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Reviews for I'll Be Home For Christmas

By : Jilliane
  • From tambrathegreat on June 29, 2008
    Chapter 2

    I can imagine that Severus would be quite the protective worry wart over a lover. His life has led him to expect the worst from fate, I believe. Yummy schoolmasterly fantasies are in my mind right now when you saidt he bit about Snape's teacherly instincts kicking in.

    Mr. worst case scenario and the twenty questions. That bit was funny.

    Chapter 3

    "It, however, comes as no surprise that it's you that finally did it." Funny line. I loved it. Oh, and now Harry is suddenly breakable because he's a little preggers? I like the humor you use in the story.

    Chapter 4

    I'm glad you gave an overview of their coming together. The whole Lily factor is why I'm so squicked by Snarry romances,but you make it seem almost like Harry is Snape's true love and Lily was the means for him to find him. I like that better than Snape trying to get the mother through the son.

    Yes, it always comes back to Dumbledore. Lay everything at his feet. Darn him makin Snape love Potter. I am feeling pathos that Snape might go through.

    CHapter 5

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  • From tambrathegreat on June 29, 2008
    Sweet chapter, and I liked how you didn't reveal who was doing the worrying until the end.
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  • From ANON - Lilith Rose on June 02, 2008
    i really love the story so far. i just want to read a happy story and not one that makes you want to cry and that's what you gave. i really hope to see the rest of this soon.
    -Lilith Rose
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  • From ANON - xaraxn on May 26, 2008
    menstration!!!! lol grat story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2008
    please update soon.

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  • From liza on May 06, 2008
    first of all.. thank you so much for the dedication! i feel so honored. and it was a great chapter too. it was warm, touching and funny too. i'm relieved to see severus portrayed as semi insensitive and annoyed and guilt ridden. having dealt with my own husband through two borderline insane pregnancies, i tire of seeing severus being this amazingly sensitive and intuitive father to be. i love harry's hormones forcing him to voice just how miserable he is and wanting to make severus just as miserable. i remember doing the same thing. on one hand i wanted to suck it up and be a martre but on the other hand i wasn't happy unless my husband was fully aware of how horrible i felt and nothing short of his apologizing for my misery every moment of every day would have made me happy. lol. and god forbid if he complained about anything! i would take his head off. "you think YOU had trouble sleeping? try getting sleep while a miniature person is STANDING on your ribs, you bastard!" on the other hand, if he showed any amount of unsuspecting compassion, i just wanted to hug and kiss him and do something special for him. this was brilliant and a joy to read. and thanks again.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 05, 2008
    Alright, everyone come on now, all at once...
    "AWWWWWW!"


    update!
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  • From ANON - Veracityrules on May 05, 2008
    I love this story. It elicits both fits of laughter and buckets of tears. Great job, hurry up with an update please!
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  • From dominique1 on May 05, 2008
    that was funny and i love it it warms the heart you describe being pregnant very good for a male poor sev
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  • From SickPuppy on May 05, 2008
    And again, another brilliant chapter! I love that you've created a past for McGonagall (and yes, I was nodding when you called yourself anal). Everything in this chapter was great - the way Severus felt about Harry, the way he felt guilty and just wanted a break from it all, and the way he clearly does love the brat, even when he's being a harridan .. erm.. man.
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  • From ANON - Evange on May 04, 2008
    Aw, Severus is trying to do the right thing. He deserves better than such flippant behaviour from Harry. At least he loves the little bugger enough to do right by him. I can't wait till the babies are born.
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  • From ANON - Evange on May 03, 2008
    LOL, Poor Severus, he wasn't sure about his "baby", now he finds out their are two, and girls on top of it. Secretly I hoped it would be a girl. Molly will whip them both into shape in no time. Grandmum Molly, to Severus Snape's children. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Evange on May 03, 2008
    Sometimes I think Harry is just about the biggest ass there is. He is so childish sometimes, he is going to be a father/mother it is about time he stopped his whining. I think he is the jealous one. Jealous of what Severus felt for his mother. And just because he doesn't remember her as a mother doesn't mean he should refer to her by her first name. He needs to grow up. He is a man now, no longer a boy.
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  • From ANON - Evange on May 03, 2008
    Well, Ginny Weasley. Severus might have some reason to be jealous if Ginny is the one Harry goes to with his problems. Is there a chance that Harry will go back to Ginny if Severus tells Harry he doesn't want the baby? She does come from a big family and knows Harry very well. Poor Harry, always wanting a family of his own. Not fair of him to tell Molly first, is it?
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  • From SickPuppy on May 03, 2008
    Chapter 16 - WOW! I actually felt my stomach drop at this bit: "Oh no, don't apologise," Severus said growled, "after all, isn't this the sort of thing you bloody Gryffindors live for? Far be it for me to spoil your fun for the day, Harry, since you've had precious little to be happy about lately. What with the mood swings and the temper tantrums, and your clothes not fitting, and the kitchen's not having the proper cream crackers for you, and my not being able to say anything right lately. By all means, have your joke at my expense, isn't that what I'm here for, Harry? I did, after all, promise to take care of you for the rest of our lives."

    But the yummy smut more than made up for it! Bravo for another well exceuted chapter!
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