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Reviews for The Sins Of A Father

By : Bunnyboiler
  • From SilverPhoenix69 on January 10, 2008
    Wow. People actually said your were racist for that chapter? I've read a LOT worse then what you put in, and no body thought a thing. Fiction is fictions. And even if thats what you meant, its NOT REAL! What you write doesn't make things real, or what you think. Its just part of the story, to bad people can't see that. Don't listen to them, if they have a problem then they should just not read the fic.

    Anyways I hope you write soon, I want to see what happens next, and can't wait for the snarry to start *winks*
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  • From amazingZ on January 07, 2008
    I read the AN last night and checked up on everything and was extremely displeased to see such things that people would say to you.
    They said that racism shouldn't be taken lightly and that it should not be a joke. Exactly who said it was? We all know that racism isn't something to take lightly but face it, it happens everyday. Bunny, your story was not in the least bit racist and it was a shame that they didn't even give you a chance to explain. One of them merely said they wouldn't even continue to read this story because of it! It angered me and so, I decided that I would give them a slice of my opinions. I don't care if you say that it was childish because I let out my thoughts and it certainly made me feel better.

    I love this story to bits. There are parts to it that could get some fixes but it certainly doesn't deserve the bits of comments that it received. Flames are alright- after all, everyone is entitled to their own opinions. Implying that a perfectly guilt-free author is racist of all things- is not alright.

    I'm sorry if you're disappointed in me Bunnyboiler, but I still like you. :) I cant wait for the next update. Do so soon.
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  • From ANON - Blackcatuk on January 07, 2008
    I am Japanese and I do not think you are racist. Also I agree with your point of view. When I read that chapter, well
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  • From Jan on January 07, 2008
    Wow! First, let me say that after I read your A/N, I decided to check the reviews to see what comments were said.

    Second, I have to confess that everything I was planning on saying to you was just stolen when I read what Extraho wrote. So in short, I wont repeat it just know that I agree completely with Extraho, Kate, Brandi, and kirraluv.

    Hopefully Both Jilliane and SickPuppy reads your AN, 'cause I think that they should first off know the truth, and then they should at least apologize for jumping to conclusions, before asking. My mother always say, when in doubt always ask.

    Hope you update chapter 14/13 soon. ^_^

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  • From Extraho on January 07, 2008
    someone actually called you a racist. damn, thats dumb. completely agreee with the authors note. people are idiots. though i undersdtand the importancy of people knowing the seveirty about this stuff, i could really live my life more comfortably without having images of a 2 year old being fucked by a 50++ in my mental photo library. yuck! poor kid. made my stomach churn.

    as for SickPuppy and Jilliane, you should read the chapter a few more times before you critizize. yes, it was written that it happened quite often in Japan, but it also said ; "this IS London. We should not have to look TOO hard to satisfy your needs,"
    im sorry are you going to slag the author for discriminating against brits too? good luck.
    and Sev is not being set forth as ignorant, fact is London is a financial hot spot and it is not uncommon to have clients from around the globe. this client happened to be japaneise, so the focus ended up there.

    as for the name. seriously that is the lames excuse for a flame i have ever seen!!! i've got norwegian, irish, english, american, german, frech and italian bloodlines, but my name is irish. Get a grip, just because the name is Chinese does not mean that the man can't be from Japan.

    oh, that felt good. so, im done yelling at ignorant reviewers now. it just pisses me off so much! love your story though. i really do. its so exciting to be inside sev's head!!! im waiting eagerly for future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Kate on January 06, 2008
    I'm anxiously waiting the next update! I wouldn't pay too much mind to the comment your AN responded too, Leiwong could be Japanese and still have a name from a different language - Could've had a Chinese father/ Japanese mother and grew up in Japan, making him Japanese - and being an avid lover of Japan and its culture, I didn't take offense in anyway... I would just advise you to view this issue as a hiccough many people go through when writing - there is always going to be one person who disagrees with something no matter how innocuous or off-handed ^^ I personally love your story and I wring my hands waiting for the next chapter!

    Love

    Kate
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  • From ANON - ~Brandi on January 06, 2008
    OMG I LOVE YOU. you show them. i love how you just took a stand against all those stupid-ass commenters. they obviously have no life if they criticize something you didnt even write. i love your story and how realistic it is. if they cant handle it dont even bother with them. they obviously have major issues. please continue writing.

    B
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2008
    ...dumb...
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 06, 2008
    Yeah you go bunnyboiler! I completely agree
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  • From Jilliane on January 06, 2008
    Well. Spelling, grammar and sentence structure mistakes aside, this was a fairly decent story until you decided to smear the entire nation of Japan with the pedophile brush. I am, frankly, astounded that niether you nor your beta seem to think this is wrong, but then to have your beta leave a review that contained possibly the most tasteless and offensive joke I have ever seen is beyond the pale. Racism is not a joke. Needless to say, I won't be reading the rest of this story.

    And, by the way, as another reviewer pointed out, Leiwong is not a Japanese name, which somehow makes it all just that more offensive, as you've now swiped the Chinese nation with the same brush by association.
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  • From SilverPhoenix69 on January 05, 2008
    I was stupid to start reading this *sighs*

    Great story so far. I love non magical fics! I'd right more but, I have to work in 3 hours. Nights!
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  • From alma on January 04, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From SickPuppy on January 04, 2008
    Just read chapter 12 and have a few things I think need clarifying:

    1) I don't think you meant to be incredibly racist in this chapter, but the implication is there that the Japanese are paedophiles. Yes, no doubt there are children who work as prostitutes in Japan, just as there are in England, America, etc. etc. But, by stating that MOST of them were under 12 implies that the Japanese are only intersted in children.

    2) Some reserach is needed (clearly) as Leiwong is NOT a Japanese name.

    3) Your beta is missing a few glaring errors - it is wrong to say "swear by Buddhist". "swear by Buddha" "swear by Buddism" are both fine. Perhaps your beta needs to be given more time to proof read? I understand the desire to update quickly, but some grammatical errors are in this story that make it very difficult to follow.

    4) It's lovely that your beta is so enthusiastic, but leaving a review that implies "Leiwong" is interested in all children is frankly adding further offense.

    5) You spotted that some of your comments were sexist, but didn't spot a huge slur against the Japanese? The fact that you had SEVERUS making this judgement made it worse - he is not an ignorant man!
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  • From alma on December 31, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on December 31, 2007
    good chapter.
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