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Reviews for A Wizard's Debt

By : Utopia
  • From soldiersgirl0709 on January 16, 2008
    I have to agree, wise men do not upset their wives.....lest they find themselves locked out of the house on a rainy night while their wife holds their boots hostage and he has to sleep in the car.....oh, wait, flashbacks, sorry......you are a busy busy beaver arent you my dear? (hoping the word beaver does not have the same conotations in the UK ;P ) LOve the boys reactions...not a level head ammong them when it comes to Hermione is there? and running in fear of their mother.....I would run from Molly too....wish my boys had some fear of me.....they just laugh....ah well.....so Mione got in a little early morning wand handling did she?**Waggles brows** Im jealous. I appreciate that Severus was well endowed but not lethal....who really wants a man who looks like he's sporting a quidditch bat? **Ouch** Besides, they are wizards....stands to reason they could transfigure it to fit the witchs preference.....all right, this review is going south quickly LOL


    Wonderful, dearie, I look forward to more.


    XXX
    Sg
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  • From GentooNiXGeek on January 16, 2008
    I really enjoy this story. You are a really wonderful writer. I hope to see more from this.

    :D

    -Sage
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  • From DarqueHart on January 16, 2008
    ;) I really love your sense of humor! 'Run, Mum's coming this way!'

    Ch 18 - I was a little surprised that HG agreed to spend the night with SS. After all they went from acquaintances to engaged in a matter of an hour or two ... but, once there, I truly appreciated the way you had them proceed so gently and not have HG suddenly turn into Miss Know-It-All-Sex-Kitten.

    Ch. 19 - Beginning, same thing ... the gentle exploration and learning about Sev's body, nicely done. Though I do think he should not have covered himself at the 'final moment'. She'd have wanted to see/know the results of her efforts. She's not stupid, she has to technically know that something happens ... I think she'd want to experience the actual 'out come'. [If only for educational purposes.]
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 16, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Carine on January 16, 2008
    Hi Utopia,
    wow you were very busy these days.(or I was too lazy!)This morning I had to read 8 chapters!!!
    By the way I hope that your exams went well.
    As it seems Severus is not behaving his usual self these days.(ok you warned us that he would be a lot ooc.) I think it would be funny if his mother really came back as a ghost to hunt down poor Sevvie if he were nasty to his young wife.This thought is simply hilarious.I cannot wait to read more.(((H)))Sureves Epans
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 15, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Tenar10r on January 15, 2008
    Hot! Hot! Hot!
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  • From VampireSeductress on January 15, 2008
    update again soon!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on January 15, 2008
    My goodness, you are a busy girl today! Nice, very nice....I wanna sleep in his puffy shirt LOL

    XXX
    SG
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 15, 2008
    Great first encounter! And thank you for the explanation. Personally I would have gone with something like love muffin. I haven't a clue why. It just sounded funny. Keep up the good work!
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  • From bluezauza on January 15, 2008
    " Custard" ????? BHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
    I see Dragon boy takes after his-hotness-the-blond-god daddy!! Brilliant!

    I loved the way his-hotness-the-dark-god Severus, made Hermione realize HE was the right wizard for her!
    Please update soon!
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  • From Sampdoria on January 15, 2008
    I really like this, I like how the chapters switch between persons, I wouldn't thougth so in advance, but you do that very well! Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - slasher454 on January 15, 2008
    I'm loving this story. Custard! Lol! Can't wait to find out their nick-name for Draco.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 15, 2008
    Custard? I don't get it.
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  • From slygriff21 on January 15, 2008
    I have read many Marriage Law challenges, but I must say, yours is definately unique. I love it. I can't wait to read more. If it's not too much trouble, could you possibly e-mail me when you update?

    Thanks,
    Tiffany
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