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From Vittani on January 25, 2009
Brilliant chapter as always! So glad I get it before everybody, cos that means i get to read it again when you post it. Loved the Sev/Bill bit and the use of the lethitholds, most people go for dementors. Lol I did that in my own obstacle didnt I? Maybe should take a leaf out of your book and be a bit more original. Lol.
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From ANON - PantiesAreOverrated on January 25, 2009
damn! i hate cliffies! it's getting so excited. i love Bill's comment before Sev leaves! Severus is such a cute lil innocent virgin. i can't help but wonder how your going to form their relationship. and if and when he finally takes off the glamour. i also cant wait to see how you form harry and dracco's relationship.
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From IgnotusScriptor on January 07, 2009
Ok, so for starters, I absolutely love your story! I love the way you are writing Snape. He seems true enough to form to be the snarky bat, but just enough OOC to like Bill. I can't wait to see how that turns out. Also, love the way Harry isn't just 'automatically in love' with Draco. That's not the way it works! If you could, please email me when you update! Thx!

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From Invisabell on January 06, 2009
Is draco getting his sight back?
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From ANON - Toraus on January 06, 2009
I found this story today and I have been reading it between my classes. I really like it so far. I enjoyed reading in Draco's point of view, and Harry's drama over his sexually was very amusing. ^-^ I can't wait to read the next part of the rade. Yay for (almost) saving Draco from a creepy phyopath!
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From thrnbrooke on January 06, 2009
Soooo need chapter 14 prt 2!!! I hope Harry doesn't try to follow them!
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From ANON - Lisa on November 16, 2008
Excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm anxious to read about the rescue. :)
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From Vittani on November 11, 2008
Lol. I agree Remus is a little oblivious isnt he. So him even getting it first, is priceless. I wish Sirius had been evesdropping that conversation. How priceless would that have been you can just picture his jaw hitting the floor. lol.

anyway i really really loved this chapter. the chat between harry and sirius was sweet, with the perfect blend of humour and embarassment. Sirius' indignation over Remus being in the meeting and 'going anywhere near the darklord' was brilliant. I can't wait to see what he comes up with to stop him.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From thrnbrooke on November 11, 2008
Sooo need chapter 14!!! Will Sirius help?
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From Vittani on November 01, 2008
Hey hun

sorry it took so long to review. ^_^

this chapter was brilliant as always. I really loved how it went downhill for Draco so quickly. Although I was cursing your name as it happened. lol. But I still loved it. You know how to up the emotional tension dont you dear.

Sev is so dense! That was such a perfect moment. Wouldnt have been surprised if Remus fell off his chair in shock, he he. you really gave the impression that he'd been blindsided. Hope you put in snapes reaction when he realises exactly what he meant by that comment. And I hope remus is there to laugh at him.
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From ANON - sasukichan on October 28, 2008
yay!!! update!!! XDD

lol! snape's so thick sometimes... even i got the innuendo! i'm surprised lupin didn't fall off his chair... and imagine sirius's reaction! (good thing he wasn't there) on the outside, bill's going to come off as a player/flirt, but hopefully snape'll give him a chance, at least (ok, fat chance, this is snape we're talking about here) still, i'm really looking forward to how this pairing goes. it's just such an unusual couple, there's so much potential w/them b/c no one else have written them to death, u know? (and no, that's NOT a slur toward harry/draco, never ever ever!)

and talking about draco, man oh man! he totally kicked ass in this chapter, but considering the consequences of his little rebellion, i almost wished he had been less... himself. for one thing, he's obviously being tortured to an inch of his life, and for another... he gave his act away, and he nearly gave snape away! ~sigh. it's not his fault, he has so little control over his predicament, but i can't help but worry! get him out of there and into harry's arms already! i want some harry/draco smut ~whines~

lol. still, this chapter's been very informative, we found out so much about draco's (potential) powers and the potion and whatnot, and that little glimpse into voldemort's past (?) was just FREAKY. did the dark lord actually cared about someone once (a very very long ago once)? gah, now that's disturbing :P

anyways, love this story, as always, update soon again!
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From thrnbrooke on October 26, 2008
Sooo need chapter 13!!
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From bananasforyou on October 24, 2008
bill/severus? funny. i loved the chap!
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From ANON - sasukichan on September 28, 2008
moo~ last chapter t_t update soon, the action's only getting started!!!

omg, what's happening to draco... u're evil, to leave us hanging there as the door's about the open! seriously though, besides sleeping, draco must be bored out of his wits (when he's not scared out of his wits). i mean, he can't even see, that must be so stressful... is he even eating, or does voldemort force feed him? (oh man, bad bad thoughts/mental images there... hehe)

as for harry not getting any sleep, well, between worrying about draco and obsessing over the grimoyre, i'll take the former any day... how many days has it been since he found that book? since draco turned against voldemort? (i'm starting to loose track of the time line)

and the potion! how's that going to complicate their rescue plans? btw, i'm sensing some blatant bill/snape hints here... interesting pairing, i can't wait to see how that turns out... snape getting some action will be interesting... especially since he hasn't gotten any in ages, i think... lol. it's not an insult to him at all, believe me, i love the way u've written snape.

anyways, i wanna find out about the rescue plan! u can add that to the list of "mysteries unrevealed as of yet" from my last review... you really like to hang the proverbial carrot in front of ur readers don't u? well, it's not going to work with me! ... man, i'm a terrible liar.

anyways, love this story, as always, so glad i could finally read the updates, and do update again soon!
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From ANON - sasukichan on September 28, 2008
omg! chapter ten has to be my favoritest chapter ever!!! and shite, snape was hilarious! i love his sarcastic humour! is it only b/c he had a headache? lol. seriously, i almost feel bad for voldemort, that he'll never get to enjoy snape's mental commentaries...

and until u mentioned it, i almost forgot that draco's full name is draconis. it's just that nobody ever uses it, i mean, i can't even imagine harry calling him that... or maybe i could, it'd be an interesting pet name b/w the lovers (oh dear, now i'm getting too many ideas *grins blissfully*)

i wonder what's going on though... snape's not allowed to go back until he finished the potion? which he a) can't make, 'cause everyone who's ever tried has died (which brings up the rather interesting question of where the heck did ppl learn about it/found the recipe for it) b) won't make b/c it's voldemort and giving him what he wants is something u just don't do.

in both cases, snape's cover as a spy is blown, so he's decided to rescue draco right now!? (hence the whole "dumbledore's not the only one that comes up with crazy plans" inner ramble) omg, i'm so hyped!!! (ok, calm down, girl, it's probably not what u're thinking)

gah, this'll be a lot clearer if we know what that potion does... heck, there's so many mysteries abound right now... draco's powers, the scary mind-controlling book, the potion, draco's sexuality (u did spill that harry's gay... i wonder if he has come out yet), wtf is going on in voldemort's mind (ok, that'll forever remain a mystery, thank you very much)

anyways, i'm off to the next chapter...

btw, the remus/sirius moment was ADORABLE, i was awwing the whole time, i wish i knew what sirius said when he was delirious, and i wish harry was there to hear it... his mental image of his godfather would've been forever changed/scarred... remus was pushing the emo boundary, but they're together now, so i'm totally not complaining!
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