few redeeming features? He's just so sexy and beautiful and misunderstood. He is the ultimate bad boy. Pretty, pretty please with sugar, spinkles and a cherry on top?

    Anyway sorry for the late review of this chapter. I havn't been online in a couple of days. I'm now off to R&R the other two chapters you have posted.
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  • From cravedom on August 05, 2008
    Wao! Where did all this intrigue come from? Good lord a lot of stuff happened in those two chapters! Well there will be not more complaining that is going too slow. Holy crap, my heart!

    I mentioned before that the story was getting better and better but honestly the twist with the student noticing Severus and Harry makes it so exciting is crazy. That is too good for Lucius to pass, I am almost afraid to see what happens. The sad thing is that the boys will probably get in trouble without even accomplishing the deed, so cruel. I love it when you torture us!



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  • From ANON - Amiyom on August 05, 2008
    I really love this story. Harry's confusion and angst is just delicious. Can't wait until he gives into Severus! Nice job!
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  • From ANON - magic on August 05, 2008
    Harry and Severus are in trouble. Lucius will know about them. How long will it take for Ginny to find out the truth about them? Harry may love both, but he will have to choose someday or the guilt will consume him.
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on August 05, 2008
    damn.. why is it always that people connected to harry potter who stutter turn out to be evil? >_< lol thank you once again for updating! Poor Ginny T-T she's so understanding about everything that harry can get away with cheating... that really sucks... well, awesome writing as always! please update soon! ^_^
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on August 05, 2008
    man harry needs to decide if he wants snape or not! grrr..poor snape! i feel bad for him!

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