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From Vittani on July 27, 2008
I love this chapter it is definitely my favorite so dar.

I dont know who to beg you to put Sev with. I usually beg for him to go with Remus but he's taken (whines). Lol, dont really care but it definitely cant be a mary/gary sue. Gods you dont know how glad i am that he doesnt have to seduce voldie. I mean ew, the draco attraction is bloody scarring enough. I'd need a disinfectant wipe for my brain if he wanted snape too. shudders.

I loved this chapter so much. this and the last one just totally blew the story apart. I cant wait until they rescue draco, poor little sod.

I loved Harry's thoughts at the beginning, feeling helpless and not knowing what to do with himself. I loved the library and Harry's idiocy. I mean he doesnt have much luck with books does he? Screaming books and thinking/homicidal books asside, they give you paper cuts!

The grimoire thing was just weird. Perfectly written, creepy and odd. You had a great mix of 'i shouldnts' n 'maybe just one looks' in there. I speciffically loved how he ended up with it. No i wont take it he thinks while slipping it in his bloody posket. I thought that was great!

The chat with Hermione just rounded off a perfect chapter. She really put her foot in it didnt she. It might teach her to mind her own buisness for a while, a day most likely. Lol. Loved it and cant wait for the next chapter. Please please send it to me soon.
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From ANON - FallenAngel1129 on July 27, 2008
ok...you got me hooked :)
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From thrnbrooke on July 27, 2008
Why call him sapling? Who are they? And how can they help? Soooo need chapter 10!!!!
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From ANON - chibishi on June 17, 2008
Hi there, i'm french and i don't usually write review because i'm not so sure about my english, i really like your story but i can't stand to read a rape scene, for me it's totally useless but of course i know that you do everything you want with your story, it's yours, you're free, i don't have to read it. But warnings are meant for that, some people just can't stand those types of things and i think it's a matter of respect toward your readers to simply prevent them. I don't know if i'll be able to continue this wonderful story and i hope i will, but if you write a rape scene you should put the warning. Or if you can bother to e-mail me to tell me so, i shall be thankful.
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From sasukichan on June 17, 2008
so... where was i? right. voldemort... and his freaky obsession with draco's hair (and everything else about draco, really). actually, draco's weird magic right now sorta reminds me of this guy in fullmetal alchemist. he can heal someone by transmuting the injured body part, but in order to do that, he has to reduce it down to tiny particles first and then create a new whole out of the chaos. the cool thing about this talent, i find, is that not only can he heal, he can destroy. he'll just grab someone's arm, do the first bit and ignore the second, and voila, the arm's blast into tiny pieces. imagine draco getting angry/scared enough to do something like that to voldemort... he he. anyways, that was just an idea, don't know if it helps, but maybe it'll get the creative brainjuices running?

and i love the pun on 'dogfather'. lame, but so appropriate! not so sure on snape's real appearance though. i mean, i really do like him the way he is, hook nose and greasy hair and all. *shrugs* ah well. it doesn't make that much of a difference. and besides, u probably need that background anyways for the plot to work (he's going to drop his glamour for some reason, right? but why! *pauses and gasps dramatically* surely he cannot be thinking of seducing his way into voldemort's private quarters?) awww, and it's so sweet of him to keep harry updated! or will harry be the one to keep him updated? i found it kind of odd of dumbledore to call him 'my boy' though. i mean, that title seemed to suit harry better... and dumbldore had always called him severus in the books and treated him like an equal/colleague.

anyways, awesome chapter, as always, can't wait to see what happens next!
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From sasukichan on June 16, 2008
yay! update! (btw, my email's renascentia8@yahoo.ca. lol, now i can get my harry potter slash fix straight from the source!)

anyways, so many things that i want to say! first of all, i feel so bad for draco right now, and scared, and a tad (just a tad!) excited, because face it, anything to do with draco and bondage equals hotness. i have a bad feeling though that he has no idea what shit he has gotten himself into. i mean, manipulating the dark lord is like playing with fiendfyre. result: death or permanent scarring, and not the physical kind. and threatening foreplay is all fine and dandy, but i think i'd throw up if draco ends up falling for voldemort (or develop some sort of stockholm syndrome) *shudders* gah, love and voldemort just don't mix... unless you're bellatrix (or as another author had coined, bella the bitch), in which case u're just messed (and for all purposes in this story, dead).

voldie is seriously loosing touch with sanity though, if the way he snapped at draco in this chapter is any indication. i mean, seriously, power-tripping much? it was entertaining, if slightly distubing, and the way i can just imagine him hissing 'but you do bleed so prettily' is just creepy! (in a good way?) i wonder how draco's going to keep him interested without getting him TOO interested (i mean, everything so far indicates that he won't survive the actual rape)

oops, interruption. (i love my friends, really, but they don't understand a fangirl's obsession) i'll have to continue this review later!

