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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From Ladyroo88 on June 18, 2008
    Oo!! that was a suprise!! tom riddle the headmaster and he will be able to stay close to his mate!!
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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 18, 2008
    More please. This is really good so far.
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  • From bumblebee on June 18, 2008
    That was nice, a little bit of family time, I like it!

    Tom as Headmaster..hmm..very interesting, wonder if he'll accept it.

    Hope you'll be better soon.

    Can't wait to read next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Bones on June 18, 2008
    *hugs you* get better soon. just for your sake. love the story but it can wait if you feel sick.
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  • From TiffanyAK on June 18, 2008
    Yay, you did it. It was really cute too. Thanks for that. So, what's up with Narcissa, and what's her problem with the Dark Lord being Harry's mate? Tom Riddle as Headmaster huh? Well, he's definitely on their side of the war. lol. But, would he really want to be Headmaster? It seems it'd interfere with his plans to take over the whole wizarding world. Then again, he'd get to be near Harry full time, not to mention having a large influence on the students and curriculum. Thanks for a good chapter, please update soon. Also, I hope you continue to be well after your operation, and I'm happy to hear that they found what was wrong with you in time and there weren't any complications. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 18, 2008
    Ooooooh nice, I thought Lucius was going to put Severus as headmaster. I am looking forward to how everyone will react to that. You know I get the feeling that Mrs. Malfoy is up to no good
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  • From ANON - picofoxy on June 18, 2008
    hey wats up nice chapters so far really should go for remy/fenir i love that pairing so wats up with nacrissa why she so mad about the dark lord being harrys mate that don't make much sense she hates sirius because he got the black fortune right well thats interesting also you could try putting harry in a maid costume and voldie ravishing him or draco and sirius ravishing him that would rock but anyways like the way the storys going keep it up and you really have improved your writeing well practice makes perfect anyways update soon
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  • From SassyThing on June 16, 2008
    I cannot get enough of this story, I just love the plot line and I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rena on June 15, 2008
    Hi, I have noticed that your writing has improved sice you began this story. Here's a writers tip, it helps to read you work aloud back to yourself slowly. The idea is if there is an error in spelling or grammer as you read verbatim the sentence will not make sense. It's sad that you don't plan on pairing Remus with anyone, I was going to suggest Fenrir Greyback ^__^ I also wanted to point out that I noticed you sometimes throw in plot devices and don't use them. you want to watch out for those since sometimes a plot device you threw in earlier may cause a contradiction later. *When Harry was dropping off his gift of roses you mentioned there was something slithering about outside the bedroom, but you never went anywhere with it. *When Harry went out with Draco to Hogsmead and stopped at Gringotts he asked the goblin in charge of his accounts to look for tampering, but then Harry found out about Dumbledore's stealing by other means and he never did get that letter. *After going to all that trouble to pick furniture out, and it was a very descriptive scene, Harry never does set it all up, (we know what he did with the bed ;P) he also never uses it (save for the mattress). *Did Severus actually ever make that potion to get rid of the scars on Harry's back? Hmm, that's all my questions for now. I look forward to your next chapter.
    Taa,
    Rena
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  • From alma on June 15, 2008
    Very hot threesome!
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  • From TiffanyAK on June 10, 2008
    Really? I think it'd be adorable, if slightly crowded. I like Voldemort in this chapter, he's so protective, and his death threats to Lucius were veiled well. Okay, maybe not death, but definitely severe pain. Also, the scene they walked into in the library made me crack up. Thanks for a great chapter, please update soon. Cheers!
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  • From on June 09, 2008
    First off, I hope you feel better, and get well soon.

    The next thing is I hope that we see some Snape and Luce action going on here!
    I like the Chapter and can not wait for more to come my way!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bones on June 09, 2008
    Love this story!
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  • From bumblebee on June 09, 2008
    Hmm.. I wonder who the spy is.. i'll keep guessing..

    Can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 08, 2008
    More please...I'm sure that would have been an interesting sight to walk into...lol...please update soon.
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