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By : TheSiner
  • From bananasforyou on December 19, 2008
    nice!!
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  • From darkshadowarchfiend on December 19, 2008
    oh man i know his friends love him but sometimes i think they are smothering him. I mean give the man some space. You don't have to know everything. jeez!!!! :( Sorry they irritate me. Anyway I love it and can't wait for more.
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  • From dedmun on December 19, 2008
    i am REALLY enjoying this story. post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on December 18, 2008
    When I saw you updated I was just about to leave for work, imagine my frustration at the fact that I was already so late I coudn't even afford to stay for a couple of minutes and read your new chapter! Then I finally came home and got to read it. It was worth the wait. I am so happy for them! Obviously if Harry were human, I would be a bit more tense at how Draco forgave him the rape, but since Harry's no longer human, the whole issue stops being measurable and judged by human standards, so no worries. And now I saw how this chapter ended and can't wait to see what happens next. Who was that latest visitor to Harry's house? Will Snape come to see if he can get Draco to change his mind? I am craving for your next addition to this tory, hope the anxiety doesn't make me insane! ^_^
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 17, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on December 17, 2008
    Oh look, a sequel! Yay, and bless you for putting it where we can enjoy it best! I like how Draco and Harry have reconciled with this new situation, but who has intruded just as things were going so well? I guess we'll just have to wait. No worries as I'm sure its worth the wait. TTFN, and please continue.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on December 17, 2008
    Veela Harry, well that doen't happen too often, but then Malfoy always had to get in his face so this could explain their obsession with each other. Odd that Snape thought he could wait until Draco was old enough like brewing a potion until he was ready for a relationship with him. Snape must truly had Potter for taking away the one person he cared for the most. As for Harry's friends their response toward his new lifestyle was rather to be expected, but not Harry's problem as Draco obviously came first in his mind and heart. I'm glad that Draco finally came to realize just how this change in their regard for one another while unexpected was probably the best thing for both of them. Kudos to you for this briallant piece, and by all means please continue.
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  • From imera on March 24, 2008
    Great story, loved it from the beginning. Yes, it was dark but I guess I have a twisted mind then. But what I loved the most must be around the time Harry finally decides to tell Draco he loves him, that was a really joy.
    And when Draco was taken I honestly thought he would die, probably one of the worst parts to read through, hoping everything will be fine.
    What I was surprised about was that this story was a Veela fic, and it's actually the first one I have read.

    And a sequel, it's nice, but even if there was no sequels I would think this story ended nice, except that Draco went back to Harry after being thrown out from Snape, that evil git.

    Great story
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 15, 2008
    Sequel!!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on January 06, 2008
    omg yes to sequel.it deserves one!
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  • From LoverofallthingsPttR on January 05, 2008
    I'm not sure that I agree with your thought that there seems to always be something missing from your stories... I really liked this! If something is missing then its no surprise to me that you couldn't find it because it doesn't seem to be something that is possible to identify...

    great job! and if you're up for a sequel i'd love to read it... maybe try for something along the same lines with lots of points of view and really long and then also try for something that is simply short and pretty much a pwp that's set immediately after this ending, or several weeks after this where they have had to deal with being together with Harry's friends, or maybe several years later where they are just still enjoying eachother? i definitely think that there are a lot of options out there if you should decide on a sequel...

    regardless... this was really good, with lots of meat, and lots of questions and answers and lots of input and, of course, a nice little amount of smutty-ness! thanx for posting!

    LoverofallthingsPttR
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  • From LadyRainrin on January 05, 2008
    I love your story I really don't like one shots but I love this one and I can't wait for the next one
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 05, 2008
    Wow. This was really really dark. I like how your switched POVs, and showed the psyche of both the rapist and the victim. I totally understood why Draco was starting to long for Harry. I don't think you romanticized the rape but rather showed a plausible progression for what someone would start to think and feel in that situation. And I felt this was actually pretty believable considering what we know about Harry's background. I really really "enjoyed" it. I say that with parenthesis because it was more disturbing than anything but I couldn't stop reading. You do have some spelling and grammar errors, and if you continue it, you should consider getting a beta because this is a good story and people are gonna probably recommend it so you want to make sure all your creativity and effort shine instead of any errors. I hope you do a sequel, please consider it.
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  • From Mylor on January 04, 2008
    That was effin brilliant! .... very well written .... you should do another to wrap it up more .... I don't usually read one shots, but this made me really glad that I did :-)
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  • From alleycat88 on January 04, 2008
    a sequel would be nice! Good story...nice twist with the whole harry is a veela thing! Good job!
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