Click Here!

Reviews for Harry Potter and The Making Of Sex Slaves

By : darthme1011
  • From ANON - Reaper on May 18, 2015
    Years too long without an update. You cannot say you haven't had access to a computer in more than 5 years
    Report Review

  • From vipertooth on June 22, 2009
    is this story dead?
    Report Review

  • From bill560682 on March 18, 2009
    now i would like to see this story go on, the only real problem i see is if this is a magic fic then harry would need to take pet with him to school.
    Report Review

  • From innoxious on August 27, 2008
    Good so far, although the author notes should go at the beginning/end of a chapter and not as a chapter itself... keep it up!
    Report Review

  • From dunlar81 on May 23, 2008
    Well this sounds like this might could make a pretty good story. I look forward to seeing when you get your computer fixed and can post those next 3 chapters. if you get the chance give me a heads up they have my e-mail wrong it is the same as my screen name at hotmail.
    Report Review

  • From RyuKnight on May 17, 2008
    still waiting for more because i really like direction this story is going
    Report Review

  • From on March 27, 2008
    Great start mate, I like how she handled Petunia, could you tell me what age Harry is? I like the control Harry had over Pet.

    PLEASE update soon.
    Report Review

  • From DragonWhite on January 27, 2008
    Are u thinking that fanfic is some diary? o_O
    Report Review

  • From iamspammer on January 26, 2008
    Is there a way that we can REPORT this story as abuse?


    Report Review

  • From Katlyn on January 13, 2008
    For goodness sakes. You've got a 4 chaptered story on here, but only one of those chapters is an actual story! Don't update just to tell us about the latest little thing that goes through your mind, that's what livejournal is for. Basic rule, it's easy to follow, each 'chapter' should be an actual chapter, not just a comment about, 'Oh, I might do this'. If you feel you must tell people what you're thinking, make it a footnote to an actual chapter!

    I'm sorry to be bitchy, but it's a real pain when you go to read a 'new' chapter, and it's something completely inconsequential.

    Report Review

  • From iamspammer on January 11, 2008
    Just wondering.

    Are you using your story for advertisements?
    And why keep shifting chapters?


    I wonder when you'd get around actual story. Hopefully by 10th chapter I guess
    Report Review

  • From Mishra on January 08, 2008
    God this story is so.. so... bad that I just can't resist reviewing. I won't point out that all characters are completely ooc, because it's an AU story and it's normal on this website. However, taking actually staring the story in ch. 3 is, amusing to say the least. Your writing style leaves much to be desired and judging by the way your sentences tend to be confusing, becaues of missing words, I assume that you did not even proofread this stuff. I dislike the general idea of this story and in my opinion you should take a break and read some actually good fanfiction before trying again.

    Oh and stop your ADD-attention-whoring, thx!
    Report Review

  • From sanda on January 08, 2008
    good chapter
    Report Review

  • From iamspammer on January 08, 2008
    I was so looking forward to this story.

    First, You updated it so late. Second, you din't do anything in the first real chapter. Third, your spacing and grammer; You need use periods rather than commas.

    Please properly start the story. And please space it properly. You might want to ask for a beta.


    I know you might say "don't like it, don't read it". I was waiting for story but update was so late and then chapter wasn't very good.

    Please take this review positively and try and improve it. Frequent updates would be better but I guess that depends on when you get time to update.

    Looking for next chapter; hopefully with the changes
    Report Review

  • From pfeil on December 31, 2007
    Sounds good; get on with it.

    Slave!Ginny is usually quite fun.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!