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By : TheSiner
  • From ANON - Entropy12 on May 14, 2013
    This is good. Do you have any plans to finish it or have you abandoned it?
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  • From ANON - kale on December 10, 2011
    I was so happy to see another chapter. I remember reading this a while ago but I think it only had 4 sequel chapters.
    I love the fact that your Harry and Draco are working toward a healthy and stable relationship. Well as healthy as they can be with all their emotional baggage.
    I also love the outside interaction, the pressure and public opinion, and everyone trying to push Harry into the hero mold.
    I just hope that if you continue this, that Harry and Draco get their Happily Ever After. Or as realistic one as possible.
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  • From bloodshound on March 22, 2011
    ty for continuing this. (nice to know our reviews have some effect ^^ )
    It s to good to just be left hanging so ty for taking the time.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 21, 2011
    seq 6 please!!!!!!!
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  • From SashaMinx on November 13, 2010
    I really enjoyed this. It had some great twists and turns and your characters were wonderfully spot on. :)
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  • From ANON - Aertae Timur on August 11, 2010
    I do hope that you continue this story. For a self-admitted English as a second language user, though the grammar is a bit rough at times, I've been pleasantly surprised by your level of English vocabulary and use of colloquialisms. Pity about the beta usage, however. The fact that you are not sugar coating the characters' reactions to the HP/DM relationship is refreshing. I can really accept a more honest (if not more brutal) view, if you will, than having characters be so OOC or entirely too fluffy that they radiate rainbows and halos. It is simply not true human nature for people to not have disagreeable opinions and darker thoughts, at least once in a while. So, thanks for a more believable adult version of HP fan fiction. Speaking of "adult" content, I wouldn't mind enjoying more of HP/DM intimate moments, if you are so inclined. ;)

    I have to say that I am mainly a reader, not a reviewer. This is my second review in the years that I have enjoyed AFF.com. So, I do hope that if it makes even a tiny difference in you continuing this story and your inspiration to further stories overall, it would be quite satisfying. Keep writing and follow your muse, otherwise she/he may get upset and go quiet. Trust me, you don't want that to happen. It can make for a very cranky person. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - SilverStream on May 02, 2010
    Great story. Wonderfully told. I love the interactions between Harry and Draco. Heartbreakingly sad at times, but very sweet at the same time. The unconditional love Harry has for Draco is really touching.
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  • From ANON - Nyxan on February 19, 2010
    If I could rate this a 5 a hundred times or even a million I would. It's a truely great story. Unique entertaining sweet fluffy and angsty. I love it!
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  • From serenagold on February 17, 2010
    This story is fantastic. I'm so excited to have discovered it.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From mrequecky on February 17, 2010
    Enjoying a lot :D
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  • From ANON - t-kat on February 15, 2010
    Wow! So i've read all the sequels and I just love how you get into Draco and Harry's head. I also appreciate how you don't overtly feminize either of the boys too to much and end up making them some sort of sugary Yaoi version of themselves. I like how we see Draco and Harry confronting the non-consensuality of their relationship from the beginning, and how we get to see harry dependent on draco for his emotional well being. I must say I feel as though the sequel chapters have not been as "close" so to speak as the first chapter, as in i don't often feel like i'm INSIDE the character's head. But, your descriptive language and the pacing and the way that you really keep everyone in character (especially hermione) is really great! I'm anxious to see when Draco going to confide in Harry about his time with snape, and what the veela in harry will do about that. OH, that was something else I liked about the last few chapters, that you didn't just introduce the veela element and then back off, but we see it consistently coming up and adding a flavor or dimension to the story.
    This was a great read, I hope you update soon!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 15, 2010
    Chapter 5 please!!!!
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  • From ANON - t-kat on February 15, 2010
    I think this story was WONDERFULLY done, i love the pov switches, i love that snapes desire for draco took me by surprise, but in a great way. I scoffed at the veela bit at first, but you really committed to it and so I was able to go with it. And I just LOVE ron's section of the story, i thought that was really really well done, and in character and you don't make him a blithering idiot. It was hot, it was sweet it was sad, it was GREAT!!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on February 13, 2010
    Thank you for updating once more. Please do so again when you have the chance. P.S. you often forget to put spacing between letters of words, the 'm' in the word 'my' (you forgot it in Seq-4), and you often misuse the word 'red' in writing. Red is a color, read is the past tense of reading. Sorry about that, but just felt that those things needed to be addressed. Thank you for posting, you're doing a great job of writing this fic overall.
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  • From ANON - JIA on February 12, 2010
    WHAT AN AMAZING STORY. I CAN'T BELIEVE I FOUND THIS.
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