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Reviews for A Wizard's Debt

By : Utopia
  • From Heidi191976 on January 17, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Citten on January 17, 2008
    well my dear i just love your story!!! i really look forward to the following chapters and i do hope that you have LOTS more to come! the way you have patterned the story is very different i am not sure if i like it or not. i can be kinda confusing BUT i do love that you can 'get inside their heads' so to speak. as always i will be waiting to read more! just make sure when you get writing that you take your time and not go to fast that you skip over a 'step' and i have us get lost. (i do hope i have made sense!) :) until next time!
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  • From ANON - aliciana on January 17, 2008
    Whoooops. Dahling! I think you may have got the wrong end of the wand. I suppose the good news from your point of view is that I'm not a pure-blooded red-roser but only an adopted one. I'm more of a Minerva McGonagall (though not from any posh parts of Edinburgh). But of course now it means that you CAN trust me as everyone knows, us Scots are the most trustworthy people in the world.....well perhaps not Burke and Hare. But these sausage butties....they sound magnifique and Sev would be able to share them with me......a true gourmet. After all who can resist the call of haggis (blech) or the screech of the deep fried Mars Bar. I prefer Bounty bars myself washed down with Malibu a la Nigella. I'm still ill. Have mercy. And it's lovely stories like this that's keeping my spirits up as I wait for the Nurofen to kick in. So you're at Uni in Derby. My daughter's at Edinburgh but she's in Arizona this year and has just rung me asking for bloody money. Bleedin' students. (Paul Calf). Missing you already. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx
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  • From Amethystique on January 17, 2008
    A northern lass meself found t'introduction a reet laugh. Am more from Lancashire tha knows. Bowt 15 miles from Manchester.
    A Quaint Market town wi'.....*****waxes lyrical as the hovis theme plays in the background******

    *Get's a grip on English again....*

    I'm loving this couple. The fact that you're introducing friends from Severus' past who were not death eaters or homicidal megalomaniacs with a superiority complex makes for good reading. I am curoius though, why does Zhi call his wife "My Dragon" I hope it is nothing to so with her disposition!
    Blessings to you and your muse
    Amethystique xx
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 17, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Tenar10r on January 16, 2008
    Really enjoying this story

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  • From ANON - FiaBerns on January 16, 2008
    Ah well this Severus isn't about to smack certain parts of anyone's anatomy, "wi't belt", but he is a well written character, with more of a past than most in this story. I am really enjoying this story, though I wish there was more of it, you know it's going where you want when your readers' start acting like Oliver and begging "more, please". And for some reason I am now thinking about cardboard boxes and motorways...... and coal lung, how very bizarre. Fia.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 16, 2008
    This is an incredible story. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From azulkan2 on January 16, 2008
    Interesting story. Looking forward to the next parts.
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  • From ANON - aliciana on January 16, 2008
    Hello Flower. Firstly I'm ill. There's some flu bug on MY side of the Pennines and I passed out t'other day. Anyway the computer doesn't seem to be agreeing with me much either and this is the first time I've started to read your story. Nicely done. I like this Sev and how he is looking after her. Could he come and look after me please? I'm only a few miles down the M62 or A676. My hubby's 6'5" too. I love tall men. They just seem to go on forever and ever. And realistically hung.....not like Shergar....God rest him. Got to go. Think I'm going to keel over. But remember....."We were so poor, we worked down't mine 25 hours a day, eight days a week and paid mineowner for't privilege.......LUXURY!!!!!!!!!!" Has Jesus just walked in??????? I think you know where I'm coming from but I'm a bit delusional at the moment. "What's that Alan darling? You HAVE to give me a foot and then full body massage. Okay love....I'm coming." Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx.
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  • From slygriff21 on January 16, 2008
    Awesome update! I loved how Hermione told off her adopted family! It was great! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From on January 16, 2008
    LOL! This is GREAT!! I'm really loving this fic. Looking forward to your next update.

    Keep it up,
    Lexy
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  • From Sampdoria on January 16, 2008
    Loved the new chapters, very well done. I like how "normal" you make our beloved couple, no natural sex-God/Godess, but absolutely normal with a will to explore and to learn how to pleassure the other, I like that! I love to read more about Severus's Potions Master friends, so update again soon!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 16, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From jraskin on January 16, 2008
    AWESOME!!!!!Please, please update soon!! Remember, wise person say: "Keep readers interested"
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