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Reviews for I Love You More

By : Phreakdom
  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2007
    I really recommend that you continue this story.
    It's off to a wonderfully good start that could only lead to a wonderfully good story.
    Maybe you could delve into it a bit more; tell us how they fell in love, married, and how their marriage became more strained.
    You could write about how far Ron is willing to go to win Hermione back and how far Severus is willing to go to make Hermione his.
    This really has such good potential!
    It would be a real shame for you to leave it as a two-shotter.
    These are just a few suggestions, but if you decide to leave it as it is that's fine as well.
    :]
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  • From Delfin on December 19, 2007
    holy cow :O

    really interesting n different from other fics, cant wait to read more!
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  • From angelprince on December 18, 2007
    Boy do these two have serious communication issues. Not a bad little fic. I thought he was gonna kill her off for a moment there.
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  • From ANON - foreverblack on December 18, 2007
    You really should continue. I know this was a one time thing but it never hurts to hope, is it?
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on December 18, 2007
    Ooh! So terrible and oh! so wonderful. I am quite excited with this story. Too bad there's no more to it. I loved it!
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