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Reviews for Twisted Illusion

By : deadlyfatedangel
  • From NightLo on August 06, 2008
    Hum...I am wondering what younger Harry has made for his 'kids'...
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 04, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From jljaina on July 11, 2008
    Well, I feel like an idiot! :P I started to read this on fanfiction.net then came here and saw that this is here too but with more chapters. :) So far its great! I really like how you write Harry and Draco together.
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  • From LexieAnnMalfoy on June 13, 2008
    great story so far I love it. its so different I hope you do a story where we can see what happens after Harry wakes up from his coma that will be so cool
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  • From NightLo on June 12, 2008
    An update! 'doing little dance in my head'...

    Thanks for the hot scene between Draco and Harry, though Harry does need the assurance from Draco, and he must know the importance of not being alone! BTW, what is it in store of Draco for 'younger' Harry?

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  • From thrnbrooke on June 11, 2008
    I soooo need chapter 9!!!!
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  • From Toddy on June 11, 2008
    Lovely story. I like the way you weave the two phases of Harry's relationship with Draco together. I am never quite sure which one it is and have to think carefully. The hidden rooms quite startled me. Looking forward to the next episodes.
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  • From starupinthesky on June 10, 2008
    I really like your story and your writing style. I hope that you won't let any negative reviews keep you from cotinuing. I can't wait to see how this story pans out.
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  • From daynajones on June 10, 2008
    I never do this, but this is really quite good, and I just want to help smooth out the rough spots. I would change the sentence about H and D being friends now to read -.....friendship in spite of hating each other during their school years. It just makes more sense that way. Anytime you reader has to back track and go "huhhh?" is a bad thing, you loose momentum.
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  • From daynajones on June 10, 2008
    actually, I really like how you write, direct and to the point, You need to change seventh birthday in the first chapter to seventeenth birthday. other that that little blooper, I'm on to read more.
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  • From NightLo on May 14, 2008
    Oh...an update...I really don't realize...ah~~~~

    Anyway...there seems to be some delicate moments, and Harry is starting to change...that's good! Just wondering when will this end...
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  • From bananasforyou on February 28, 2008
    yes cant wait so happy your back !
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  • From NightLo on February 28, 2008
    ...Why does the nightmare reappear again? Does that relate to the spell? I am quite worried...
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 28, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 8! Now that's something! He could cheat and Draco would stay. Prolly kick his arse but he'd stay.
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  • From bananasforyou on February 05, 2008
    omg sooo awesome!!!
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