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Reviews for Giving and Taking

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  • From catysmom1028 on July 20, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Angie30 on July 16, 2008
    The shower scene was HOT!
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 25, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From catysmom1028 on June 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From diamondmouse on June 04, 2008
    this is fantastic! omg wow! i love this side of them
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  • From diamondmouse on June 04, 2008
    this is fantastic! omg wow! i love this side of them
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 04, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Tenar10r on January 04, 2008
    Still good!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Prospera on January 04, 2008
    I don't think Hermione's explanation of why she helps her friends here makes sense. I don't think she does it to be kind because they can't do the work. I think she thinks of it as tutoring them, helping them learn more. The speech you wrote for her makes her sound like a Hufflepuff...but I like the story overall. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Delfin on December 28, 2007
    omg! ^.^

    its gettin even hotter *drools :D
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  • From CarlaRush on December 27, 2007
    Very good, I did catch one typo 'writer' I think. I had a beta once who told me that 'writing is painting a picture with words'. I think you may want to add a bit more description, but overall a very good start!
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  • From Sampdoria on December 27, 2007
    I really liked this and I look forward to read more. I am glad Severus can see both her mind and body, and finding what he sees attractive! I am quite sure Ron the prat will "discover" Hermione at some point, just don't in any way let Ron sucsess in any advances, the Hermione/Ron pairing is the most off-putting paring in the HP-fandome, I really can't stand it:-))
    Update again soon!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 27, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ginnyginny on December 27, 2007
    wow... those last few paragraphs were got... my face actally felt flushed! i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon!!!
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