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Reviews for Smirk

By : angelfromhigh
  • From kazfeist on November 09, 2008
    I thought I read this somewhere else....maybe Granger Enchanted? :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2008
    That was very entertaining 'for your first smut'. I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 22, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From R1DE on January 01, 2008
    I ABSOLUTELY LOVED how you transitioned back and forth between the past and present. It was like a really long fic, but tightly rolled into one compact, hot work of fiction .. =]. it was definitely AWESOME!
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  • From wudelfin on December 31, 2007
    LOVED IT!!!
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  • From mhaj78 on December 31, 2007
    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!
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  • From amyfeddy on December 31, 2007
    I loved it, it took a minute to get used to your style, but otherwise it was great fun to read.
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  • From myangeldraco on December 31, 2007

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  • From myangeldraco on December 31, 2007
    Well I enjoyed it!!!! You've got excellent writing skills xx very sexy and very witty!!!
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  • From Clare1984 on December 31, 2007
    I loved it. that smirk is the devil's work cos it just makes Draco even more gorgeous!
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  • From AlexisRose on December 31, 2007
    That was wonderful! I loved that it switched back and forth between past and present, and somehow I didn't think it was confusing at all to be honest. Maybe some parts I had to think about for like .002 seconds, but for the most part I thought it flowed really well. You had really smooth transitions, and the parts that weren't the present were kind of obvious because they weren't having sex lol. Lovely one shot though, especially for your first one! I hope you write more in the future.
    -Alexis
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  • From on December 31, 2007
    I"m a little confused. Was she marrying him? or someone else? I thought it was after they married but then he calls her Granger. Or is that just for endeering purposes.

    Also...I got a bit confused with the transition from now to back then. Since it was all run down the same it was hard to know what time you were on. Next time...write all of the flashback scenes in italicized form. That way it's easier on the eyes to know when you're coming back and forth.

    Aside from all of that...I really liked this oneshot.
    Looking forward for more of your fics.

    Lexy
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  • From luvhp on December 31, 2007
    LOVED IT!! I liked how you interacted the current with the past memories. Very well done!
    Happy New Year!
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  • From DarkLady on December 31, 2007
    It was a good first try at smut :) But you might want to separate the past/present perhaps in italics as it led to a very confusing read :)
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  • From bananasforyou on December 31, 2007
    omg i loved it!
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