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Reviews for Where Lies Will Not Blossom

By : AkumuSutaRaito
  • From ANON - sasukichan on June 05, 2008
    omg, this story is amazing! i can't believe how in-character it was! i was totally caught up in the story... draco's suffering and severus's desperation totally ripped my heart into tiny bite-size pieces...

    anyways, i'm too blown away by your story to formulate a coherent review. i'll try harder if you update! XD
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  • From Vittani on June 02, 2008
    Lol I laughed out loud at the 'splat' reference. lol. Loved that. But can I just say POOR DRACO, what the hell were you thinking? Eewww eewww ewww. Lol. Bloody good though, after all Voldie may be a psychotic killer but he still has human needs. Huh human/snake needs, ok thats too weird back to commenting on the wonderful writing. Harry's part was brilliant it was a strange mix of acceptance and denial which i think is perfect in this scenario. As you say no mention of alternate life styles is made in the series, well apart from the small mention in the very last book that Grindelwald was Dumbledore's lover but until then i took it that she didnt want to mention it. but then again opinion isnt really discussed in that bit either, its mentioned in an interview or ritas book or something. But quite rightly they focus more on the fact that dumbledore was going out with the bv (before Voldemort) Dark Lord rather than a guy.

    So yeah i definitely think you made the right decision as to the opinions of the WW. One thing I hate is where the world is less tolerant than ours, i know it fits with the m o but i still hate it. It makes sense with the rest of the discrimination going on. But i think with magic being around they could have easily found ways around male/males not having children. So with the union being reproductive and no religion to cause problems i think its more plausible.

    Anyway i loved Harry's confusion, how you showed that he was both accepting of being aroused by men and worried about it.

    Draco's part was perfect, you showed how he was both desperate and struggling to believe in snapes loyalty. Voldemort was creepyndominating which was perfect. Urgh can you imagine being in the darkness and hearing sibilant hisses and baring his touches, that is damn freaky.

    But can I just yell at you fora moment...HOW THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO RESCUE HIM NOW?

    Ony kidding, not pissed just got a serious case of readers tension n whats gonna happen next syndrome. I mean hell it was hard enough before but now with him being in the DL's bedroom. Geez you like to up the tension dont you deary?

    Wow, it was brilliant and I really really really cant wait for the next chapter. Oh and I loved how Harry feels a connection to the 'recruit'.
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  • From ANON - Jay on June 02, 2008
    What's worse than having a Dark Lord out for your blood? Having a Dark Lord out for your blood become fascinated with you... *shudder*
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  • From ANON - Jay on June 02, 2008
    Ah, you've made things a thousand percent more interesting with this chapter.

    I can just imagine how Snape will tell this new "development" to the order.

    Moody: "Well Snape, you said there was something going on with the recruit?"

    Snape (solemn): "I'm afraid the situation has become complicated. We can not delay his rescue any day further"

    Dumbeldore: "Why?"

    Snape: "It's because of the Dark Lord, he... he has taken a complete new interest in him"

    Dumbeldore (frowning): "New interest, you say? What do you mean, Severus?"

    Snape: "He's acting strange, it's like he's become... "infatuated" with the recruit"

    Moody (scandalized): "What?! Do you mean that Voldemort-?!?"

    Snape (contrite): "He-- *likes* him... he likes him A LOT, actually"
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  • From alleycat88 on June 01, 2008
    Oh no oh no oh no! Evil Voldemort has his eye on Draco...Ugh. I hope that learning that its Malfoy will not deter Harry and the others from trying to rescue him! More soon?
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  • From dracoharry4life on June 01, 2008
    Please don't let Voldy touch him like that! Grooss. He belongs to Harry.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on May 20, 2008
    The suspense is killing me but I love this. Great chapter. =]
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  • From TheMistressMystery on May 12, 2008
    More... more... MOOORE! (Loved it! ;) )
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  • From Vittani on May 12, 2008
    I loved it. It was so perfect. The chat between the trio, Remus n Sirius was great, i loved how it led perfectly into Remus n sirius' talk n the kiss. It really was perfect, i could see remus acting that way. crying and clinging to sirius as a lifeline. You've got the perfect amount of adult n kiddishness in sirius. couldnt see him any other way. im glad remus is close to figuring out who the recruit is, if anyone did it would be him. I loved Harry's four person comment.

    as for draco n sev. Gods i hope the blindness isnt permanent but if it is i can see this being a real beautiful piece. you definitely have a gift for writing n i have no doubt you'll pull off whatever you set your mind to. I'm trying to write but with how many charcters there are in the story i spend more time on the action than character development. My story called for a nice snape that isnt like how he's painted. So i just hope that if i do a story needing the proper characterisation then i hope i can pull it off with even half the skill you do.

    Draco's reaction was perfect by the way, i hate stories where bad things happen n the person decides, oh its you, i know you'd never hurt me im gonna trust you over everyone else. urgh yeh like it takes two seconds to make that decision.

    I know what you mean, i read in a book once a character said. "Yeh with one bound he was up and a gay" It aint a bloody split second decision. I'm glad there'll be development in this relationship.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 12, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6!!!! Poor Draco!! Who has been healing Draco? Why? Sooo need more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 22, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5! He knew as soon as he said Malfoy they'd forget all about the rescue. Dumbledore knows though. You can tell.
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  • From Jan on March 21, 2008
    Very Interesting!

    Please update chapter 5 soon. ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Lisa on March 21, 2008
    Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From ANON - suiri on March 21, 2008
    very awesome story. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From Vittani on March 21, 2008
    lol isnt fun to chat with someone else who has the same level of satisfaction as you. You actually get to gloat to somebody that yes you figured it out. He he. The lack of Remus in the books is one reason for why i become so ecstatic over him being alive and having a role in a fanfic. And if its an important role even better.

    I think you had snapes character dead on! Thats one thing i struggle with when writing him. He's one of the best and making him believable in your story sure does give you a lot of experience on writing complex characters. You certainly had the right level of 'i may be a git but im not evil! stuff going on. N i loved the bit with Sirius, he would so act like that. Lol, n i like how you've got Harry's noticing of guys in early. Usually its just 'oh wow is that gorgeus blond hair, merlin malfoy grew up to be a looker i think i fancy him.'

    Lot better this way. lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, i want to know what happens when everyone realises its Malfoy they're rescuing.
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