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Reviews for All That You Leave Behind

By : SickPuppy
  • From ANON - theDragonfly7 on July 15, 2008
    Just read all of this in one sitting. You are working up to the slash agonizingly slowly, and chapter 30 was one hell of a cliffie.
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on July 15, 2008
    i can understand why some readers might not like this. strict adherence to canon makes a hp/ss fic a tough one to write. however, while some of potter's characterizations annoy me (much as JKR's did, btw), you've done a great job of filling in the gap between the last chapter of DH and the epilogue with severus surviving. this particular dynamic between hp and ss isnt one ive seen too often, and i enjoy the spin on the love triangle that has developed. its original (at least, as original as fanfic gets), and its intriguing. im looking forward to your next chapters and seeing where you take this!
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  • From cravedom on July 15, 2008
    Darn I knew this was going to happen but is still sad. I was hoping the baby would make it; will he/she? Well I am ready to start crying, next chapter is going to be really sad for sure and I have the feeling Sev is going to feel guilty. Go on make me suffer.
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  • From Jan on July 15, 2008
    YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YYYYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!! You may think me evil and heartless, but if Ginny dies, you've just truly made my day!

    Please update chapter 32 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Sephone on July 14, 2008
    Having just rediscovered this story, and poured myself into finishing it (up to this point) I had to dropa note to tell you how much I am loving it. Angery Harry is a character I love to hate, but you make it so hard to stay mad at him! He just keeps coming to his senses.

    You were right to appoligies to the Ginny haters; you are doing a very good job of making her into a strong, compassionate, understanding, and driven, young woman. She is an excelent friend for Severius. The element of pain/remorse/shame that his relationship with her gives his feelings for Harry adds a greater sense of realism, as well as points out an empathy with her that is too often ignored by those who write Severius. Who, by the way, has a WONDERFUL inner voice. I can't help but feel a bit of regret that a subtly developing attraction between the two was not present, despite the visable friendship, camrederie, and dependence. I can't help but feel that the sudden references to two (as far as we have been led to believe by the plot) completely hetersexual men having repeated wet and/or erotic dreams about each other was a little out of the blue. I don't mean to nit pick, but one dream:you can repress and write off, more than one, however, would usually demand a little introspection.

    Despite my picking of the nit, I am really enjoying this story and cant wait to see more.

    - Sephone
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  • From Jan on July 13, 2008
    OMG! How could you do that to poor Severus! I just hope that Ginny dies soon, cause you are planning on killing her right? I sure hope so, never liked her, and I like her even less with this story.

    Please update chapter 31 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From dirtydarella on July 13, 2008
    -ch. 29 -
    Oh, poor Severus! You two do a brilliant job of turning him into a sympathetic character that makes me just want to grab Harry and shake him by the shoulders.
    I love the nice, slow build of the plot, really developing the characters and their situations in the story.
    Keep up the great work, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Akatryele on July 13, 2008
    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, the chapters have been relatively short lately so I have wanted to read a few before I put in my two sense again. It looks like its turning out a really in depth plot, and even though I know a lot of people complain that they can't tell how it's snarry yet I think that's a good thing, because you guys have thought out the plot so well no one knows what's going to happen and that's why they are upset. I still enjoy reading this piece very much and want to continue being updated on it, and I'll try to review more.^^
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  • From Leentjef on July 13, 2008
    this was very very very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - magic on July 13, 2008
    I like ypur story. Do you have an idea how long this story will be? Poor Sev! He doesn't have a lot of chance with the people he fell in love with.
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  • From SuzieGeorge on July 13, 2008
    Gah! Poor Severus! T_T I can see why you guys call yourselves Queens of Angst now!
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 12, 2008
    ok i'll start reviewing from now on then =P i usually don't review because i usually say the same things as someone else so i kinda just stopped. XD but i'll start again then, um i really do love your story i feel bad for severus i in away befoer the last few chapters thought severus would be content with living with the both of them and maybe becoming a nanny later on but not that soon then in the last chapter i remembered that this was a harry/severus fic lolz and now severus is very sad and i guess confused? but congrats to harry and ginny on becoming parents no quiditch for her for a while then....so please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - harpy on July 12, 2008
    Hi, I just wanted to say that I really love your fic especially because it is an epic! I'm very excited to see how this plays out. I also wanted to add that I really like the relationship between Hermione and Harry and hope that whatever happens they remain friends.
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  • From ANON - aeronwy on July 12, 2008
    Update,Yay!

    Poor Sev and Ginny - both of them trying to make Harry happy without hurting each other. Good work, the last few chapters have been enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - reviewer on July 12, 2008
    Honestly? (well you asked) I check this story every few chapters and skim it to keep up with the plot. I don't hate it, it's well written etc, but I'm not really all that interested yet. Don't get me wrong; I love a slow upbuild, but 30 (and lots more to come I think) chapters of Harry/Ginny really is a lot to take for a Snarry fan. And I even like Ginny! So please keep it up, but get to the Snarry soon please (tho I don't see that happen any time soon).
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