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Reviews for The Sins Of A Father

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  • From alma on March 11, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From nsal on March 11, 2008
    I'm in a love/hate relationship with this story. Why the fuck is Harry so fucking desperate?! HE's content to play second banana to another person? Is Snape really worth that?! Ugh. If I were him, I would just ignore Snape-shit. This fucking story has too many rollercoaster moments! I dont know how you intend to conclude this story anytime soon. Its getting ridiculously winding. And now that Lilly-whore is knocked up again, its gonna be impossible to end soon, unless you do a huge time skip. I've had it with this story. Fuck it and fuck you.
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  • From DarkGothic on March 10, 2008
    eek... what about harry though? damn this story is hard to pull away from however you need to watch out for some words for ex you keep putting the word "was" in places where the word "were" is supposed to go.
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 10, 2008
    MORE!!!!!!!!!! Isn't turn about fair play?? I really do enjoy this and can't wait for the updates.
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 10, 2008
    Interesting turn of events... About freaking time Sev admitted how he felt.
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  • From dominique1 on March 10, 2008
    yes yes i so love this part lily is a bitch from the conversation lily has been cheating on sev for years i only hope that. that sev gets custdoy of his sons and that harry and sev will be together but sev will tell harry about luc up cated soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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  • From nsal on March 10, 2008
    ooh interesting. although i really dont want harry to stay with severus. snape doesnt deserve harry! doesnt harry see that he's just being used?! and get rid of lilly! she's a bitch!
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 09, 2008
    Great Chapter. Can't wait for the next update. Sometimes Harry's so much a teenager...dating someone to make mom & dad mad. Glad it worked. :) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Krishna on March 09, 2008
    Oi. Couldn't Sev have opened the door and pushed Malfoy out of the plane?!?!?!?!?
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  • From ANON - secretlf24 on March 09, 2008
    AAAHH!! I hate hate hate Lucius!! He needs to die a very horrible death!! Please tell me you get rid of him very quickly!!

    But other than that, I loved the update and loved it when Severus says,"He's mine"
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  • From Ravenheart on March 09, 2008
    Gods... I hope Lucius dies a horrible death, soon.
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  • From DarkGothic on March 08, 2008
    ooo someone's jealous XD and LMAO!! on the "gangster" almost every parents worst nightmare XD it was funny
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  • From Jan on March 08, 2008
    Finally! He admits to his true feelings towards Harry!!!! I'm so Happy!!!

    Though... What the fuck is wrong with Lucius? Bloody wanker! Please(down on my knees, hand join with my fingers intertwined, in a preys like pose) have someone kill him in the most painful and most gruesome of ways. (Big puppy dog eyes, in plead) ^_~

    Please update chapter 26 soon.

    Jan



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  • From dominique1 on March 08, 2008
    sinfully sweet i love it i ike how harryis tyig o move on but i love how sev know realized that harrys his but still i want lily to be cheating on sev with siri so i can feel better if harry gets sev.
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  • From alma on March 08, 2008
    Really good.
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