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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From ANON - Akatryele on July 29, 2008
    yay! Things are getting good now! I can't wait for the next onslaught of updates.^^ You guys are great.
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  • From SamHill on July 29, 2008
    I'm almost certain that I've reviewed before, but I've been away for a bit and only just saw the updates. Amazing. You're doing wonderful with the story and believe me, I appreciate how much you've written. Are you writing as you go, or is it all actually written and it's being beta'd and then edited? I look forward to the next update!!

    P.S. Could you please add me to your update list?? faeryqueen07@gmail.com Thank you!!
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  • From ANON - Cat on July 29, 2008
    I'm not one to leave reviews but since you two were so nice as to leave two chapters then I decided I would leave one. First off let me say that Harry/Snape stories are not my cup of tea, I really don't read them (more of a Lily/Snape fan), but I found myself drawn into this pairing for guilty pleasure. I'm very picky when it comes to the fanfiction I read and I have to say I'm glad I gave your story a chance. I really enjoy it and I look forward to every chapter. I also like how the build up to relationship takes a bit. I also like how Snape is portrayed (I can't take any Harry Potter fanfiction that depicts him as truly evil, I just can't do it, yes he's quite the schmuck but not truly evil). Thank You for writing this story and I look forward to future chapters.
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  • From ANON - evy on July 29, 2008
    I love this story but please get on with geting harry and snape together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2008
    I'm happy that the story is moving on and am enjoying it but a little confused as to what caused the change. Surely, it isn't just lack of sex?
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  • From ANON - sam on July 29, 2008
    wonderful as always......kinda short but still a good surprise..... im so happy that harry is FINALLY catching up! cant wait for the smut!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dani on July 29, 2008
    Alright! I was insanely mad after the last chapter, but you may have redeemed yourself some in this one... Just a small bit though! After the last chapter (I thought that it was the end... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!) I was quite upset (understandably!). Anyway... How long do you plan to keep my favorite pair apart? I know your working up to it and I'm trying to be patient, but I really don't like Ginny anyway... not even in cannon... Please rush in with some really great Harry/Sev soon. Please!?!?
    ~dani
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  • From ANON - mercedes on July 29, 2008
    yay! thank you so much for updating twice! *hugz* these two chapters are great! lol finally harry's starting to think that way! took him long enough! no I'm kidding, i know it was necessary to the plot and character development to make it take this long. you guys really are doing a great job of pacing it so that the emotions the characters display feel real. good job! i wish i could write half as well as you guys! I can't wait for the next chapter! let's see, was that over 25 words? *looks up and starts counting* yups! kk! see ya next chappie!
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on July 28, 2008
    you had my hope sky-high that ginny was out of the picture (mean, yes, but i luv me some snarry), and then you crushed them like a bug, and now im psyched that harry is FINALLY starting to get it. most awesome. cant wait to see if you drag the UST out and make the boys suffer in their requited-unrequited love, or if ginny finds out! *evil cackle* write more!
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  • From ANON - Dragonfly7 on July 28, 2008
    The two of you are incredibly evil for making me think Ginny died. Stringing me along like that...thank you for the two big chapters in one day.
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  • From kalaway on July 28, 2008
    *grr* I can't believe you didn't kill her! I'm glad the baby didn't die, but she just makes things messier and meaner! Ah well, poor Sev
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  • From kalaway on July 26, 2008
    gah! Finally! I knew 20 chapters ago that she was gonna die! Sad that the baby died too though. Harry's so gushy!
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  • From ANON - Kalera Ivy on July 26, 2008
    Usually, I come to AFF for purely smut and look to other sites such as FF.net for my novel length reads but for some reason, this story had drawn me in and I'm so glad that I contnued to read it, even without any Snarry smut coming for a very long time. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Now for the actual review, I like the fact that the relationship between Harry/Snape is evolving slowly. It's obvious that Harry cares for him a great deal and it's nice to see a Snape with some type of morals. He's willing to choke up his own needs and desires, just to be make sure that Harry is happy with his new family. Usually, when it comes to Harry/Ginny, I'm not the biggest fan in the world but I wouldn't dare wish this on either her or the baby. I hope everything turns out all right...for everyone, at the end.

    Please don't forget to send an story alert. I don't have an account on AFF and I would hate to miss the rest of the practical brillance that is ATYLB.
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  • From SuzieGeorge on July 25, 2008
    Gah! #sobs# Poor Harry T_T So very sad and angsty and brilliant... You guys rock. Hope Q has a nice holiday! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Faith on July 25, 2008
    First off -- yes! Please add me to your list of update-loving fans! I just discovered this story and decided to wait until the final chapter to review, thinking that I should get everything all out at once. Besides, too many words that are all flattery and no meat are empty and uninspiring, or so I've found. ^^ Now to sort through my notes.

    I enjoyed thoroughly that this story sticks to the canon. I was so disappointed to know that Rowling wouldn't be writing any more about my beloved characters. I've been hoping that a good writer (in your case, writers) would get a bug and choose to write this sort of thing. You have a very professional style, as well as views on the interaction and personality of the characters. In fact, I'm such a fan of your style itself that I'd love to know if either of you have done any published works. Mayhaps, if you have, could I have a list to look up?

    As I got further into the story, about chapter 18, I think, I really felt that the story and the emotions felt believable. All this silly tripe about Harry and Snape suddenly being in love is ridiculous. Emotions that are true take time to build up, especially with a past such as theirs. If only all writers were as sensible and capable of fluid storylines as you are...

    There was one point in the story that I was disappointed, but it was very small. As fantastic as the first 22 chapters were, the 23rd and 24th were rather...different? It seemed almost as though someone else entirely was writing it. Harry was a complete jerk who didn't deserve to have a girlfriend for a short while there. I bet the Ginny bashers mentioned in your Author's Notes were very annoyed by how much of an independent woman she proved herself to be. That aside, you ended it very well with Snape's fatherly advice. Just strange that Harry would be so surprisingly lacking in modern views after having known Hermione for so long, with her S.P.E.W.

    Fantastic job on the last two chapters I read! I was very eager to know what was going to happen and extremely glad I got to this story *after* your most recent update. Cliffhangers are so...wrong! XD I found the style in which you wrote this last chapter making me want to skip ahead to find out what the hell happened, but in a good way, and at least it's a break from the mold the rest fit into. The quirk where Snape couldn't find the potions was great; doesn't it seem that life always happens that way? The only time you can't find something is when it's right in front of your face, you really need it, or in this case, both at once.

    All in all, this may very well be the best fanfic I've found on this whole website, and I'm happy I found it in the Snape/Harry category. I'll be checking your profile to see if there are any other delicious treats lurking around. It's readily apparent exactly how much time and effort you put into what you do, and please, keep it coming! It would really be a horrifying shame for you to stop because people are too lazy to click the R&R button. ; ;

    Faith

    P.S. What exactly *is* Severitis?
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