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Reviews for Wizard Hanyou

By : sephrothlay
  • From ANON - Just a Helper on March 14, 2008
    I forgot to add my email so here is is: BoyHuggles@Gmail.com There we are. All set now. ^^
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  • From ANON - Just a helper on March 14, 2008
    Hello, I just wanted to say that I enjoy your story. You make your characters come to life and sound full, which is quite amusing to me. There is one thing that I would like to point out that would allow your story to run smoother. I notice that you jump from the first person to the third person a lot. This confuses the reader momentarilly and takes away from the story that you are writing. This is the only flaw that I noticed so far, but if you would like I can help correct your story as a second Beta? Sorry for the mini English lesson but I am in English 207 (A college course) And all of this has been drilled into my mind now. @_@ Anyways, I hope my suggestion has helped you out a bit and if you would like you can email me requesting for more suggestions on how to correct a story. Other then that You have a great concept going and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From HoneySanpia1 on March 13, 2008
    i want to read more soo please please write more soon ^_^ thanks
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  • From Ladyroo88 on March 13, 2008
    love it More please
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  • From SakuraMaxwellMinamino on March 12, 2008
    Ooooohhhhh.I loved it. I have some suggestions. First. Pairings? I think the Harry/Kurama/Hiei one you suggested would be a damn sexy pairing. Colors though.
    Yukina-Ice Blue
    Genkai-Pale/Neon Blue
    Botan-Dark Pink
    Remus-Amber/Gold

    That's all I can think of.The roses are supposed to be from makai right? So the unusual colors are explained right? Update soon as RL allows.
    Ja
    Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
    aka
    Eternity/Hitokiri Shi Kuroi

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  • From kallipso on March 11, 2008
    Great chapter I hope that I get to read more soon.
    Here are my suggestions for colors:
    Koenma- bluish /purple color of his clothing as a teenager
    Yukina - light green-healing energy
    Botan- pink like her kimono
    Genkai - (Ending soon)- light green- spirit wave color
    Shizuru-dark orange- similar to Kuwabara because they are family
    Snape- dark green- potions
    Remus- gold- color of the moon
    Sirius- midnight blue
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  • From ANON - sunao on March 11, 2008
    Color for rose: Koenma/Brown - Yukina/blue - Botan/Pink - Genkai/Dark Pink
    I have 1 question. Since Dumbledork is evil and the wizard world stupide, Voldemort is he good or bad ?

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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on March 10, 2008
    Yay! Your Back! It has been awhile so I am glad you have come back. As for that reviewer, ignore him. It's called good writing when you develop you characters and not make them super powerful instantly. You are developing your chatacters so they are more realistic. In real life you don't become strong by snapping your fingers, you have to work for it. Grr anyway I like your story, fighting and all. I hope you continue writing and just ignore the idiots. (p.s. if that was the review exactly then he can't say much because his spelling is horrible, I know I have issues but at least I am not afraid of the dictionary. lol now I am ranting but as a fellow writer I understand where your coming from)
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  • From Ladyroo88 on February 02, 2008
    First things first who is going to be harrys love interest?? he is going to go to the dark toruament?? Then for the life force roses:
    Koenma-Gold(being the prince and all)or gray(prince of dead)
    Yukina-the color of her tear gems
    Botan- either the color of her eye or hair
    Genkai the light pink of her hair when she was young
    Kuwabara-orange(the color of his hair
    Shizuru-??
    Snape-purple and gold(because of being bonded)
    Remus-gold andd pruple(because of being bonded)
    Sirius-gryfffindor red
    Bill-light green
    Charlie-dark green
    Draco-silver(???)
    Lucius-???
    those are my ideas please post more!!!!
    Kisses
    ladyroo
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on January 03, 2008
    Yay for the full Chapter 7, its long so I can see why it took awhile to get out. I decided to wait untill it was complete before I reviewed. Evil Hunters attacking Harry like that I hope they get whats coming to them. Oh will Draco be making an appearance soon, I figure he would since he gets a life Rose and all. Well here are my choices for colors:
    Koenma-gold
    Yukina-ice blue
    Botan-blue
    Genkai-grey
    Kuwabara-orange
    Shizuru-brown
    Snape-dark blue almost black aka blueblack
    Remus-amber
    Sirius-purple
    Bill-sea green
    Charlie-green
    Draco-light silver
    Lucius-dark(sorta tarnished) silver

    Oh will Keiko need a rose or is she not part of the pack? If she is my choice is pink. I like her but if it doen't work for the story I can understand her not being added especially if you make Yusuke gay. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more. I am off for the next 2 weeks so I need to be entertained otherwise I will go stir crazy, so update soon.
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  • From sanda on January 03, 2008
    good chapter

    I need some help deciding what colour the Life Force Roses are going to be. Here are some of the ones I already know:

    White
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  • From Vampirezdarkgurl on January 01, 2008
    Great chapter keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Raven on January 01, 2008
    I hope that Harry helps Yusuke beat that demon up. He could probably also help Genkai train him when the tournament is over.
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  • From sanda on January 01, 2008
    good chapter, I like it
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  • From ANON - Raven on December 31, 2007
    Love the story! I hope that this will be a Harry/Kurama pairing. Can Harry be a Spirit Detective and work with the others? I bet that it was Ron who told Dumbledore. How else did Dumbledore know about a black kitsune? I say that he should kill him the next time Harry sees him.
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