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Reviews for A Wizard's Debt

By : Utopia
  • From GammaOrionis on October 11, 2008
    I LOVE IT! SNAPE-A-DOODLE is receiving aid from Neville! That is too perfect. *dances around* I like the different voices technique that you are using. It is interesting and difficult to pull off!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 07, 2008
    Hi there. I just sat and read this story today and wow! I can't believe you didn't finish it! It's fun, funny, got a good level of angst, and is filled with hope right up until the wedding night. Then they have that awful night, a worse morning and .... darn! That was really good. Thank you for what you wrote and shared. HG4eva
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  • From voraciousreader on September 29, 2008
    I realize it's been a while since you added to this story, but I have always liked it and even have re-read it several times; it's a favorite of mine. Just a couple of things, since your Beta was down for the count?: Feinting/fainting; they're-there-their issues (always hated multiple pronouns in english class) and the lack of a conclusion! If you ever decide to pick this one up, you'll have at least one eager reader!
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  • From Amethystique on June 29, 2008
    Okay young Lady, I've waited long enough for the next chappie.
    I'ts not fair of you to leave us poor readers hanging in suspenders (sorry I mean Suspense!)

    I love your work and NEED TO HAVE MORE!!!

    Poke your muse with a banana if you have to I don't care, but PLEASE update soon?

    Loads of Blessings

    Amethystique xx

    P.S Have you Graduated Yet?
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  • From Mariavita on June 26, 2008
    Dearest Utopia!!!
    I enjoy your story...nah... I love it... I'm seriously addicted!
    I really like your style of writting, especially changes in point of view.
    Severus and Hermione are pictured wonderfully and I think that I wouldn't do this better than you.
    After all pleasantries were written there is a time for telling off. Why do I have to wait so long!
    I beg you on my knees for next chapters of 'A Wizard's Debt'. If you have problems with beta I offer you my services. I'm not a native English but I;m proficient enough not to have problems with correcting mistakes, passing my ideas and adding some constructive feedback.
    Yours Elanori

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  • From Larrabee on May 29, 2008
    I can't wait for more. This story is such an interesting take on the marriage law. And I love that you disregarded the Epilogue... HP Compliant!

    Yay!!!
    Anywho, the different points of view are so creative. I can't wait for more!!! Soon please... this and "Wizard's Porn" are two fics I am really looking forward too. And they are so different. Your writing style varies, what a talent!
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  • From ANON - meow on April 26, 2008
    It was a lovely story and I really enjoyed reading it. A bit soppy, but still lovely. Thank you.
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  • From ginnyginny on April 21, 2008
    I love this story, and another you've written (to catch a thief...), but i noticed you haven't updated in a while. I hope you will soon. I'd love to see how you end both stories!
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  • From amsev on April 18, 2008
    I lost this story for a while, but refound it the other night! It's simply lovely. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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  • From ANON - A naughty mouse on March 16, 2008
    Yay! More chapters!!! Please keep them coming!!!
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  • From marcia on March 08, 2008
    I'm not particularly fond of 1st person but it does fine. At least it's a site better than some out there. It is a bit confusing at 1st with each chapter being in 1st and not all the same character but you get used to it after a while. I'd recomend sticking with one or two characters for 1st person stories in the future though to cut down on the confusion. Over all not a bad story. Where does his debt come into play, though?
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  • From FifteenStitches on February 28, 2008
    Please, please, please update! I love the way you write. It actually reminds me of a book I read a few years ago called "Smack". It had a similiar type of writing, where every new chapter the story would switch to different point of views. I love this story!
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  • From sherrithewriter on February 25, 2008
    What a fabulous story. I really hope you finish it. I love the way you write it in the different POVs -- very different, very interesting. I love the way you have drawn the characters, especially the Malfoys and Severus -- they all needed a bit of redemption. Great story.
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  • From Pookah on February 22, 2008
    I can't help but think that Hermione would keep her name when she married. I did, and that was decades ago when it was quite uncommon to do so. I don't know how different it is in Great Britain (I live in the United States) but I kept mine and it is supposed to be common now, although it is not so in our town. I recently read that in the US, 20% of college educated women keep their names whey they marry.

    I liked the comment about fixing the roof!
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  • From Pookah on February 22, 2008
    This is a very interesting tale. I love to see other people's ideas of the little details JKR left out. I really enjoyed seeing friends from Severus's past. What surprises me about this tale is that without any big conflicts between Hermione and Severus, without much conflict at all, you are still managing to keep my interest with your Original characters and your own special take on the Wizarding world.

    Thanks for writing.
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