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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From JudyBisbee on April 16, 2009
    You know a story is good when you read it more than once I just wish there were more Harry is lied to by Dumbldork and Harry makes own decisions good luck with future stories :
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  • From SpringNicht on March 04, 2009
    i love this story its one of my favorites of yours. do you think you could make a story about charlemaigne and dante cause i would love to see how they turn out. i'm just asking.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on February 10, 2009
    That was awesome!! I cannot believe somebody actually came up with a Harry/Voldemort that came out happy.
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  • From SakuraMaxwellMinamino on December 30, 2008
    Wow!! I just got into the whole Harry/Voldemort kick so I've been looking for any fics I can find. lol. I remember reading four of your previous fics The Charmed and mummy Crossovers and happened to be re-Reaeding them(I love them!!) When i noticed you had a Harry/Voldemort **sqeeee** I really would like to see a sequel to this fic if at all possible? please? if you get an Idea? I'm beggging I know but I really would like to see Dante and Charlemaigne's courtship and if Harry and Voldemort have more kids and maybe a little oneshot on Remus telling Fenrir He's preggers? lol can just imagine the reactions. ^__^ I am really looking forward to you newest crosoover fic too. ^__^ Hope to see it up soon. Loved this fic
    Ja
    Sakura Chang-Maxwell-Yuy
    Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
    Eternity
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  • From on December 17, 2008
    First off, I'd like to just say I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! Seriously, it was great! I also really like your other stories as well, but um... well to be honest, I'm pretty crap when it comes to reviewing! Lol! I normally forget when I get to the end and wander off to do something else! Lol! Or get distracted by another story before getting round to giving reviews! Feel proud that I liked your story so much that I actually remembered to review! In fact, I had intended to review this once I finished it, when I got a couple of chapters in! Yay! Go me, I finally reviewed something!! (Not that I never have before... it is a rather rare occurrence though... Heh.)

    Right, I also had something else, besides giving you my praises on the story! It's about a beta, feel free to ignore this part, just I figured I'd offer you my services, now I've never been a beta for anyone before, but I just thought I'd offer. I realise you had a bad experience with a beta before, which is also a reason I'm offering. For one I promise that I would never take someone else's idea and post it as my own, it's wrong, dishonest and to be completely truthful, make me feel ill thinking about it. I had someone do something similar to me a couple of years ago, only mine wasn't fanfiction, it was a script I had been intending on handing in as part of my work for my degree. It's shitty when it happens, and even shittier when you can do nothing about it! So trust me, I can imagine how you must have felt at the time. To be honest though, unless you found someone you trusted enough to go back through this and correct any mistakes you happened to have made and missed, (in which case, I'm happy you found someone to trust!) then I really don't see what you are worried about! You're grammar and spelling is really not that bad, the only mistakes I could spot were mistakes anyone could have made, and were probably typos that were overlooked before posting!

    So, seriously, you have a really good story here, and any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes you may have made certainly did not detract from the story! I'm not really making a good case for myself to be your beta here am I? Lol! If not, then I truly do understand, and I would like you to know, that a) I'm British, so feel free to email me anyway if you feel unsure over a Britishism you wish to use, or any slang/geography queries and b) I have a degree in Creative Writing so any other questions you may have, then again, feel free to ask. I really do enjoy your fics and I apologise if this review either insults you in anyway (trust me, that was not my intention) or seems a bit rambling (I may have had one too many cups of coffee)!!

    Ate
    xx
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  • From ANON - dhh on December 15, 2008
    Hey there,

    I LOVED EVERYTHING about this story..Esp the bashing and destroying of their magical core...


    I wished you'd do a sequel of somekind..

    Sincerely,
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  • From redrubycutie on November 22, 2008
    i loved im sad that its finished but the story was great.
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  • From firefoxzr on November 14, 2008
    this was an amazing story.i just wish there was a story about Dante and his mate. The whole story was amazing. i have read so many fanfictions this has got to be one in my top ten favorites. good job. can't wait to read other stories you write

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  • From ANON - Kilala_babe20 on October 27, 2008
    Hay that was a great story i loved it, dominic tayler is my 5 month olds name that is crazy
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  • From ANON - Jen-el on October 21, 2008
    Omg i almost started to cry at the end to. it prob. didnt help that i was listing to a sad song. lol. back to the point of the review:-) i love this story. it only took of three days to read. and thats really good for me that i didnt hetyw phone tooken away when i was reading in my classes. i really liked the plot and the pairings. just one thing i didnt like was that gorge and fred lost their core takin out. even though the family was accepting money. dint harry give them money too. but other than that. i cant wait to read more from you.
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  • From ANON - mirbabe on October 08, 2008
    Hi There,

    I wanted to ask if you write by another name at hpfandom.net? I just read a story over there that is remarkably similar to 'a chance at happiness.' The story at hpfandom is Perfect Bliss by VioletFatality. I believe your story was written 1st (if this is not you as well) as the author at hpfandom has only been a member since last month and that is the only story. There are exact details such as the goblin Matterhorn and the gringotts scene. Thanks for any information!

    mirbabe
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  • From animefreakchelsea on September 28, 2008
    oh!oh! They know and they're there!
    Oh!
    Awsome start though some things could use some tweaking. Your rushing a bit, and not putting enouogh detail or reaction into them. be careful about that.
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  • From ANON - Kat Chadwick on September 26, 2008
    OMG I LOVED THIS STORY I ORIGINALLY FOUND IT ON FANFICTION AND I WAS OBSESSED WITH IT, THEN I FOUND OUT IT WAS EDITED AND I DECIDED I COULD NOT LIVE WITH OUT THE FULL STORY. IM SAD IT'S OVER AND I KNOW YOU ALREADY SAID YOU WERE MOVING ON TO OTHER THINGS, BUT I WAS WONDERING IF YOU HAD ANY PLANS TO MAKE A FIC ABOUT DANTE? I BELEIVE IT WOULD MAKE FOR AN AMAZING READ. AND IM SURE THAT EVERY ONE ELES WHO READ THE STORY WOULD AGREE WITH ME. OR EVEN A SEQUEL FOCUSING REMUS AND HIS SEXY MATE. I DO BELEIVE YOU RAISED BEYOND THE LEVELS OF THE CHALLANGE 'FIRST KISS' AGAIN I LOVED THIS STORY. I HAD BEEN DEBATING WITH MYSELF IF I REALLY WANTED TO READ IT AND IN A SHEER ACT OF DESSPIRATION TO FIND AN ACTUALL WITH GRACE AND BEAUTY AND DRAMA I DECIDED TO GIVE IT A SHOT AND IM SO HAPPY I HAVE FEW STORIES ARE AS WELL WRITTEN AS THIS. THANKS FOR THE AMAZING STORY!!!!! FEEL FREE TO EMAIL ME BACK.
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  • From hpobsession on September 25, 2008
    This was a really great story. I was kind of skeptical of the Harry/Voldemort ship when I first ventured to start reading it, but this is the first completed fic I have read of this pairing and I simply love it. I love the way you portrayed all the characters in this fic and if there was a sequel in the air for it i would love to read it. I definitely think you should try to get your original work published. I look forward to more fics from you. Good Luck.
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  • From MistressOfMalfoy on September 22, 2008
    *hugs you* Thank you so much for this story, i'm so glad you decided to take on my challenge.

    I really enjoyed reading this, I am sorry to see it finish but i'm glad you were inspired by my idea.

    Thank you again.
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