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Reviews for The Seaside Retreat

By : AeroCherry
  • From catysmom1028 on January 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Julianne on January 03, 2008
    Hi nice fic. cant wait for your next update :D
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 02, 2008
    I thought this was a great chapter. However, I think it would have been a little better if it would have been Severus taking advantage of Hermione. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 01, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From CarlaRush on January 01, 2008
    Ok I had to review this. First of all, Hermione is not being portraied as perfect. Whoever said that I have to respectfully disagree. Why you ask? She is seudicing a man twice her age and her teacher to boot! You can have lots of fun with that alone. Examples : dad finds out, Minerva finds out, she gets knocked up, they are forced to marry. That's pff the top of my head. How about she becomes an alchoholic? You have plenty of room for manuvering, let loose and have fun, Remember 'you can please some people some of the time, maybe most most of the time but never everyone all the time'. This is your story, do what pleases you.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on December 31, 2007
    Oh I loved this chapter. I never thought I'd read something that had the lyrics to an old Bay City Rollers song. I was a huge fan during my youth...sigh...memories!!! Great story so far.

    Red

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  • From Heidi191976 on December 31, 2007
    An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon to see what Severus does when they get back to the cottage.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 30, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on December 30, 2007
    Excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Prospera on December 30, 2007
    Great story! Thanks for writing. They say to say something constructive in a review, so my constructive thing is: it should be "should have known better" not "should of known better." Thanks!
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  • From magicalheather999 on December 30, 2007
    This interesting and different from some others that I have read. Cant wait for more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 30, 2007
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon to see if Hermione can get the Professor to become interested in her.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on December 30, 2007
    Oh I like the way this story is going! Nothing much to comment on except you use the word 'Fall' instead of 'Autumn' I know both terms are correct but if you want to write in the british vein for of course british people I'd use 'Autumn' I doubt people like Snape would use an American terminology.

    Anyway great work. Please email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com when you post the next chapter I'd love to see where this story goes!

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  • From SiriuslyDistracted on December 30, 2007
    This is a great story! i love how you've written Hermione, she's so...i dont know the word for it. like one of those women in the old movies that knows exactually what she wants and is going to get it, screw the others. And Snape rolling his own...be still my beating heart!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 29, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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