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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Making Of Sex Slaves

By : darthme1011
  • From 12snowman on December 26, 2007
    This could be a good story. think you could throw molly weasley madam pomphery and the libarian in there
    update soon.
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  • From Hermyone on December 23, 2007
    This sounds like it will be a fucking ace story, I can't wait wait for you to start.
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  • From shadowmoon on December 22, 2007
    OMG, petunia and pansy,no way...i will run out.narcissa will be fun in some way, but bella will be really creepy. she get sometime in azkaban too...i hve see alot of superharry.

    i like more my "Evil Challenge".sorry for my poor english--_--
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  • From iamspammer on December 22, 2007
    Ummm... Do you think that you can start the story by 5th chapter? You could've put allt hat information in the first chapter, you know.

    Oh and make it Harry centric. No Ron or anybody else. He alone. It'll work out really good. There aren't many only Harry stories.

    Having said that, i AM looking foward to the story
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  • From Mellow03 on December 21, 2007
    Hi, since it is porn without plot, you won't include other people?? If ya will, can ya put Ron and Hermione?? Harry as Master, Hermione and Ron as mistre and master, or his lover. Since ya put a title that JK used, Harry Potter and.., it seems it would be long, not short. Hope it would be a long story.
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  • From TheDon1023 on December 19, 2007
    its kinda short, i mean its only like a paragraph long, unless AFF is glitchy or somethin
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  • From vansmat on December 18, 2007
    It sounds like a good idea, but you're going to have to do a hell of a lot better than that to make this fic worth reading.
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  • From iamspammer on December 18, 2007
    Will this story be in First Person POV (by "First Person" I am assuming you'll use I's, is that correct?)?

    If so, can you please change it from Normal POV ("Second Person" like all other stories I guess)

    Thanks
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  • From Lincos on December 18, 2007
    I've seen summaries longer than that.

    What the fuck are you thinking posting a chapter with about 70words?

    Don't even say it was a prologue, coz a prologue should at least be about 1k words.

    It was the potential to make a good story but if your just going to post shit like the first chapter then just stop now and save AFF some disk space.
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  • From sanda on December 18, 2007
    nice
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  • From ANON - SweetGirl on December 18, 2007
    interesting....update
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