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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From Selera on April 05, 2008
    This is such a lovely story. Keep up the work and sorry for not responding sooner.
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  • From ANON - NickyNakole on April 01, 2008
    I am in love with this fic! =^^= Please update as soon as you can! The suspense is killing me!
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  • From DravanaMyst on March 31, 2008
    I cannot wait until you update this story. I hope Tom hurts Ginny for the potion. I do hope that you will do the one-shots for the other pairings.
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  • From ANON - Sofia Ottoman on March 31, 2008
    This is a rather interesting story so far, I've really enjoyed reading it. There are a few places where the dialogue and the story don't flow perfectly but other than that I think you've done a really good job with the story (this is in response to your remark about people thinking you need a beta, because personally I think you're fine without one. If you want one, and that's totally up to you, rather than trying fanfiction[dot]net I'd look at Perfect Imagination but that's all I'm going to say as it isn't really my place to say anything). Anyway, moving on to the actual review and away from my ramblings. I love the way you've written Harry in this on the whole, he's a fantastic character. I also loved the way that although Harry is a submissive to Voldemort you've written it so that he doesn't roll over at Voldemort's first command unless he wants to. I think in many ways this is a more realistic portrayal of Harry's character. I also loved the way you wrote Draco. Although I must admit in some ways I am slightly uneasy about everyone's seemingly easy acceptance of first Harry finding out Severus and Lucius are two thirds of this biological parents and that Voldemort and Harry are mates. I know this is completely a subjective thing, but I thought Harry would have fought more about it... but then Harry has always wanted a family, so I guess in that respect the way you wrote his reaction was true to form. I realize that this may sound critical but I don't really mean it that way, I'm just trying to talk about the areas which I don't think are as great as the rest of your fic. That sounds just as bad, doesn't it? I don't want to offend you (and I apologize if I have) but I wanted to offer you my thoughts. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter, and I would just like to say that for a first fic this isn't bad. - Sofia
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  • From Auroawinter on March 30, 2008
    Im sorry to hear about your experience with Beta'a its really a shame that someone could do that to someone else. Im a long time silent reader who figured she would give ya some encouragment. Great story Im totally lovin it.. its really hard to find good Harry/Voldie stories.

    Anyway keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter ^_^

    Ja ne!
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  • From alma on March 30, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From Ravenheart on March 30, 2008
    I'm very, very very interested in the Lucius/James/Severus pairing!!!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on March 30, 2008
    Nice Chapter...WOW thats some messed up stuff with the Beta...sorry to hear that
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 30, 2008
    Good story. A one-shot of the other pairings would be nice.
    update
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  • From Ladyroo88 on March 30, 2008
    I love your story!! I am soo sorry about your stupid beta!! anyway can't wait for more!!
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  • From Vittani on March 30, 2008
    good chapter. dont worry about the beta thing. i personally dont really think you need one. N im sorry about the beta nicking your work. i dont really like using a beta myself but for different reasons. if i want to improve my writing i think it makes more sense for me to check it myself than to let someone else do it cos then i might not bother. and it does save time as well. I like to get chapters out the moment i finish them. having said that i listen to peoples comments and i think thats the best way to go.

    Loved the chamber, n dont worry about forgetting the portraits, it happens.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on March 30, 2008
    Damn...someone stole your story? That sucks...well, this is a really good story so far. What is up with Harry? Did Dumblefuck do something to him? Was it something he ate? Can Voldemort kill Ginny? She's a bit too obsessed with Harry..more please
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 30, 2008
    Why do I think that, cause I want some hot Voldemort/Harry action and I want Ginny to go poof and disappear for good :D

    Ooooooooooh why was Harry's stomach twinging(sp?), is he pregnant or was there some kind of spell they used on him or a potion, I am curious. My my I find it cute that Voldemort is so protective of his mate :D
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  • From dominique1 on March 29, 2008
    no i want sev/harry a good sev cheats on harry and harry is like preg and sev doesn't know back to this chapter i love it and i will say it again i don't care about you not having a beta the plot and story run smooth that all that matter and over course up dating reg
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  • From on March 28, 2008
    See, I told you, I would review all the time.
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