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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From on March 17, 2008
    I LIKED WHAT YOU DID TO DUDLEY AND AS FOR THE TORTURE IT WAS GOOD.
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  • From dominique1 on March 16, 2008
    i really like this story. i can't wait for dumble ro herm to be punish please up date soon.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on March 15, 2008
    I love it!! Yeah they got what they deserve!! Whta will harry's reaction be??

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  • From Vittani on March 15, 2008
    creative and different, he didnt dismember them or the other usual stuff. Good chapter.
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on March 15, 2008
    Wow OK, I've spent most of the afternoon and night reading this because it got me hooked! I can't wait for another update, this story is excellent. The only piece of criticism I have is to work on your punctuation, everything else is fine it's just that you tend to leave out a lot of ',' (comma marks) and it interrupts the flow of a sentence. If you are unsure of where to place a comma in a sentence, I have two points of advice on that: 1. Get a beta reader to go over it and check it for you, not just the punctuation but everything while they're there. 2. If you're not a beta kind of person and you like to upload pretty much as soon as you finish writing, I'd suggest reading over your work and reading it how you would actually say everthing, and when you pause in a sentence, that's where to add the comma.

    But on another note, I love the pairings in this! They are quite different to your average fic, especially for a creature fic. I mean Draco and Sirius? Not a pairing I would have thought of but it works!

    So yeah, I can't wait for an update, please do so ASAP and I will love you forever
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From darkFaerie161 on March 15, 2008
    lovely
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  • From cocoke5 on March 15, 2008
    that was great chapter and i love it. can not wait for more of the story and see what happen next when no one will not know what happen to them. and i can not wait to see what you have happen to the next one. good luck on the story and i will be wait for more. up date soon.

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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 15, 2008
    Ohohohohohoho that would be nice. I wonder how badly Sirius will hurt Pansy. Hmmmmm Voldemort seemed somewhat kind to the Durselys but I guess they will get what they deserve in Azkaban.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on March 15, 2008
    More please...I was hoping that the Dursleys were going to be tortured. Well, they still could in Azkaban...this is really good so far. How many chapters until Harry gets to see Voldemort in person again? I hope it's soon. What about Draco and Sirius? They make a cute couple...well, please update soon.
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  • From Silkylove on March 15, 2008
    so good, can't wait to see what awaits them in the next chapter. Poor harry and tom not getting more time together in person. Maybe you chould make it that he can see harry on one of the hogsmead weekends..did i spell that right? lol. Anyways love it tons keep the chapters coming!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Celeste on March 13, 2008
    Ooo. *Bounce Bounce* This is gettin more fun by the chapter. I would love to see what punishment is dealt to the Dursleys. *Smile*
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on March 13, 2008
    woohooo...Im so loving this fic.
    Love the contest/award the Dursley won.
    Oh.....so cant wait for their fates.
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  • From ANON - Huntresss on March 12, 2008
    The punishment for Dudley should be a HEALTHY diet and strict exercise regime... a very strict punishing exercise regime. Oh and not to forget the counseling and behavior modificiating ... I believe Dudley acted as he did because his parents told him it was proper... Tom needs to let him know in very implicit terms that they were wrong.

    I don't think Voldemort should kill or permenatently maim the dursleys. I know he wants to because they hurt his Mate but I honestly think Harry would feel bad about it. BUT a good punishing well that would likely please everyone. Vernon could use a healthful diet and exercise plan too.. not to forget the pain and anguish for every bad thought about the boy/fREAK and freaks ingeneral.

    I honestly couldn't tell you what to do to Petunia as she's overly skinney and clean freak its hard to say.. Perhaps - force her to eat a good diet with moderate exercise so she doesn't look like an emaciated horse but cause her pain for every bad thought towards harry and "freaks" ingeneral.

    Have you thought about possibly having Harry get resorted or request a private room? I don't see him doing well in his present circumstances.

    Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From on March 11, 2008
    I just love this chapter, I can't wait for what Tom does to the dursleys
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  • From sanda on March 11, 2008
    good chapter
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