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Reviews for The Sins Of A Father

By : Bunnyboiler
  • From ANON - Krishna on March 14, 2008
    please make Potter die a slow, horrid, vile death. I really do love this story.
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  • From dominique1 on March 14, 2008
    wow that was really good but the eneding was kind of cut off. i like the fact the harry and sev are together.answer to your question yes we are only human i think that if a person loves another family member not related by blood than they should fallow their heart. as far as incest yuck but i also no that i had sex at a young age and my partner was older than me i also had a kid in my teen's so now threwing stone's from me
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  • From Extraho on March 14, 2008
    ah. reading that again was like a breath of fresh air. i've been busy as hell (school) and i started a few new stories - you know me- and finished a few as yell *clapping*

    still love the story!! expecially the ending. it really reflect's Severus' intelectual and complicated mind, which is really the bigges compliment i can give.

    ~ Extraho
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  • From Jan on March 14, 2008
    OMG!!! What has he done! Lucius is truly insane! Poor Sirius!

    Though, now that he's goon, how is Lilly going to be the bad guy? I don't want Harry to be it. But I don't believe in Lilly "angelic" act. I had always though of her and Sirius having something going on, however, she excuse herself out that one, and now he's dead, either she becomes the bad guy or your going to kill her. I prefer the bad guy.

    As for both Lucius and Riddle, I hope something horrendous happens to them both. Severus can't excuse everything for ever with "I'm doing this to protect them", "I want them to be happy, after all isn't that what a father/husband should do?", "I have to put up with Lucius/Riddle, for the greater good of my family"(yes I know those aren't your word, but you know what I mean, right?(Hopefully)) Cause that's just bullshit. (sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh. It's just that it's getting old)...(and I'm trying to help, in my own twisted ways. I'm a person that likes to hear the truth and in return I give it back) I love this story, so very much, I just want to see where this is going.

    Hope to see chapter 32 soon. ^_^
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  • From dominique1 on March 13, 2008
    All i can say is dame that was hot i love that part where harry say give it back.
    luc is a sick person will updated soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee i love it
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  • From ANON - amazingZ on March 12, 2008
    What a surprise. I'm beginning to wonder what's going on with this story. I feel as though no more plot can be added.. and then all of a sudden; Surprise. Another extreme event to add to the story's plot.
    I think the story is starting to drag a bit. It was an excellent beginning but the story seems like it's going nowhere. Lily still hasnt found out, Severus still has feelings for Lily, Lucius is still deranged, and Harry is just an immature needy brat. Harry's interaction with Severus makes me feel as though they werent meant to be together at all. He's too needy and immature for such a secret relationship. Especially after he threatens Severus that he'll tell on them. Also after the way he said he'd leave Sev alone.. and breaks that promise almost immediately. As for Lily, when are you planning on making her the bad guy? If ever at all? I dont want Harry to become the villain of the story and yet, it just seems impossible for this to happen because Lily is such a saint.
    Lucius is just getting annoying. I wish he'd go away so we could spend our whole time watching Severus resolve his feelings.
    Speaking of Severus, I understand the reality of his feelings for Lily but honestly, i feel as though he doesnt deserve either of them. I dispise the fact that he keeps telling himself that he's "protecting them" but its so not true. He's doing it cause he wants them both for himself and the repetition of the words "I'm protecting them" and "I love them both so much" are getting so old. I wish Harry would realize that he deserves better than a man that loves another... and when he realizes this and leaves Sev, Sev will realize his mistake in choosing Lily and go after Harry. Is this all wishful thinking or will it happen eventually? I love this story yet there are so many things about it that frustrates the crap out of me.
    I've also noticed the decline in grammatical skill. There are many errors that just makes me squirm in my seat. I've noticed the point where your beta left you. It's not horrible and I do love your writing style.. its just that there are many grammatical errors in your chapters.
    Please reply in your next update? I'd love to see your view of your story and I'd love it if you gave us a clue on how you end your story. I'm a loyal reader to the end. I really do enjoy reading this story and I appreciate the frequent updates. I dispise stories that release chapters once a month.
    Oh yes, I also read about the new story that you're writing. It seems interesting and I look forward to it. I'll definately be reading it in the future. :) Hope that you update soon. (Though you already do.)
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  • From alma on March 12, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From dominique1 on March 12, 2008
    dame you just keep getting better and better. i love the fact that you updated alot i love that the plot is sooooooo good and the cliffs keep me wanting more. but how will harry feel about his mum getting preg and will harry and sev make it i hope all have to reread again
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 12, 2008
    *sighs* Much happier now. I feel like I'm on a roller coaster when I'm reading this story. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 12, 2008
    Augh! I was hoping that Sev & Lily would divorce and he and Harry would get together. There's always future chapters right??? Great job.
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  • From dominique1 on March 12, 2008
    i was so waiting t hate lily but i can;t she said she din't cheat on sev dame willplease up date soon
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  • From dominique1 on March 12, 2008
    i was so waiting t hate lily but i can;t she said she din't cheat on sev dame willplease up date soon
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  • From dominique1 on March 11, 2008
    okay that was good but shit i was happy for a moment i believed lily cheated on sev and now she didn't i don'tknow who to vote for harry or lily no just kidding harry all the way. oh what does james do to harry that he always has nightmares
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  • From alma on March 11, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on March 11, 2008
    good chapter.
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