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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From hpobsession on April 13, 2008
    so need Chapter 21!! Harry rubbed his stomach at least twice, is he pregnant already??????
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  • From ANON - Bones on April 12, 2008
    As always all of your chapter was well written...
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  • From ANON - Bones on April 12, 2008
    yet another well written chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bones on April 12, 2008
    Well whoever did such a mean and stuipd thing will proably end up having something similar happen or will never be able to write a desent story of their own. sides you don't need a beta you are doing just fine by yourself, this story is very well written.
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  • From Ravenheart on April 10, 2008
    First review with the new penname! Ha!

    Anyhow, I was a bit disappointed with the slash bit. It was too technical. A bit like B-rated porn you know? A bit stiff.
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  • From ANON - Nimmie on April 10, 2008
    Hi! This is great story...I really love it. Keep on writing :). Serverus is very cute as a dad!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 10, 2008
    Oooooooooh wonderful mating scene, I absolutely adore it when Voldemort goes possesive on Harry. I would love to hear how Harry's family will react when they finally find out about it, I get the feeling that James will coddle his baby and someone from Harry's family will give him some sex advice lol. Cant wait for more lovely updates
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  • From ANON - Celeste on April 10, 2008
    Oooo... they finally mates. Do I sense a preggers Harry? what with the touching the tummy and all. *Bounce excitedly*
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  • From Jan on April 10, 2008
    OMG! Is Harry pregnant? (Oh, his fathers are going to kill him!
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  • From voldemortsgrl on April 10, 2008
    Is Harry pregnant? What is that shadow that is in the chamber? Is it Ginny? Can't they just kill her? More please...
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  • From dominique1 on April 10, 2008
    that was yummy i hope that harry body is preparing for a child
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  • From Ladyroo88 on April 10, 2008
    Love it!!! Was harry putting his hand on his stomach because hes preggers??? ohhh more please!!
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  • From redrubycutie on April 10, 2008
    That was a cool lemon i like it very much cant wait for the next chapter!
    Ruby
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  • From on April 09, 2008
    Yay, lemon we love lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I liked the chapter and the lemon as you can see.
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  • From Bastian on April 09, 2008
    L-O-V-E-D THE LEMON!!! Ohhh so hot! Not too long at all! And the bit with Snape walkin in on them, very funny. Though it woulda been funnier if they had been in a bit more of an intimate act, but then it woulda ruined their first time as well. I do have my guesses as far as Harry's stomach pains go, but I am going to just have to wait and see exactly where you are taking that. Although I am going to have to go back and re-read the chapter where it was explained to Harry what type of creature he might turn out to be because I have forgotten, shame on me I know :(, and I am not quite sure what he is at the moment.

    So I am off to re-read and see if it was mentioned or if he is something all together different. Great chapter and I am definitely looking forward to your next update and hopefully more lemons.



    Oh yeah and I wouldn't mind reading any James/Severus/Lucius and Draco/Sirius side stories as well if you were to write them I would definitely be reading and reviewing. Only it should be in this section I believe because I might not find them if you put them somewhere else and that would make me sad. :( Sorry if I am rambling I've been awake for over 24 hours and I am on a sugar high trying not to fall asleep too earlier. Anyway much love and looking forward to more!
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