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From ANON - evel_epic216 on June 15, 2008
oh please please keep this going - it is really great! the characterisation you use is incredibly well balanced and unique - you have taken characters, and whilst keeping them canon have made them your own and they move beautifully.

keep it up!

(and yes i know that sounded floury - i am an english literature student - what do you expect!!)

x x x evel
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From Vittani on June 14, 2008
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW. I loved it. Jeez creep factor is one thing, ew ew ew. Poor Sev. I love it when he wears glamours though, that is such a good twist to this. I feel sorry for him tho was dumbles asking him to drop the glamour? Ew ew ew, Sevs gonna have to attract voldie? Now thats wrong, so totally wrong. And i seem to be doing an impression of an american surfer. Oh well i usually do stuff like that when i like a story i get all hyper and just ramble on and one about really stupid things. Gods i cant wait for the next chapter of this, i really want to know what happens next. Oh are you planning to put Sev with anybody, i think he really deserves someone, the poor boys been through way too much hasnt he?

I'm gonna say this now, never ever worry about your characterisation. I've never read anything so in character yet completely oc cos its au. If that made any sense at all. I think this is brilliant. I really wanna know whats gonna happen next please please please please please please update soon. Sorry its a short review but i'm reading this quick while on a break. Oh i've got a new fic called mysteria on my ff account if you want to check it out, i'd love your opinion. bye.
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From ANON - MeLaiya on June 13, 2008
Wow, aside from the numerous misspellings and made up words I really do like where this is headed. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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From dracoharry4life on June 13, 2008
That slimy piece of crap touching Draco is so wrong. So wrong and nasty and gross. It makes me ill.
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From thrnbrooke on June 13, 2008
Sooo need chapter 9!!!
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From ANON - sasukichan on June 12, 2008
yay!!! update!!! (yes, i'm slow on the uptake, but i'm still new to adultff.net and have no clue how to go about getting alerts and whatnot)

anyways, this chapter was awesome! i wonder what draco's scheming... maybe he'll try to seduce voldemort? (and isn't that a scary thought) awwwww, he's so brave and stubborn and slytherin-like despite his horrible circumstances, i just want to give him a hug! *squeeze a draco plushie* and apparently he's got some magical gift with a capital G which is really exciting and hopefully he'll be able to use it to kick voldie's ass (not before getting some blood/torture/abuse in though, i hope... ouch, ain't that a sick and twisted thing to wish for XD)

voldemort's semi-POV was great! i agree, even though he's mad as a hatter he's still super smart and powerful and cunning so his thoughts ought to be at least somewhat organized. and i love his nicknames for draco! it's so creepy, and speaks so much about his obsession with poor draco... i wonder if he can read draco's thoughts or just his moods... i mean, this is the dark lord we're talking about... imagine his reaction if he finds out draco's a virgin *shudders in delighted horror*

anyways! love the harry and snape interaction as well! it's so like harry to run into snape without his glasses... and a protective snape is so endearing, he's a way better father than lucius, i wonder what he's going to do with this new information on draco's imminent doom. who knows, maybe he'll come up with something that may or may not require harry's help - but harry will want to help regardless, so who knows, maybe they'll actually bond over it. and i'll admit, the idea of harry going in, guns blazing (figuratively speaking) and rescuing draco from the jaws of death and sadism while draco's going "i can't see! who's my hot and dashing hero?" (lol! like he'll ever be that girly) is just pure gold.

oops, i rambled on and on and on... quantity vs. quality, i guess. lol. anyways, awesome chapter, i absolutely can't wait for the next one!
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From thrnbrooke on June 11, 2008
Sooo need chapter 8!!! They've got to get him out of there!!!
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From Vittani on June 09, 2008
Hey hun it was brilliant as usual. POOR DRACO. urgh i feel so sorry for him. I've read some stories where voldies quite sexual but those ones werent intended to be creepy/weird so yours is on an altogether higher level than theres. Wow. Freaky freaky freaky but I LOVE IT. I thought you handled Draco's thoughts brilliantly after all he's in an entirely unknown situation here. Not only is he captured but blind as well thats gotta take a lot of getting used to. Being able to come up with a plan that would work without the disibility has got to be crushing.

I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!

Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.

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From Vittani on June 09, 2008
Hey hun it was brilliant as usual. POOR DRACO. urgh i feel so sorry for him. I've read some stories where voldies quite sexual but those ones werent intended to be creepy/weird so yours is on an altogether higher level than theres. Wow. Freaky freaky freaky but I LOVE IT. I thought you handled Draco's thoughts brilliantly after all he's in an entirely unknown situation here. Not only is he captured but blind as well thats gotta take a lot of getting used to. Being able to come up with a plan that would work without the disibility has got to be crushing.

I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!

Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.

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