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Reviews for I'll Be Home For Christmas

By : Jilliane
  • From ANON - frustrated on February 07, 2012
    The spaces between paragraphs are half a page long, and the nuisance of scrolling fifty times to read a page has made me quit reading this story.
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  • From tazzytaz25 on April 18, 2011

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  • From ANON - elle on February 22, 2010
    OH!!!! LORD THIS FIC IS BRILLANT, IT MADE ME CRY, GET ANGRY AND LAUGH SO MUCH THAT ALMOST I SUFFOCATE,THE CHAPTER 18 IS WONDERFUL, JUST TO IMAGINE SEVERUS SNAPE, RUNNING TO SLEEP IS... FABULOUS, YOU
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  • From padme82 on August 20, 2008
    It's 4:42 in the morning and I've just finished your story. I love that this was from Snape's POV and that he wasn't completely perfect with Harry. Snape's the character that is the easiest to betray in fandom, meaning making him way too lovable, way too perfect. He was so wonderfully flawed in this story but he did strive to make up for it perfectly. I love your Snape. Also, after reading this story, your reviews mean that much more to me now.

    Also, I laughed my ass off at almost everything Harry said. I mean, I know it's evil and Poor Harry but still...

    There was much laughter. All the time.

    :)
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  • From padme82 on August 19, 2008
    Aww, how sweet. Of course that little flip at the end was just so sweet and so cute. Whenever there's frantic pacing or any emotion other than annoyance we always assume it's Harry. That was very clever, dear.
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  • From dirtydarella on August 14, 2008

    This story is gold!

    I have to admit, I was a little worried in the beginning with Sev
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  • From cravedom on August 02, 2008
    I have a favorite new word: whalesomeness, let
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  • From hqudsi0489 on August 01, 2008
    me calling harry the ultimate preggo man was a compliment. u kno what soooo funny? I bet half the female authors on aff are mommies...the other half are to young or in school. it just came to when u mentioned that having had ur own children. btw, I commend u all on the whole thing cause damn.... my ex-wife was blue in this face and screaming obsenities in like 5 different languages. I mean my son was huge when he was born, that would be it. I see u also spared us the details of the birthing scene....THANK-YOU!!!!!! I just find it just a tad scary.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 31, 2008
    Aw! Cute names!
    Great chapter!
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 31, 2008
    Very nice names, and what a sweet chapter. I laughed again about Harry's worry over his bits and his disgust at growing breasts.

    I liked the near disagreement over what Severus would be called. Harry's thoughtful analysis of why he didn't want Severus to be called 'father' was completely in character, and very telling on the relationship they will each enjoy with their daughters. Will there be more? I want to see Severus completely wrapped around those two little girls' fingers and Harry having to be the strong disciplinarian. You know Severus is going to be a puddle of goo with those girls.

    How bout Severus have the baby next. That would be fun.
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  • From SickPuppy on July 31, 2008
    Ahhhhhhhhhhh - You've made me go all soft and girly inside! What a lovely chapter, and the girls seem utterly delightful. Sev was fabulous, by the way, so panic stirken and yet so good once the girls were there. I can't wait to read all about Severus playing "Horsey" with Katherine or Annabella! Bravo! SP
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  • From SickPuppy on July 28, 2008
    Poor Severus! I really do feel sorry for him having to put up with crabby Harry! You write this so well I can picture the guilt on Severus' face as he sneaks off for some rest! Looking forward to the birth - which should be soon, right? RIGHT?! SP
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  • From ANON - Hassan on July 25, 2008
    DAMN YOU!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!! by the way, love the story......ALTHOUGH......i have been around many pregnant women.....my ex-wife included....and they weren't all that bad....u made harry into the ulitmate preggo man.....he's nvr been like this in any other fic....but this IS ur fic so I guess what ever u want flies....what are u gonna name the grls? please, nothing that no one has ever heard of or unisex names. I also think u should make them call harry "mummy" or something like that. that kinda stuff is the funniest stuff ever. lol! good luck with the fic, update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hassan on July 25, 2008
    DAMN YOU!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!! by the way, love the story......ALTHOUGH......i have been around many pregnant women.....my ex-wife included....and they weren't all that bad....u made harry into the ulitmate preggo man.....he's nvr been like this in any other fic....but this IS ur fic so I guess what ever u want flies....what are u gonna name the grls? please, nothing that no one has ever heard of or unisex names. I also think u should make them call harry "mummy" or something like that. that kinda stuff is the funniest stuff ever. lol! good luck with the fic, update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mary on July 24, 2008
    wow..you updated this while I was reading.
    I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes.

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