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Reviews for The Sins Of A Father

By : Bunnyboiler
  • From ANON - Z on March 08, 2008
    alright, so thanks for the update again. we're still waiting for everything to come together.
    What bothers me though, is the lack of Snarry these last few chapters. I know it's all a part of the plot, but I really cant tell where Severus stands. He feels jealousy for Harry and yet, he still loves Lily. Then there's the bit with Lucius.
    I'm just worried over how we're already at the 25th chapter and there's been what seems like more of Severus/Lily(lucius) than Snarry. I'm just worried for the outcome of the story because you're saying that the ending is approaching soon and there hasn't been as much severus / harry interaction as i would have hoped.

    anyway, on the brighter side, the climax is approaching soon and i cant wait to see how everything turns out. i really hope that i am not disappointed. snarry is just dying out these days and i cant seem to find many fics that i like.

    there were a few parts to this chapter that could have been reworded. It's a bit confusing and it had me rereading some of the sentences. A beta would be incredibly helpful. If not, its alright.

    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on March 07, 2008
    OMG! Lucius is such a bitch! This is the second time today a fic has totally shocked me like this, I'm worried for my health lol. Anyways, I LOVE THIS FIC! I also can't wait for you other fic sound really interesting.
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  • From alma on March 05, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From ANON - krishna on March 05, 2008
    I really, really, REALLY has Lucius. What a dink for doing that to Sev. Can you make Malfoy have a heart attack or something? Please tell me that Sev somehow extracts some sort of E-V-I-L revenge on Malfoy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - krishna on March 05, 2008
    Wish I had a room like that when I go on holiday. Geeze. Would someone please just smack Lucius or at least push him off the balcony? Grr. Great job. Love your writing style.
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  • From nsal on March 05, 2008
    Ugh! This story sucks! :( Why is everything getting so difficult for Snape?! Why cant Harry be happy?! Why cant he atleast try to move on, make it look like he's over Sev to make him jealous?! Why'd you make harry so fucking needy?! WhYW HYWHWYWHWYWHWY? uh. I'm so over this.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on March 05, 2008
    And can I advise the deletion of Review #3001170644. It really stretches out the screen.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on March 05, 2008
    Yeah, he should have just told Lily and made sure to emphasize the drugging. If he really wanted to, he could make a case for rape (which wouldn't really be a lie), but I guess he probably feels to guilty to do so with what happened with Harry to do that. Oh well, I can see that things will not be turning in a positive direction. I just hope that things don't spin too out of control.
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  • From whitedragon on March 05, 2008
    interesting.....please update....want to find out what happens
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  • From alma on March 04, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on March 04, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on March 04, 2008
    WOW!!!
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  • From yaoified on March 04, 2008
    *cries* poor harry!
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  • From amazingZ on March 03, 2008
    thanks for the update. :) things are getting more and more interesting.
    i'm just worried that harry is becoming a home wrecker. he said he'd never bother severus again but he did.
    could you make it so that severus initiates the next sexual interaction between then.. i really dont want harry to turn out as the bad guy. :'(

    well thats just my input. cant wait for the next update. i'll be waiting.
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  • From Jan on March 03, 2008
    Ouch! That's harsh. Poor Harry.

    Please update chapter 22 soon. I can't wait to see what Riddle and Malfoy have planned for Severus. ^_~

    Jan
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