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Reviews for A Wizard's Debt

By : Utopia
  • From jraskin on February 08, 2008
    Poor Severus, hes so unsure!and they had to have Narcissa undo Mione's corset!But oh please, please, please write more soon!I need more!
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 08, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From solisflos on February 07, 2008
    More more more more more. This is wonderful!
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  • From luvhp on February 07, 2008
    Yeah, finally the wedding!!!
    And yes, do not piss off a pregnant witch! LOL
    Okay, so uh, hurry up and get to the wedding NIGHT!!!!
    (Not anxious at all!)
    : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2008
    You wrote her so well, I almost feel bad for Pansy ... but she's still b*tch, lol!

    Love the description of Sev in his wedding attire. The image you created was quite swoon worthy. Looking forward to your next update :)
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 07, 2008
    I think that Pansy is a fool to keep stalking Draco. He never loved her and would never have married her. I liked how Hermione waited patiently until Severus was finished helping Narcissa to dance with him. She really understands that he is their trusted friend and wants Narcissa to be healthy. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Ithilin Palandiriel on February 07, 2008
    Just a nitpick that caught my eye. The Cannon in D is not by Mozart. It was composed by Pachabel in 1680, long before Mozart was even a twinkle in his daddy's eye.

    Beyond that however, the story is wonderful! I can't wait to read more. I really like how you have chosen to switch the POV. You can really see how Severus and Hermione respect each other. *giggles* I really like Zhi. he kind of reminds me of Charlie Chan.

    Blessings,
    Ithilin
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  • From dannilawless on February 07, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this story. I was wondering about the Michael thing tho. Good save! If ya need any help or a beta for your lemon chapt. (which'll be coming really soon?) drop me an e-mail on reception@henley.ie
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on February 06, 2008
    Great story up to this part...it's completely out of synch with the rest of the story. But then, thats my opinion. Love the story thus far otherwise.

    Red
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  • From chickaboo on February 06, 2008
    Yay they're married! So next chapter's the wedding night right? lol Just kidding. That was a great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From on February 06, 2008
    sorry but Michael??? That is horrible!! Severus and Michael?! That doesn't work at all in my head! But, I do so much enjoy your stories so I will let it pass!! ;) Apart from that everything is perfect!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2008
    Aw, that was sweet. Very nice work :)

    Can hardly wait for the wedding night!
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  • From jraskin on February 05, 2008
    Aww, so sweet,I loved this chapter. Please, please write more, and update soon!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 05, 2008
    This chapter was great. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From luvhp on February 01, 2008
    awww, I read all through this yesterday, traveled thorugh the snow just to come in to work ( I don't have IA at home *loser*) and I didn't even get a wedding.
    Love this story immensely. Please update soon. Can't wait for hte wedding. . .night *grin*
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