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Reviews for Muggle Slave

By : sexkitty85
  • From ANON - Sera21 on March 20, 2015
    So , having read chapter 3 now, I have to ask, does Draco ever clean her back hole before he fucks her? Because this chapter said she just woke up and then anal. Ew. I mean it was plenty hot but do try to be a bit realistic...like a cleaning spell or an enema or something...
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on March 20, 2015
    Review of first chap: So clearly this is some PWP. Not that I mind. There are parts that are pretty hot but there are some parts that I had to wonder. Like why does Draco announce when he is going to cum like in a porno? The nice part about the written word is that people don't have to ( unrealistically) announce it every time they come. I mean sure, theres the occasional, I'm gonna come you dirty bitch...or something like that but why every time and why is he shouting it? You that proud of yourself mate? Also, Brooklyn has to be the most un-english name EVER. Its very very Americana. and I hate me some americana in teh middle of a english fic. So yeah, I kinda hate this OC XD
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  • From 123Ekaterina on November 28, 2009
    this is probably the most hard core i've ever read....
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  • From jddammann on October 04, 2008
    The end?
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  • From thedarklordspet on April 05, 2008
    omg i love this story please write more
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  • From prettypinkpony on February 20, 2008
    At first I was jealous of the muggle slave since she got to have both Draco AND Lucius but that last chapter 'rape' changed my mind. I wanna know how Draco will react when he finds out. Hopefully he will stick up for her and not bow down to his father. noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au if you wanna message when you update.
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  • From kitryder on February 19, 2008
    Where have i been sexkitten? i've been waiting here forever baby,i'm not leaving this story until it completely finish. Rape,can anything be hotter than that,i dont think so. Kitty dont make me wait okey,u took a long time to post this chapter,u know its killing me.
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  • From miakitty on February 19, 2008
    oh that was brilliant,keep update. (draco seriously need to come and save her before more bad things happens)
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  • From HoneyB9 on January 26, 2008
    omg!!!! i dont epect that to happend,where is draco?he must save her from lucius. Lucius is so evil!go pick other muggle to fuck
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  • From jenamalone on January 26, 2008
    okey,love it..too smut,i dont actualy know what i want. and i'm not gonna say,u should add this and that,at this point,i just want to read the story from u the way u like it. I dont write because my idea suck and i always confuse with what i like. I do know i like draco,and blaise and bdsm thing. watever it is,dont kill anybody. Dark is ok,but when death involve,it can be creepy
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  • From hazry on January 20, 2008
    That was awesome. Not to mention incredibly hot. I really admire your writing ability
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  • From jenamalone on January 20, 2008
    dont send her back home,i think u should add some drama not involving sex. still,diz is
    a great chapter
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  • From Smuff on January 18, 2008
    Woaw...all that dirty talkin turned me on! I'm shameless really, even a demented draco can turn me on with that tongue of his...lol pun and all! Gods, this is good wankign material lol...!! GO YOU! That muggle is a lucky girl...
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  • From jossie on January 18, 2008
    4 thumbs up for sex scene and this chapter. Looking forward for the next one. I cant comment much for now since my computer had fucked up. good news is,i still can read your story,so dont you stop writing
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  • From kitryder on January 18, 2008
    Draco u lucky git,every dude can only dream of having a hot female sex slave. Cant beleive you actualy have one. Oh yea baby,this is what i'm talking about. why not add BDSM stuff,hardcore stuff.Just dont kill the chick. what about 2 girls wit draco eh? aint it sound fun? perhaps miss parkinson or miss granger (if draco and her get along)lol I'm so jealouse of u draco. Thank for writing this story,i can spend my free time just reading this over and over and over again
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