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Reviews for The Love You Take

By : Subversa
  • From Shellnet on June 13, 2019

     Great ending but could use  an epilogue maby with the wedding and kids


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  • From Cheese_And_Crackers on January 03, 2019

    Amazing story!


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  • From ANON - kelsey on July 04, 2012
    This is such a wonderful story I didn't want it to end this is the second time I have read it and it was just as good you write so beautifully thanks for writing a great story
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  • From RogueMudblood on May 19, 2012

    I truly enjoyed the story you've woven here, and I must say that one of the marks of truly great writing, in my opinion, is the ability to know when the drama has reached that point of completely becoming something darker than intended, and to turn it around. You did it all beautifully, with one line:


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  • From LadyFreak on February 29, 2012
    Amazing story. Love this take on it. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From jinna1979 on August 14, 2011
    Amazing story! Your writing style is just beautiful
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  • From karenmiller1972 on October 12, 2010
    Oh my dear, I quite loved this story. Loved it. I can see where you first thought it was a PWP, but I also got quite caught up in Severus' quiet determination to control his emotions (is there any reason that I keep thinking of Spock off of Star Trek??? LOL) and his dark anguish upon realizing that he can not. Severus truly emobodies everything I've come to want from him in your stories. Loved it!
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  • From tbird1965 on August 16, 2010
    Wow. One of the best stories I have ever read. Absolutely fabulous.
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  • From daycrump79 on August 10, 2009
    THIS STORY WAS 2 FUCKING GOOD. I REALLY LOVE IT
    AND ALL I WISH IS THAT YOU KEEP WRITING SS/HG
    STORIES FOR A REALLY LONG TIME. THANKS FOR A
    WONDERFUL STORY... DAY79
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  • From Olwen on January 27, 2009
    I just found the bookmark I had set for this story. I'm so glad you saw it all the way through. Titania Prince is a force to be reckoned with and I'm glad to have met her. I hope you have more planed for the future. You have a lovely writing style.
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  • From mollycrown on January 01, 2009
    Loved it! Yaay! I randomly turn from Snarry fics to Hermions/Snape, and was directed here by a very helpful soul from the Yahoo group Borgin and Burks! And wow, am I ever greatful. This story was amazing, there wasn't any part of it I disliked. I adore your Severus, and love that you gave him a family, it was such a nice change!

    I also love that you didn't pair Harry with Ginny!!! So THANKS A BILLION for that too!

    Loved all your charaters, although I was a bit puzzled by Hermione's parents being called Leigh and Richard; I'm assuming 'Leigh' is her mother, but I always thought Leigh was a masculine name. I can't think if JKR ever named Hermione's parents, and so if this is her doing, then sorry! Haha!

    Anyway, great story! Thnk you very much for writing it!

    Mu xxx
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  • From AeraVale on November 21, 2008
    Beautiful... Just finished reading the story (all in one go, took up a whole day, just couldn't walk away!). It's wonderful, you captured Snape's snide character perfectly, as you did Hermione's gentle, passionate character. And the transition to Snape as a loving man was done so well! The last chapter was particularly moving, I loved the part where Snape was given the Order. It was the sort of ending the real Harry Potter books should have had. Snape was such a momentous character in the books and while his death was quite touching, I did feel it lacked something. You nailed it though! Bravo!
    Ok, so I'm going to stop gushing on about how cool this story was. You're a very skilled writer, please keep it up. I'll regularly be checking to see if you do!
    xxxxxxx Aera
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  • From blondpierogi on November 08, 2008
    aww this story was great!! you did a wonderful job with it. It was well written and had a great plot!!!
    you get 2 thumbs up.. Great job!!!
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  • From amd2175 on November 07, 2008
    So I REALLY hope you write a sequel!!!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 03, 2008
    I have loved ready this the whole time. It has been a lovely story, one of my favorites. Beautifully written.
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