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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Cold Hearted Bastard

By : TheSiner
  • From imera on March 24, 2008
    Wow, the best AU story I have come over, especially one that happens to have many of the characters. I love the idea of a mean and cold Draco bastard, he was really funny. My favourite scene, hard to pick one actually; the first that I think about is when Harry dresses up as an angel, and the day after when he is over emotional.
    There is a couple of things that really annoy me, smaller mistakes but they are the worst, but those are the things that can easily be overseen.
    If you want you can send the text file to me and I'll beta it as good as I can, wouldn't mind since I love this story. In case you want then you can send it to imera_kasam@yahoo.co.uk I hope you write something else soon :D


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  • From Vibora on January 31, 2008
    awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome story! ^_^
    i loved it! =D
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 15, 2008
    Oh I love this!
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  • From anniea on January 05, 2008
    it took me THREE HOURS to read this story and i have to say that it was amazing. although i think that it would have been fine for you to let yourself go during the sexual scenes. although there are kids out there who sneak in and read the stories for the most part were are all adults here. then again i might have your reasons all wrong. all i'm saying is that while on this website it's okay to let go of your sexual feelings. keep up the great work! *kisses*
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  • From missleymisskai on January 04, 2008
    Thank is all I have to say. Tok for ever to read since I had to come and go to work. But I wanted to thank you for posting all in one. I agree with your idea. Even thou its annoying to keep up with writing and etc it better that they finsh their stories. So thank you again.

    Story review:Very interesting. I like the story line and the funny side comments. At first I thought it might have been moving to fast but then when I finshed reading it I thought it was great. Taht you had to so some skiping in the begining, from days to months. I like the thrill it had when Harry dissappered. xD It was also great because there was a story line and very little sex. Which I do like, its better then straight out pron. xD So great job and I will be reading your other stories! :D

    ~Ley
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  • From bananasforyou on January 04, 2008
    i love it!
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  • From Nonny on January 03, 2008
    was really cute
    but nothing i saw really makes this an adult story
    also you might need to go over this one last time to get rid of the errors or just get a beta
    either way i liked it
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  • From NightLo on January 03, 2008
    This really is a wonderful and long story, and I like the name of angel...thanks for it.
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  • From Extraho on January 03, 2008
    i love you i love you i love you i love you i love yoooou. that story was great. proper drama romantics. loved it.
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  • From Veracityrules on January 03, 2008
    Well, that story was absolutely bloody brilliant. I wholeheartedly agree about you thoughts on incomplete stories. Isn't that the most annoying thing in fandom?! I actually have that as my mission statement on FF.net.

    I love your A/U and you characterisation. I do have only 3 complaints about this fic.

    1)The text changed to italics a 1/3 of the way in (annoying more than anything).

    2)A number of minor spelling mistakes but it was a huge amount of text and therefore understandable some slipped by in the editing process.

    3)Lack of detailed slash (sex) scenes. You created some very intense moments in which you could have gone into more detail. I understand that this maybe due to Harry's age (although in UK 16 is age of consent kind of; it's complicated).

    But overall this was a fantastic use of three hours (my hubby kept interupting me). Brava
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