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Reviews for Muggle Slave

By : sexkitty85
  • From HoneyB9 on January 18, 2008
    yea,he is starting to develope a feeling towards her,i know it, and i'm starting to fall in love with this story. The more i read it,the more i feel addicted. Lucius kind of cruel,i am not agreeing with sharing the same girl,but blaise he is handsome like draco,i cant help but enjoyed it.
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  • From miakitty on January 11, 2008
    Please update soon! I am so anxious! lol. i absolutely love this story... amazing,oh please add up some romance stuff,hard fucking + romance,now wasnt dat hot stuff?
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  • From jenamalone on January 11, 2008
    i dont like it,i LOVE it,it is so addicting. u have to post more chapter
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  • From jossie on January 09, 2008
    u should write more,not just focus on the sex but other things like draco and her when sex is not involve and describe more about draco,what he truly feel. Ofcourse more and more sex. I was hoping for blaise but lucius is hot as well
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  • From HoneyB9 on January 09, 2008
    will draco love her? it is crazy but its hot. ooh,i want to read the steamy scene on the next chapter
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  • From miakitty on January 09, 2008
    oh love love love love love it! draco always good at finger fuck lol Cant wait for the next one. I personaly love this story because it is hardcore but not sick twisted hardcore. some of the fic are so scary,i end up not reading it.Dont worry,i'll be your loyal reader
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  • From kitryder on January 09, 2008
    nice =)lucius? she surely will enjoy them. why not add female charachter,more yummy if you ask me
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  • From kitryder on January 04, 2008
    he scream alot dats kind of weird for a dud. She should be screaming more. i love this story.
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  • From HoneyB9 on January 04, 2008
    draco is too hars on her but it turns me on because he is draco the sex god.Will he love her at the end of the story?
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  • From jossie on January 04, 2008
    i like the slave and the master stuff,this is no exception.U should write the story longer.it will be more fun to read. Brooklyn?thats an odd name,watevr as long as she is submissive and not a free mouthing bitch like hermione.Keep up the good work.
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  • From miakitty on January 04, 2008
    OH I LOVE IT SO MUCH! IT SO HOT HOT HOT HOT!! damn,u seriously need to finish this story.. keep wit the bdsm and hardcore male dom stuff,thats the hottest thing in da world..so r blaise or lucius will join draco??
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 02, 2008
    OK, there are parts of this that are kinda sexy, and parts of it that are really over the top. It kinda seems like a Mary Sue, which is fine if you make sure you get Draco's character down better. I don't see him yelling that much during sex. It's not a bad idea, just need a little more subtley. You might also want to get a beta for grammar and spelling (I have this problem too). I think you should continue it, but maybe tone down Draco's character a bit.
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