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Reviews for The Sins Of A Father

By : Bunnyboiler
  • From amazingZ on December 30, 2007
    i really really really really liked it! i cant wait to read more.. please update lots! don't torture us like this! especially since it's finished being written! i love the story.

    one word of advice though.
    I'd go back and delete the caps lock on certain words. i know you capitalize certain words to show us emphasis on Severus's tone but it really isn't necessary. it's just fanfiction but it makes the story look more unprofessional and annoying to certain readers. maybe its just me? but i'd prefer the chapters without caps lock unless its extremely necessary.

    cant wait for more! much love-
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  • From ANON - Krishna on December 29, 2007
    Interesting story. Not quite sure how I feel yet. It's.....an interesting take. However, it's well written, got great moments (loved the Sev/Sirius banter). Will say this: you've got a fan and I'll continue reading. :)
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  • From ANON - candy on December 29, 2007
    update soon
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  • From SecretLover on December 29, 2007
    I am so totally loving this story! You are an awesome writer, so tell my buddy to hurry up her beta-ing! lol! Or I'll tell her later! Good work, though! I love it! *stares at computer, waiting for next update*
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  • From ANON - Becky Boo on December 29, 2007
    Do you know what an 'incomplete' or 'fragmented' sentence is? Your story has an annoyingly large number of them. You may want to find a beta reader to help you with your grammar and sentence structure.
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  • From ANON - Krishna on December 28, 2007
    can't wait to read more. I'm really enjoying.
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on December 28, 2007
    I'm a little confused. Is this supposed to be Snarry or is this all going to be SnapexLily? If so, shouldn't this fall under another category? I'm just asking, because the way you describe everything, it seems as if Snape thinks of Harry as only this son. This isn't a flame. It's just an inquiry.
    If this is a snarry, when is there going to be some Snape on Harry action?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2007
    OMGOSH. i love this story. i think the whole plotline is totally hott. GO SNARRY! woop.
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  • From ANON - taylor cherie on December 27, 2007
    its an interesting story so far. i hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - candy on December 27, 2007
    update soon
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  • From ANON - hailey on December 27, 2007
    This is certainly interesting so far. lol. Though, Jimmy IS Snape's biological son, right? I'm sure of it, but Jimmy is a nickname for James, isn't it? I figured it would be odd for them to name their son after her ex husband. lol. Anyway, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From Jan on December 26, 2007
    OMG! I something like that ever happen to me with one of my girls I don't know what I would do with myself. But I'm glad to see little Jimmy didn't get to see nor hear anything that was going on. Was Harry saying that he loved him, as a father and son love, at the moment or does he already has feelings for his papa? Was that the real reason for him not interrupting their activities when he saw what was about to happen?

    Please update chapter 5 ^_^
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  • From SecretLover on December 26, 2007
    Danni was right, this IS turning out to be a good story! lol! Well, keep it up...or should I tell her that?
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  • From SecretLover on December 26, 2007
    oooh! I hope to read more soon!
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  • From alma on December 26, 2007
    Good start.
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