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Reviews for The Seaside Retreat

By : AeroCherry
  • From Heidi191976 on January 10, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I am glad that Severus let Hermione tell about their relationship. I hope that Ron and Millicent can start dating. They would make a great couple. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 09, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From catysmom1028 on January 08, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From amd2175 on January 08, 2008
    This is a GREAT first story! I love the ideas, though it would be interesting if Draco started to "develop feelings for Hermione". You know transference? He gets feelings for her because he feels as if in a way she has saved him, not quite hero worship but what happens to psychologists a lot...just a thought, don't want to ruin what you have planned but alas there's an idea.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 08, 2008
    Another excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more to see how her get together with all of her friends and Draco's friends goes. I hope that they all get along.
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  • From bluezauza on January 08, 2008
    Please, please tell me that Draco, Blaize , and Millie are being honest about this, "house union"!! I'm not asking for long life friendships, but at least, some respect between them! I do believe that that was JK's failure, she did nothing to win or change, the prejudice that started the war! In the end nothing changed, many died, but prejudice stayed..and Harry and Ron were the worst at it!!I'm enjoying your story very much!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 07, 2008
    This was an excellent chapter. I think it would be a great if you do write in the drunken threesome, even if it is just a one time thing. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From CarlaRush on January 07, 2008
    Sorry I haven't reviewed for a bit, but I've been sick and am now just catching up. You seem to be doing much better, a bit freer in your writing. I hope you are enjoying yourself.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on January 07, 2008
    Gee you're good! I very much liked reading the chapters you posted since my last review. Keep it up!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 06, 2008
    Excellent. I liked the way Hermione and Severus both came up with the idea of making her an apprentice so that they could be together. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 06, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on January 05, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I am glad that Hermione was able to capture the three deatheaters before they were able to hurt her. I hope that they don't escape later from Azkaban. I look forward to reading more to see how Hermione reacts when Severus tells her that they can continue their relationship.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 04, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I am glad that Severus now has the blessings of both Albus and Minerva. I can't wait to read more to see how Hermione takes the news that they can be together even if it has to be kept a secret.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on January 04, 2008
    I really really like the direction you are taking this story and I hope you can add several more long chpaters to it. Please email me again when you have added another chapter!

    Great stuff!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 03, 2008
    This was an excellent chapter. It started out a little sad because of their conversation, but then I was happy when he decided to be with her for the summer. I hope that they continue to be with each other. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
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