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From tambrathegreat on February 17, 2010
Oh no, you're not going to draw me into that argument. I"m glad you got it resolved, whatever the sentence was. It was good to see Ginny express some very justified anger. They did betray her, no matter what reasons they give for what they did. She has a right to scream and yell for a while yet.

I like how you contrasted the three characters' reactions. Snape, Ginny and Harry all have a distinct voice in this chapter. Good job on that.

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From PantherRain on February 17, 2010
Ahh... I can't figure it out! My best guess is "She didn't wait for a response, knowing the truth - he would never have forgiven her such a betrayal." But I have a feeling that's not right. I saw many lines that could be possible, but I just had trouble deciding on one. This one has potential for clumsy wording. The only other one I could think of was when Harry looked at Severus and then back to Ginny, because that has a great potential for 'artistic' differences.

I'm glad to see this chapter up. I was going over all of my Snarry to see which ones had updated, and was disappointed that I didn't find this one in the pages of fics that had updated since I'd last checked it. I was ecstatic to see the email that it had updated!

This chapter also makes me so thankful for my husband, who was far more forgiving than Ginny. No details, but I'll just say the three of us were just about as close, and are still a triumverate now after a particular fiasco. *coughcough*
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From fancypantsdylan on February 16, 2010
OMG, what a brilliant return chapter and the end, I can just imagine Ginny's look when she sees Harry leaning against Severus' frame.

Absolutely brilliant dears.
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From InuyoukaiMei on February 15, 2010
I just about screamed bloody murder when I reached the end of the page and didn't find more story. Please update soon!!! I'd like to remain on the update list please. Inuyoukaimei@yahoo.com
Thank you!
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From tambrathegreat on February 15, 2010
Woo Hoo! I'm so glad to see that you are back. I have missed this story.

I know you say that this is a transitional chapter, but it packs quite the emotional punch. Good job on the dialogue and the suspenseful angst.
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From ANON - illo on December 18, 2009
I'm not one that review often because I don't really know what exactly to say most of the time. I'm totaly not original I know but I think that for you authors it is important to know if your readers like what they read so the answer for that is a definite YES! And I think I like this story even more than others because I know that being two to write it is not simple and so it is in my eyes even more a 'chef d'oeuvre' that it already is. As a reader who is impatient to read all of a promising story and who never learned to pick complete works... I hope to see more of it soon but please continue to take the time need and not rush the style so this could stay the masterpiece that it is! And please, excuse the bad grammar and others errors in the review, english being my second language, I try but I'm aware it must happen anyway!!
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From ANON - iluvtrees on December 14, 2009
I checked for an update today and was missing this story so much that I started reading the reviews to see if maybe I could find a reason you hadn't updated in so long. (Which I understand that RL comes first, darn it, but I enjoy this story so much!) And... I came to the last review, which I read and then went- WTF? I'm all for constructive criticism, but leaving a review that basically says 'I don't like what you're writing cause you're not writing what I like to read' is pretty damn stupid. If you don't like a story, backbutton it to the 'smooch, I love u so much, even though U R a raving idiot, now lets have sex that solves all our problems PWP' stories. And let those that are enjoying a story that is extremely well-written, in character, plotty, and not made up of cardboard teenagers enjoy it without worrying that two great authors are being harrassed and insulted because they didn't wrap it up in less than a thousand small and easy-to-read words! (Sorry, rant over) I hope that everything is well with both of you, and that it's just the holiday season that has slowed down the updates. I am really looking forward to reading more of this very entertaining story, whenever RL permits.

