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Reviews for A Potion Named Desire

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on June 06, 2015
    This is great
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2012
    I don't like that Diggori, and that is everything i will say for now.
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2012
    I'm stupid, because i still don't undersatnd what the potion do for Harry....
    He is now relaxed because he took it, but didn't Draco though of somethin in the loo like: keep him without it?....lets see....
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2012
    Is so weird reading a Harry who knows so much about potions...
    About the potion itself, i agree with Hermione, that is a very potentialy life changing potion...i can see very well the repercutions it will bring to the word,and thd...forces, people....who will try to get their hands on it...
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2012
    Mmmm, i'm seeing a problem with any kind of relationship that aharry and Draco migth develop in the future...Draco is gona cheat on Harry with the potion! XD
    after all he sayid himslef at the end of the chapter.
    I still don't know what is the objetivenof the potion for Harry. Here he said he was a criminal if he didn't take it but....who knows....
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2012
    You kill Ron...i'm still in shock....O-O
    The other thing about his first chapter is "the potion" ....what is it, and why is Harry taking it?
    Lets find out in the next chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2011
    I really, really enjoyed this piece. In fact, I'm beginning to realize that I pretty much love your writing in general.

    I only have one... thought. In Hermione's urging to Harry that he must tell Draco, that it really wasn't that bad... you may not intend to, but to say things like that minimizes the act of sexual assault or rape. He should feel regret. He should be wary. All people should be wary of themselves when they lose control and wish to perform an act of violence against another person. It doesn't matter if Ginny was "teasing" Harry, or if Harry was drunk - to sexually assault someone has little do with lust and a lot to do with power and control. He didn't commit the act and that should be praised but it shouldn't be trivialized either. A person must accept, correct, and carry on but see it for what it is, not minimize it and rationalize it. Rape culture is pervasive. Even if this takes fiction too literally, you write with such a good eye that I only hope to bring awareness.
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  • From fairietayle on August 23, 2009
    This is interesting! You can really see the shapes the people take. You write them as reals persons. Harry seems so Harry, with his fear of hurting anyone and being disgusted of his emotions that nearly hurt Ginny. And Draco... I can't wait to see how he manages to lure Harry into his bed and into his life! :D
    You also have an interesting plot working in the backround, with Cassandra and Diggory (hope I got the names right). I'm all tingly and giddy with the prospect of finding out how everything links together and how you'll reveal it all :D
    Awesome job, and I hope you keep doing it!
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  • From Diane on August 09, 2008
    I barely want to take the time to write a review for this. I want to get to the second part of it. This story's awsome and I don't mind all the potions conversation at all. It's really interesting and it's actually fun to hear the theories and ideas. Sorry this isn't longer, but I really want to get to the second part.
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  • From ANON - erin on February 02, 2008
    write more this fic is really good one of the best in a while.. oh please dont leave it here... would saying you are the best writer in the universe help ( srry stephen king)
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  • From alleycat88 on January 25, 2008
    I knew it. The 'monster' inside Harry. Can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 24, 2008
    She's setting Draco up to fail? Oh that's very sneaky! Soooo can't wait for the sequel!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 24, 2008
    She's setting Draco up to fail? Oh that's very sneaky! Soooo can't wait for the sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on January 24, 2008
    Fantastic story. Perfect pacing and really amazing writing. I'm really looking forward to the sequel.
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on January 24, 2008
    I don't know how you do it, but once again you have created the workings of a wonderful story. The depiction of both Harry and Draco suck readers right into the story and their whirl wind emotions that leave me breathless with each chatper, and craving more. All your stories are works of art and this one is no different. I NEED to read another chapter. I crave to know what plot twist will evelope next. I am also glad that you are taking Harry's and Draco's relationship slowly. You're one of the only authores I can count on not to dissapoint. For now, all I can say is, I hope you update as soon as you can.
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