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Reviews for Cruel and Unusual Punishment

By : AlexisRose
  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on January 05, 2008
    ok... now we havesome idea why malfoy wants 2 sleep w/ hermione... he doesnt really know(we all know that subconsciously he loves her). now the important question is he going 2 continue the bet? like malfoy said they shook on it.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Rei on January 05, 2008
    Its really cute. I needed the giggles. Keep it real :-D
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  • From bodanger on January 05, 2008
    i have to say i really like where this is going, i really thought she was sirius. lol. anyways, so i like your stle of writing as well, i hope you update soon and have a good night
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  • From wudelfin on January 05, 2008
    the was funny!!
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  • From chickaboo on January 05, 2008
    Love it! That was too funny. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - huggers21 on January 05, 2008
    This is so funny. :] A way to relieve all the tension going onto this planet.
    Bravo. :]

    Its simply cute and funny.

    And to those who doesn't appreciate it. Just don't say anything please? :]
    As for me, I love it so carry on. Cause Until someone likes it, it worth it. :]

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  • From ANON - sdank on January 05, 2008
    this is really funny! Good job! I really like where you started the story.... it allows me to deside how they came to be on civil terms and avoids the awkward quick fluffy friendship thing... if that makes any sense =) but I can't wait for a new chapter... love your work.
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  • From PotterEntourage on January 05, 2008
    Oh I was cracking up at this chapter! I can't wait to hear more of Draco's "songs", Blaise, ha! That should be good! I was so happy to see an update! Great work!
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on January 05, 2008
    That was a beautiful chapter and the poetry was wonderful! I love your portrayal of Draco's indecision about his feelings for her. I also loved the part about the school wanting them to shag to make smarter babies.
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  • From mhaj78 on January 05, 2008
    In addition, I just read the other reviews--and I say screw that. You can make Draco be whomever you want him to be--they don't have to have a "relationship" before he, a horny 17 year old, asks her for sex! I don't think the story is "dumb" at all...um, it's not supposed to be realistic...not only is it based on a book about WIZARDS but it's fanfiction, creating our own reality/future of characters in a fiction book. You just write whatever you want--if people don't like it, they don't have to read it...while people like me will continue to read and enjoy!!
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  • From mhaj78 on January 05, 2008
    Oh my gosh, ADORABLE. I can't believe you came up with that for Millicent!! It was so hilarious!! I almost blushed, embarrassed for him like Hermione was. :) I love that he wants her so badly...I do hope that she doesn't make him serenade everyone either--just because I don't think I can wait that long!! Yay!! Great job, you're doing wonderfully.
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  • From Utopia on January 05, 2008
    Ah, and perhaps Draco will play the gentleman, if he gets his head out of his arse long enough to do so! What worries me, is that his Mother has helped place said head up said arse! Zabini is right - it isn't going to work.

    The poetry was amusing, and rather well crafted! I couldn't imagine a tune to back it up though. I like a bit of daft poetry with my serious stuff - and it made me smile! Never apologise for making people smile, its a wonderful thing to do!

    I like how he wants her, but doesn't actually know why. Do I see the first blossoms of love that will fruit into something sweet? Or will things turn sour?

    Oh, and as for your list of shows to watch on the last A/N (though it wasn't aimed at me, I have to reply) - add Monty Python to that list, you can't beat that for comedy! lol!
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  • From Utopia on January 05, 2008
    Draco's behavior is making me cringe! If I were Hermione, I'd have slapped him by now and bought him a tube of lube so he could go take care of his raging libido himself! lol!

    I love how she hasn't just fallen into bed with him, but I have an unfortunate suspicion that Draco is utterly and deadly serious and will deliver each and every Valentine and therefore will claim his 'prize'. And honestly, I don't want to see that happen - she's worth so much more than a prize to be won, as are every single other person on the planet. I'd like to see (and I know its soppy and mushy) Draco be the gentleman and not just scratch an itch with her.

    Well, ignore my opinions for a moment: 10/10 for quality and an original idea!
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  • From ximaginationx on January 04, 2008
    Ohhhhh very intriguing, i thought it was really original, and i also thought it was a one-shot but now i know otherwise i am waiting eagerly for the next part! Loved it
    Fiaxxx
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  • From mmconnelly on January 03, 2008
    Ohh too funny!! Love it
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