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Reviews for A Wizard's Debt

By : Utopia
  • From ANON - r.a. on December 19, 2007
    I am already hooked,even though virgin blood was clear from the 1st chapter, your style is so smooth and flowing,I hope you'd update soon.
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  • From amsev on December 19, 2007
    I absolutely adore and am addicted to MLCs. That being said, I'm looking forward to your take on the Marriage Law. I would consider chapter 7 an evil cliffie!!!
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  • From Carine on December 19, 2007
    Hi Utopiaa,
    woaw...This is a very promising beginning to a great story.I loved the idea of writing the different chapters in the p.o.v. from the persons involved.As I am an addicted fan of our sour and snarky potion master I secretely hope that you will not make him too ooc.I think he can be very caring and maybe even romantic,but I think that he is however very nasty and somerimes can be a real bastard.
    I suppose that the substitute ingredient was freshly collected virgin blood.I am right,am I?
    Well I cannot wait to read on and see in which direction this story will go.I guess Severus will want her to marry him,because she sacrificed her verginity to him,or mabe she would even have problems of finding a proper suitable husband as she isn
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  • From angelnomiko on December 19, 2007
    wow that was awsome i love it .. please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From chelleybelle on December 19, 2007
    great start, i look forward to reading more...
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  • From ANON - CB13 on December 18, 2007
    I think it's safe to say that every single reader of HG/SS fics on this site has guessed the mystery ingredient. But what a wonderful twist on the theme! And seven new chapters - do you intend to spoil us so in the future?

    Cheers, great start.

    CB
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  • From ANON - ashmo21 on December 18, 2007
    OH... Was is her hymen??????? Sounds a bit gross but... umm - yeah. Any who, sweet story so far, I can't wait for the rest.
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  • From angelprince on December 18, 2007
    I'm pretty sure I know what the secret ingredient is? Can Hermione still wear white on her wedding day? Why a quill? I'm sure Neville, being a Gryffindor and all, would've stepped up to the plate.
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  • From ANON - kcl on December 18, 2007
    Great story. I know what the secret ingredient is. :)
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  • From Angie30 on December 18, 2007
    LOVE IT!!!! Enough said. *Grins*
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  • From ANON - grammarchick101 on December 18, 2007
    Secret ingredient: blood from a virgin's maidenhead
    I'm enjoying your story. Great work to get out 7 chapters in a day.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2007
    Oh my goodness! How suspenseful! Tell me more tell me more more more more! Please?
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  • From ElenSila on December 18, 2007
    It's good so far, I like it, please update soon.
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  • From Delfin on December 18, 2007
    nice, continue =)
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  • From auntbecky on December 18, 2007
    This is an entertaining little story. Easy to read too. Can't wait for more.
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