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Reviews for Nephilim\'s Power

By : Diviniti
  • From iamspammer on January 07, 2008
    You mentioned it yourself, smut. I was hoping for something in this chapter. Ah well.

    oh my and Fleur's monther? now what would Harry do? I am assuming that they will just do stuff and not bind?

    It was your normal length chapter but you said you'll update soon. Oh and more smut please. At least 1 scene per chapter (more than a paragraph).

    Quite demanding readers eh?

    Oh and more One shots like 'Quidditch Practice' please.
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  • From luvhp on January 07, 2008
    Hmm, interesting storyline. I'd definately like to see where this goes. The sex is def a bonus! :)
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  • From pfeil on January 06, 2008
    Thank you for being reasonable. I don't understand people having Harry want to fuck McGonnagol, nor redeem draco, nor add slash, either.

    I hope he stumbles across Gabrielle at the Manor first. If Hogwarts is out, Beauxbatons should be too. She still needs to "thank" Harry for rescuing her, and a teenaged Veela would be quite fun to get a thank you from ;)
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  • From strangerdanger89 on January 06, 2008
    I like it I'm looking forward to more. I was kinda not liking the abuse harry was showing, but after the talk he had with tonks I feel a little better about it. The only thing that I really didn't like was betraying Hermione as a bad person, I know it is part of the story, I'm just a huge Hermione fan and I want her to be the hot and sexy one that harry loves!... anyhooo, you can forget about that little rant, I like it and am going to check back later for more.

    Sasha
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  • From TheDon1023 on January 05, 2008
    speaking of twins, what about the patil twins? no harem is complete without those sexy ass twins(the patils)

    -The Don

    P.S. a slythin has to be in it too. probably Daphane Greengrass or Tracy Davis(sp?) or somethin of the sort. maybe even pansy if you made her hot and not Malfoys sex slave
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  • From VICKISEWBABE on January 05, 2008
    I like dark Harry stories. Tonks is the perfect first for Harry. This first chapter is a very good start. the dream sequence is way cook. Your kunfu is strong. Now go, Go, GO. We need more dark Harry. Shoo, get to writing. Oh, just in case I forgot to tell you I LIKE THE STORY!
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  • From lea on January 05, 2008
    You should add Prof. Sinistra to Harry's collection.
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  • From hoser41 on January 05, 2008
    Good story so far and as for McGonagall, please don't include her in Harry's harem. Thats just nasty.
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  • From Carlin on January 05, 2008
    Nice work once again, and I agree with everything you have said so far, keep it up and I look forward to Fleur being added to his little group... maybe even her mother and sister being added as well.
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  • From iamspammer on January 05, 2008
    Amazing. The way you changed the raping Harry to caring one was simply amazing. I din't say about that before because as they say about fics "Don't like it? Don't read it." and I wanted to read it. But, that was great change.

    Now, the only reason I mentioned Minevera was in case you decided that bonding also gets him knowledge of the bonded witch along with power. You decided not to, so it won't make any sense to have her there.

    So, he can get power from Muggle women too?

    About power, so the girls will KEEP THEIR power? or they become LESS powerful and Harry gets more?

    You said he gets 20% of power if he doesn't bind them. What is normal power he gets if he does? Lets say, Hermione has 100 (units) power. If he binds her, how much will he get?

    Just curious

    Other than being submissive and think of him as his lord (and get power ofcourse), what are the advantages/effects are of a bound woman?

    You answered almost all of my questions EXCEPT how will he get knowledge to fight Dumbledore and Voldemort? Can you please clear that? or is it a surprise?

    I have this weird idea. How about making Hogwarts TOTALLY sentient and then bind HER to Harry? I am not sure how this looks but just throwing the idea out there. It'll give Harry more leverage in war. And I am assuming that power he gets from bound women is relative depending on how powerful the woman is. This way, he'll get WAY more power.

    I think FREQUENT updates RATHER THAN LONGER chapters is preferred. Waiting for a week doesn't sound good.

    Eagerly looking forward to next FREQUENT chapters.
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  • From karas9 on January 04, 2008
    this story is awesome, please continue, and tonks sex is always amazing
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  • From iamspammer on January 03, 2008
    Great story.

    2nd chapter answered many questions. So, he won't get knowledge from his women; was a good idea but now I am waiting to see what YOU have in store.

    You mentioned something like 20% of power, but it wasn't clear. So, how mcuh power he gets say 1) from BOUND women 2) From ONE-NIGHT stands?

    You also din't mention how Harry would bind these women. He just raped Hermione but what is stopping her from telling someone. Is it just because she liked it? or Harry sort of put some pressure on her?

    I can understand that Harry can get power after shagging and can be equal to (or more than) Dumble and Voldy. But, how will he match their knowledge (repeating my self again)?

    Oh and forgot to mention last time, its good to hear it won't be JUST sex story. I like those but if it's tied into a proper theme, it's even more enjoyable

    Waiting for next chapter.
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  • From Carlin on January 03, 2008
    Nice work and I agree with you on some of the things you have been saying in your notes, if your still after names to add to his little sex list then how about some of his teachers I'm not saying Minerva but there has to be a few younger female members on the staff he could fuck... including a new DADA teacher coming up after all.
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  • From on January 03, 2008
    Interesting start! Please, no Ginny, she is useless (unless she betrays Harry somehow and gets killed, then that would be facsinating). He needs girls who can help him. I say go against the herd and use Rosemerta instead of the Black sisters. Narcissa and Bellatrix have been done to death, IMO.
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  • From Basal on January 03, 2008
    I certainly hope you will add Ginny and Bellatrix in to the Harem =)
    Nice first chapter byy the way.
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