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Reviews for The Love You Take

By : Subversa
  • From chickaboo on June 23, 2008
    Wow. Snape certainly saved the day on that one eh? And Morgen is SO screwed! If I were Voldemort, I'd cast that spell on her seeing as how I would now be out a....well, a sex slave basically. That'd really show her huh? I don't know what it is about Morgen that brings out the vindictiveness in me...lol! Great update, really really good. I can't wait for more!
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  • From Scarlett20 on May 31, 2008
    ewwww petrigrew or dolohov...nasty on soooo many levels *shudders*...i think i'd prefer madness. update soon i'm dying to know what happens and how severus gets them out of this one...or maybe hermione comes up with a plan and instigates it without severus knowing...hmmmmm. i love this story!! morgan so needs her come uppance....hermione needs to slap the bitch n then set her on fire or something!!!! evil whore!!! hehe laughed when severus turned her down...that has so gotta sting...willing to risk his life and do anything but marry her...and the 'another mans leftovers' that had gotta hurt!!! hehe.

    you've written this amazingly and they are so in character...looking forward to the next chappie...please don't leave me waiting too long!!!

    scarlett


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  • From InkStainedWretch on May 31, 2008
    Well, that's a decision no one would want to make! This story has me hooked!

    Hey, on which other archives is this story listed? I wonder if I might ask you some questions about online publication? ink.stainedwretch@yahoo.com
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  • From Missy5444 on May 31, 2008
    Can we just kill off this Morgen? She is beyond evil and deserves to be smacked down.
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  • From Queeny on May 31, 2008
    GOSH thats a terrible cliff hanger! Hurry up and fix it! !!
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 30, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on May 30, 2008
    You are a brilliant author! This scene is just laced with complex thoughts and banter. I love it so much! Please continue quickly! The suspense is incredible!
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  • From dannilawless on May 30, 2008
    Oh my God!! Poor Hermione!! And poor Sev. The thought of her being compelled to fuck Wormtail is almost enough to make me sick
    Please update soon, I need to know what happens next.
    Ooh I would so Avada that Morgen bitch into next week!! Grrrrrrr!!!!
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  • From neelix on May 30, 2008
    oh my goodness... what a choice to make. Poor Sevrus... and that Morgen!! What a cow!!! Love this, glad to know we will get regular updates now.
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  • From Drkstdwn262 on May 30, 2008
    ack! ew wormtail, that is tooo gross to even contemplate. sevvie's in a quandry, i wonder how he'll get out of this.
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  • From CB13 on May 30, 2008
    Mercy. How's our boy gonna get out of this one??? If you're American and old enough to have ever watched the (original) Dukes of Hazzard (please don't think less of me, I was 10), you'll recognize the cliffhanger image in my mind of the General Lee, hanging in mid-air over an impossible-looking leap - WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT????

    Except I always knew them Duke boys would win in the end, and this time, I'm not too sure about good ole' Severus.

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From cnlipfor on May 29, 2008
    I hope Severus can get Hermione out of this one. I mean he would never let someone he...cared for be touched by another man, right??? Please oh please update soon!!! It made my day when I saw that you had updated because it has been a really lousy day for me.
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  • From SorceressFujin on May 29, 2008
    Ooo! What a cliffhanger! LOVED the chapter. :D
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  • From crescentmoon on May 29, 2008
    OMG NO! What an evil cliffhanger. Please protect Hermione.
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  • From chickaboo on May 29, 2008
    Oh I could just kill Morgen myself. That stupid....deep calming breaths....in....and out..... Okay I'm good. Great update! Seriously intense. Now how's Severus going to get her out of this one? Please update again soon! The suspense is killing me!!
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