Thanks for the lovely words, Christina
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From ANON - alexia on October 30, 2009
Sorry, but this story is horrid! First off 76+ chapters waaaay too long! Second why bring severus back only to kill him in the end? I hate that you made Harry bi I mean this "harry can't live without ginny or severus", please it gets too tiresome to read! Do fanfiction a favor and put this fic out of it's misery.
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From ANON - Bunnybop05 on October 20, 2009
He should keep the baby, Ginny can just sod off. The fact is she wasn't his true mate, his soul mate. It was love yeah an infactuation maybe but their feelings, their ideas, and past was nothing like the one he shared with Snape.
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From Winry on September 13, 2009
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! WE ARE DYING TO KNOW WHAT HARRY DOES! UPDATE, because we love this story so much!
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From ANON - demerious on September 12, 2009
Setting aside the clump of soggy-tear-soaked mansize tesco tissues, I'll start by saying that I very much love "All That You Leave Behind" as a work of fiction written on the adored Snarry ship and behind-the-possible-scenes insight into life between The Epilogue and Final Chapter of DH.

It's well written and thought out (plotwise, grammar, spelling, all that jazz that makes up a good book) and really I can't comment enough on how diligently you've worked on this since I only just discovered this iridescent gem of LOVE-LIFE-and-HEARTACHE. I wait eagerly for what happens next and really...I just love this story; it's painful, yes, but there are all these undertones of hope and wilfulness and god I hope Harry finds his happy ending...

Oh there's so much I want to say -all throughout reading since last night, I've wanted to pause to write a comment in response to yours and the story insofar but then couldnt wait to read on and see what happened next! Most importantly and wonderfully; Harry and Severus and Everyone are incredibly true to form which makes Harry and Severus' love (and loss) all the more...real.

Please, if you're still continuing with this fic, I'd love to be added to your update alert list (demerious at hotmail.com). And if not, it's been such a wonderful ride that I can only thank you for your efforts in sharing this story with us readers.

=) eiri.
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From ANON - Aki WildQueen on September 04, 2009
Wow! Your story is amazing!
I just started reading it and just couldn't stop! In less than a day, I finished everything up to the latest chapter and I can't wait for more.
I saw that you have an alert list. Would it be possible for me to be put on that list? I really want to read more!
Thank you!
P.S. Mr. Bunny loved this story a lot too and would like to say that Aki will email you to give you her email.
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From talonora on August 27, 2009
uh oh cat is out of the bag!! big time!! awesome chapter!! I love the story keeper going!! :)
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From ANON - Luxard on August 09, 2009
It's a wonderful story so far! I don't normally like m-preg, but for this I'll totally make an exception for. I love it and I can't think of anything that could make it better. Great Job!
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From ANON - Christina on August 07, 2009
Hello ladies, hope I'm not too late to make sure I'm added to the update list, I missed these until I checked my WIP links yesterday, and I'd love to read them hot off the press! christinalovestrees@gmail.com

Ok, I got to read chapter 73-76 in one go, and first I gotta tell you, the entire 'Harry's pregnant'- so a surprise! It's been so long since I read the story info page that I'd forgotten the mpreg part, and it was a total shocker, my mouth totally hanging open, and THANK YOU GOD the next chapter was up or I might not have made it. ;}

Great twist here and you've really made the story fit together *perfectly* - "How. Could. You?!" she said, and he knew she knew. - yep, the jig's up, and now the sh*t's hitting the fan. I CANNOT WAIT to see where you take it now. *cracks whip* Well, where's 77? *taps foot* I'm waiting! :D :D :D

The portrait- I kinda anticipated that one, it's just something your Ginny would do. Ron getting pissy at Christmas dinner- kinda understandable, but I'm glad that even George told him to chill out. Harry with his 'sympathy pains', when I came back and re-read that part I had to smirk at the irony. And the end, with Harry talking with Severus, oh-ho how my heart twisted for them. It's an awful feeling when you've done something wrong and you feel so guilty, there's so many ways this situation can work out, depending alot on Ginny of course. (And I'm kinda with Harry here, I'd like some details on the whole 'pregnant man thing'. [I really love to hear authors reasoning for mpregs] I believe a visit to Hermione is coming up!) What's so weird to me is I'm really hurting for Ginny too, you've made her into a beautiful character and I'm ready to see how she handles this.

Great, great writing here, ladies, thank you so much for the beautiful words, Christina
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