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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jan on July 31, 2008
    Interesting!

    Chapter 38 please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2008
    FYI Anon means anonimous reviewer :)
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  • From salparadise on July 31, 2008
    gahhh i was ready to scream at you for that little stunt you pulled...but you guys are forgiven because of harry's thoughts at the end. poor boy, he's trying to do the right thing, and will probably just end up making things worse. perhaps though, this may force harry and snape into a much needed confrontation/conversation? we'll see. i'm always surprised with the directions this story takes, but i'm never disappointed. please, please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - magic on July 31, 2008
    Harry is so in denial! he doesn't want to think of why he is feeling that way. He doesn't want to see the truth. I don't think Severus will appreciate Harry's idea to have sex with someone looking like Lily.
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  • From SamHill on July 30, 2008
    So, I know that I, like, *just* left a review, but then I went and read all the other ones and felt the need to write again.

    Ginny: I love Ginny. I love her spunk, her fire, her strength. And I get why Harry would freak out about her wanting to be her own woman (chapters 22-24?). He's spent his whole life being what everyone else does (or doesn't, in the case of the Dursleys) wants and suddenly his mission is over and his future isrightfuckingthere. Of course he wants it all and he wants it now. He's never truly been selfish up until then. He did, afterall, die for an entire Wizarding World he had known nothing about for longer than he had been in it. Everyone has their moments.

    As for what I said earlier about Ginny and my thoughts on how I think she would be accepting of him having a relationship with Snape. Ginny was the youngest of seven kids and while that *could* have meant that she got lost in the crowd, she also the only girl. For that, she stood out. So she's always had affection and attention. But she's also aware of Harry's past and his lack thereof in those departments. She can't offer him what she was describing. Sure, she could use polyjuice, but then she'd be looking like someone else, or perhaps she could use a muggle/magical device (my friend sells vibrators, by-the-by), but it's not the same. And if that's what he needs, the ability to submit to someone else who would actually be strong enough to dominate him and not hurt him, then I think she would let him do it because the truth is, humans *are* capable of loving more than one person. If we weren't, *none* of us would remain in relationships after we had children and we'd only be able to have one at a time. I'm not saying that one man should have tweny wives (that's excessive), but I think a threesome could work in that dynamic. However, as my friend (whose name is Katie and shall hereon be referenced as such) can attest, I have a very different opinion on sexual orientation than a lot of my friends. I am, of course, always willing to discuss it with and(every)one who cares to... You know how to find me (hint: check earlier reviews!)

    Thanks again and sorry to monologue!

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2008
    I am really hoping for that light at the end of the tunnel, the silver lining so to speak, and as long as in my heart I can for a time believe that happiness might come, I can convince myself that I am not quite as broken up over these events as I find myself being. Great story, don't break my heart.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 30, 2008
    Go Hermione! And Go Harry more! That was well written, the flow was good and fast-paced. Pomfrey and her interference was a good tension reliever.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 30, 2008
    God I HATE Rita Skeeter. You write that evil b-- ah, witch well. She should have died in the war along with Umbridge. Now, since you left the evil cliffie at the end of the last chapter, I have to cut this review short and read the next chapter. Darn you and your good storytelling.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 30, 2008
    I think Harry is being a little too hard on himself. Dumbledore really put him up to a lot of his misadventures, whether Harry knew it or not. Ginny is going to be a calming presence for Harry. Ron's reaction was classic Ron. He doesn't think before he speaks and is always out to get Slytherins. Idiot.
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  • From SamHill on July 30, 2008
    It's so odd for me to read het now, as I've been going on mostly slash for, well, a long time. It was terrifically written, though. Almost made me miss it...

    As for this whole "natural progression" thing; I love that there's a slow build up and I love your Ginny. I hate the Ginny-bashing stories (and I hope I'm not insulting anything that's already been written). What she said about what it's like to be possessed and filled, I have a story that I'm working on with a friend that says the same thing. Of course, it's chock full of OCs and Harry's sleeping with Draco on the side (Ginny knows and is cool). My point? I can't tell if that's the way you're going to go, where Ginny accepts a relationship between Harry and Snape or if you're going to kill her off (which would actually make me sad, but is still better than her being evil).

    Thank you for adding me to the update list!!

    P.S. On a side note, the collaborative story that my friend and I are working on is done in gmail docs. That way we can **shocked gasp** work on it while at work without having to install aim or other such messenger services. Just thought I'd share. I hope someone finds your story and does some artwork for it. That would be awesome!!

    Cheers and thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Rylan on July 30, 2008
    you. are. EVIL!! Wicked, wicked wenches! Although I must say that I'm on to you two - as soon as you started referring to the 2nd character as 'other', I figured it had to be Ginny instead of our delicious Severus. Queens of "Angst" ?? Oh yeah, but not just angst for the characters, ya'll must truly get off on torturing your devoted readers! *hmph!*

    As usual, very well written, and continues to be extremely addictive. Obviously I'm becoming a masochist, because I keep coming back for more, and accepting that Snarry isn't going to happen for at least four or five more chapters. Although *narrows eyes suspiciously* you wicked women may decide to string us along for ten torturous chappies before providing satisfaction for us. Us??!! What about Harry??!! What about Snape??!! Arghh! *witholding chocolate* Those poor boyz. I wonder if I can talk them into visiting my computer for a while . . . *checks the stock of lube* Hmmm.

    Ta
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  • From ANON - Dragonfly7 on July 30, 2008
    You keep putting in teaser scenarios to get me all excited, and then it is something completely different. I keep grabbing the hair by my temples and going, "GAAHH!" in exasperation.

    And would you please add me to the update list? Thankies.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 30, 2008
    I like Harry's thoughts on Dumbledore and how he used both of them. It did seem like Dumbledore used Snape up and just discarded him after he was through. Ginny saying Harry was her family is sweet. I really like her fiery temperment. Good job.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 30, 2008
    Oh, I think I'm going to enjoy reading this very much. It looks like you take cannon and set it on its ear. I'm off to the first chapter.


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  • From ANON - rose on July 30, 2008
    I was wrong, I admitt it! It did work, that's so funny. My point was only that sometimes authors don't like it when the readers can seem really pushy, and I guess that can go for the reviewers as well. But I am very happy that people are reviewing your story because it really is well written and the charactesrs are very realistic. Keep up the great work!
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