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Reviews for A Family Together

By : Carmeleyes23
  • From pywacket on March 04, 2008
    this story is great! love the idea of the biiiig Potter family and of Snape being the one pregnant
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  • From Leentjef on March 02, 2008
    this was very very good story
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2008
    What took you so long?!!!
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  • From xhedwigx on February 24, 2008
    I like it, like it, just like it
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  • From gwenivere73 on February 04, 2008
    Really good, I hope you update soon.
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  • From dominique1 on January 07, 2008
    i must say i not only like this story i like the fact that you suggested a review in a very good way. back to storyi want more keep up
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  • From TorturedAngelgqb on January 03, 2008
    Awesome! more soon, pls. :)
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  • From Cindygirl15 on January 01, 2008
    I think this is a wonderful story. Thank you. Two things I would like to comment on though (I hope you don't mind, because this is just my opinion, for what it is worth): First, I think if would be great if you slowed down the pace of the story a bit and allowed for a little more character development. Second, before posting give a check through or perhaps have a beta check your writing. Small mistakes such as using "patronage" rather than "parentage" when mentioning Draco's new parents can be a bit distracting. Please continue to write. Congratulations on a very unique story line.
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  • From DarkKat on January 01, 2008
    Love it! Write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2008
    Are you trying to make everyone Potters? Just how many children are Har and Sev going to have by the ending of this story?!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 01, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From on January 01, 2008
    I love this story and the way you gave Harry a really big family and people who love him unconditionally.
    please continue it and I will review it every time.
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  • From masterpenguin on January 01, 2008
    woot! Ha! Ron got the what for! Yay for Harry and Snape and the Weasley's smart enough not to be. Update soon.
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  • From dominique1 on January 01, 2008
    so love this story its cute i like the plot my only problem is demanding reviews because alot people just read and if the stories really good they don,t think about reviewing you should look at the hit instead. i also no because i read 1000s of stories and hardliy ever review
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  • From Makovaso on December 31, 2007
    I like it!!! Please, please update soon!!!
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